Date: 07/13/07 06:40 am Title: Chapter 1
Wow. Excellent writing. Really. The final scene was well-done and totally believeable. It was not overdone and cheesy like some dramatic scenes are. Great job! I can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! It means a lot to me cuz I didn't want it to sound cheesy or cliched at all. I'll try to update soon.
Date: 07/13/07 03:53 am Title: Chapter 1
ooh....I like it.
Date: 07/13/07 02:45 am Title: Chapter 1
AHHHH, awesome first chapter!!!!! I'm into it already. Nice set up of Heather's back story at the beginning, nad the Colleen scene was intense! Omg... totally scary! You did a great job at putting us, the readers, in her place there. Amazing start; can't wait for more!!!
Author's Response: Thanks a lot for reading Julie. I hate first chapters just because of all the back story you have to incoporate into them, so I'm glad you enjoyed the Heather part. I was a lil worried about Colleen's death scene at first, like if it was believable, but now I feel more reassurred. Glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 07/13/07 02:40 am Title: Chapter 1
Ooo! Very good so far... I love it. It's definitely something that's not the "typical" fan fic. I can't wait for more! :D
Author's Response: Yea this was the new, completely different idea that I was telling you about. Glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 07/13/07 02:19 am Title: Chapter 1
Oooooooo very interesting so far! Poor Nick, though, just trying to score, as usual... *cough* Sorry, I went on a tangent there. :) But I really like it.
Author's Response: Ha yea, but in him trying to score he was really trying to save his girlfriend's life! LOL Thanks for the feedback. It means a lot since ths is a new genre for me.
