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Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/23/07 03:24 am Title: A Fly on the Wall

Evil cliffy - lol. Though, I LOVED the whole "Hoowie" bit! Roflmao!!!!!

You always write such humorous stories! Well, the ones that are meant to have humor are always humorous! Lol.

~Your #1 Fan [hahahahaha]~
~Lenni~

Author's Response: LMAO thanks Lenni

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/23/07 01:51 am Title: A Fly on the Wall

“Oh yeah, like thanks for abandoning us dickweed!” TOTALLY lmao! Nice I really liked that, good job, and I've been waitin' for that Scars chapter...why do you torture me so? (hehe) The other best line...
“Don’t tell me you are doing a gay ass code thing again Nick.”
“You just hate them because you can’t figure them out AJ.” Again, totally! Only because we all know that it's probably true. ; )

Author's Response: Sorry Sam lol I am about three pages into the new Scars chapter. hopefully by the end of the week you'll get a new chapter. :O) And yes I bet AJ does get confused with the codes lmao

Reviewer: starbeamz2 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/23/07 01:15 am Title: A Fly on the Wall

LMAO Mare! I just died! I died at the part about the messageboards because I know who you're talking about and LMAO it was awesome! Dialogue itself is really hard to write so I can't imagine the torture it must have been to write JUST dialogue for an entire story. Fabulous job, if I do say so myself. And I do (hee-hee).

Now if only we knew what Howie was about to announce...

Author's Response: hehehe I couldn't resist, when you annoy me you end up in my stories lmao and I had to end it somewhat with a cliffy! It was torture lol I had to stop myself from writing 'he said' a few times. lol

Reviewer: BSBfan4ever Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/22/07 09:55 pm Title: A Fly on the Wall

lol that was good, you should continue this as the fly Series.

Author's Response: lmao the fly series? sounds interesting...shall think about it.

Reviewer: Purpura Lipstick Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/22/07 09:44 pm Title: A Fly on the Wall

Heh, I love the line "Nicky if you still didn't write like you were in the fifth grade" .. lol... great one.

That was cute and different. I think you did a fine job writing all in dialogue, tis a hard thing to do not having any description in the story. *high fives*

Author's Response: Aww thanks Lore *high fives back* it was quite a bitch I have to say lol

Reviewer: felikia2009 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/22/07 08:44 pm Title: A Fly on the Wall

LMAO! i loved it! it was so much fun trying to follow along with who was who :)

Author's Response: LOL that was the hardest part, trying to write without saying he said etc... hope it wasn't that confusing.

Reviewer: WritersBlock Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/22/07 08:26 pm Title: A Fly on the Wall

lmao thats funny..please post more lol

Author's Response: Aww thanks lol

Reviewer: Nijntje Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/22/07 07:56 pm Title: A Fly on the Wall

Great story!! But WHY did you have to let AJ kill the fly?! Meaniehead!! ;)

Author's Response: hey that rhymes with beaniehead! lmao