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Reviewer: waj Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/29/07 10:47 am Title: A Fly on the Wall

LOL!! That was sooo funny....I love these guys, thanx for writing this.

Author's Response: Aww yay! I'm glad you enjoyed it Waj :O)

Reviewer: Tri Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/07/07 01:51 pm Title: A Fly on the Wall

Haha, that was great. You had me laughing all through it.

Author's Response: YAY!

Reviewer: Leigh Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/10/07 08:45 am Title: A Fly on the Wall

I LOVED it! I could not stop laughing the entire time I was reading it! Great job using only dialogue. I could follow it pretty easily. And nice ending, too... ;-)

Author's Response: It was hard doing that! Thanks, i'm glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: BSB_Writer Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/29/07 02:50 pm Title: A Fly on the Wall

That was amazing! You are a very talented writer, that is for sure. I especially loved the end - I wonder what important thing he had to reveal? LOL Love it!

Author's Response: Thanks! I know, I wonder that too! lol

Reviewer: honey Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/26/07 12:53 am Title: A Fly on the Wall

Haha that was entertaining! And probably not very easy to do. Dialog is fun, but really hard. And to go for so long without me getting confused at all? Very impressive :)

Author's Response: Thanks Kelly

Reviewer: trubsbfan79 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/25/07 12:32 am Title: A Fly on the Wall

Loved it

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: MonkeyAbu Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/24/07 07:33 pm Title: A Fly on the Wall

Mare! You suck! Should have figured that there would be a cliffhanger at the end. But this was freakin hilarious and I do believe you did a rather good job at working with just dialogue. I enjoyed it. Had my moments of laughing too. Once again as most of us BSB fanfic writers do, you depicted Nick as an immature dork/retard/idiot/etc which like always, fit perfectly. There were a few moments that I got caught up in reading it and had some difficulties following who was saying what, but after rereading some of the lines, I got it all sorted out. But all in all, I enjoyed this piece! Good job! [Ashley]

Author's Response: Thanks Ashley, i'm glad that overall it wasn't that confusing for you and of course I had to leave some kind of cliffie, like duh... lol I try not to portray Nick that way because honestly I don't think he's any of those things lol so i'm kind of sad he came across that way in this. *pets Nick* sorry buddy! lol

Reviewer: chelsea Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/24/07 07:00 am Title: A Fly on the Wall

LMAO. AWESOME.

Author's Response: Yay! thanks!

Reviewer: Anita Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/24/07 02:17 am Title: A Fly on the Wall

that was so funny great job i loved it more!

Author's Response: Thanks Anita!

Reviewer: QueenOfConfusion98 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/23/07 09:33 pm Title: A Fly on the Wall

AAAAIIIIIRRRRRRRRRR!!! I love it, thank you Mare!

Author's Response: lmao thanks!

Reviewer: AJ Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/23/07 10:49 am Title: A Fly on the Wall

i just want to say that i can uncode Nick's coded messages with both my eyes closed while humming the joe the stunted pig song. i really do. but despite all this, im giving you a 10, because a. you're a great writer. b. you make howie sounds stupid sometimes c. you made us remind brian to at least mention kevin as his cousin once d. we get to call Kevin 'dickweed'. and hey, i may have shot the sherrif, but i did not kill the fly on the wall yo.

Author's Response: sure you can AJ lol Thanks for all those compliments though *teenies* and if you didn't kill that fly, who did? It was Howie wasn't it? Always stealth D! lol

Reviewer: Maggie Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/23/07 04:49 am Title: A Fly on the Wall

LOL. Oh that was hilarious.

Author's Response: Thanks Maggie!

Reviewer: Reemo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/23/07 04:10 am Title: A Fly on the Wall

lol I like the ending its so funny , and why is Nick being mean to them??and who is posting as an obsessed older fan that’s afraid of Howie ?? lol

Author's Response: Nick must have been in a mood and AJ posts on a MB as an older obsessed Howie fan lol in my story anyway :OP lol

Reviewer: Just Marina Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/23/07 04:06 am Title: A Fly on the Wall

That was GREAT! Very well done, mare. It's definitely not easy to write a story only with dialogue and then you had 4 people there, but you did it so well that I knew who was the one talking all the time (Nick is the easist one to figure out, he is soo funny and cute). And you did it without having to put a name in every sentence, using their names enough so we don't get lost but without sounding repetitive. And then I LOVE the Hoowie part hahaha And of course you already know that the “Oh yeah, like thanks for abandoning us dickweed!” had me laughing like crazy. And the ending was perfect. Another amazing story :D


Author's Response: Thanks Maria! I'm glad you were able to figure out who was saying what because sometimes I got confused lol

Reviewer: mersey Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/23/07 03:54 am Title: A Fly on the Wall

OMG AJ YOU MEAN MEAN FLY ON THE WALL KILLER YOU!!!!!!!! it could have been a fan darn it! a GENIUS fan who found a way to morph itself into a fly so we can finally find out what's going on behind closed doors and you just have to kill it don't you? ugh.


*is looking forward to the word 'alleviate' in the liner notes*


I just checked with Howie, he said that's not a morphing fan aj killed, it's a fly that was bugged by a fan. Sam difference Howie, Same difference! lol


Author's Response: Can you imagine if there realy is the word alleviate in there? Or if he really rhymes everything? lmao that would be freaky deaky!