Date: 08/03/07 01:33 am Title: Chapter 1
okay, the last one “Dude seriously, that’s even more fucked up than yesterday’s.” totally had me giggling to myself, lol... great story *2-thumbs up* and now me wants some ice-cream!!! and yesh, please update since its not completed yet right?
Date: 08/02/07 08:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow-O-Wow. I'd have been scared shitless! I'd prolly never talk agin! No idea & hope to God I never find out~ Eep!
Poor Nick! Poor A.J.! *grumbles about the asshole who shot Nicky*
Great fic though. Even if Nicky once more is the victim of a fan fiction-lol.
Date: 08/02/07 01:49 pm Title: Chapter 1
am sooooo thirsty for your story its just my fave cup of fiction (Nick badly hurt) I love it so much and that you chose Aj to be with him thanx a lot and update sooon
Date: 08/02/07 10:46 am Title: Chapter 1
Awesome story! I'm just wondering if this is completed or not.. It seems like it's finished, or is that just me? I had no trouble with the time-travelling between fragments by the way. And this was hilarious >
There were the normal gasping noises that came with the goldfish in a bowl look
Great job Mersey! Great job, as always...
Date: 08/02/07 09:48 am Title: Chapter 1
You know what this kind of reminds me of?!? Mare's story "All I Wanted Was Some Cough Medicine."
Damn Mers, do ya know how long I've been waiting for a story/update from you?!? I've asked about suspenseful stories in the forum, and Mare suggested you but I read most of your stories already.
THIS story has definitely caught my attention!! I LOVE it, it's so sad, yet comical at times. Like, Nick's tongue twister in the beginning, I think I remember seeing that on the tray paper at Burger King. I love the interaction you have going between Nick and AJ, and it makes me wonder how or even why Nick struggles with normal speech, yet he's the shit when it comes to tongue twisters... o_O
At first I was confused, but it all played out well in the end, and I really can't wait to read more. Please girl, don't keep us waiting!! ;) Good job Mers!!