Date: 08/29/07 01:18 am Title: Chapter 16
OMG an update *does dance* great chapter cant wait for another i loved it. and OH MY GOD you met nick and howie i am sooooooooooo jealous, i would die if i meet nick.
Author's Response: Aw, I'm sorry I kept you waiting! But I think I'm finally back on track, lol. AH! I almost did, haha. I was freakinggg out!!
Date: 08/25/07 08:00 pm Title: Chapter 15
i love the story i so cant wait for another chapter.
Date: 08/19/07 07:51 pm Title: Chapter 15
Love the story so far! I hope that you continue and that Nick remains sweet after the night of love that he just shared with her.
Date: 08/14/07 08:19 am Title: Chapter 15
update asap
Author's Response: Thanks for your review!! Hopefully I'll have another chapter up tomorrow!
Date: 08/12/07 07:47 pm Title: Chapter 15
Awe, I really think that the two of them are going to have a future together! She gave herself to Nick. That was just too adorable and sweet. Nick is so precious with her. I love that.
Haha, I found the Morning Sunshine thing hilarious, oh my. I can't wait to read more. So, when you are moved in and settled, then I'd love it if you write more soon, but moving & getting settled in comes first. :]
Author's Response: Thanks for your review!! I definitely just got all moved in [however, I'm definitely not unpacked yet; I need to work on organization haha] but I will hopefully get a chance to write sometime tonight or tomorrow morning? Thanks for being patient!!
Date: 08/12/07 05:50 am Title: Chapter 15
DAAAYUUMM!!! lol jk that really was a good chappie!
Author's Response: Hehe, thank you!!
Date: 08/12/07 05:39 am Title: Chapter 15
Good update! I think things between them will start to heat up more and more. Morning sunshine...man I would've mortified lol
Have fun moving in! I get to move in in 2 weeks eep!
Author's Response: Haha, I know! I think I was embarrassed for Gen just writing that, lmao. Thanks! I'm so excited!
Date: 08/12/07 05:31 am Title: Chapter 15
great chapter
Author's Response: Thanks for your review!!
Date: 08/11/07 05:13 pm Title: Chapter 14
love your story.would love sexual content
cant wait for an update
Author's Response: Thanks for your input!
There will hopefully be another chapter out within the next few days.
Date: 08/11/07 04:20 pm Title: Chapter 14
Awe, Nick is so sweet to Gen. She's so nervous and the little 'speech' about always wanting to lose her virginity to someone she trusted like Nick was just too sweet. Ah, I think you should go for the visual. It'll be a nice touch to the story. It will give it another boost towards realistic.
Great chapter! I loved it. Write more soon, please. :]
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review & input! I'm definitely going to write the scene; I'm hoping to get the next chapter out tonight, but I'm moving out of my home tomorrow and it might be slightly crazy? Haha, but I promise to try my hardest!! Writing is a WONDERFUL distraction from packing =]
Date: 08/11/07 09:10 am Title: Chapter 14
go for it! haha why not? love the chapter, they seem to be really in loveee!
Author's Response: Lol, okay! Thanks for your review!!
Date: 08/11/07 07:22 am Title: Chapter 14
I say go for the visual, why not. It's really good so far!
Author's Response: Thanks for your review!!
Date: 08/11/07 05:34 am Title: Chapter 14
oh my that was a great chapter. i think it is good to have one very visual sex scene but it is up to you to i can wait for another chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you!! Yeah, I think I will...the next chapter should be out [hopefully] today.
Date: 08/11/07 12:04 am Title: Chapter 13
Awww! must read more! lol
Author's Response: Thank you for your review!! Hopefully I'll get another chapter out tonight. Things are going to start to get crazy for me because I'm heading back to school for my fall semester. Plus, I have to keep up with writing for a newspaper, as well. But I will definitely try to update as much as possible!
Date: 08/10/07 10:36 pm Title: Chapter 13
Another cliffhanger, ahh. That's going to drive me insane. I would call in sick for Nick because he 'needs' me, hehe. Awe, I loved how Nick was being all sweet and romantic with the picnic. I can't wait to see what happens next, so please write more really soon. :]
Great chapter!
Author's Response: Haha, I'm sorry!! I'll try to have another chapter out shortly!
