Date: 09/04/07 06:25 am Title: Chapter 1: Mixed Signals
great start... cant wait to see whats next.. nick is a nice character here... and also funny.. keep on writing!
Date: 09/04/07 12:06 am Title: Chapter 1: Mixed Signals
A very captivating start to a story. You have definitely drawn my attention and I look forward to reading more in the near future. I especially enjoyed the way you seemed to write Nick's character out as somewhat impish yet hesitant at the same time and Dani had her own sense of mysteriousness yet in a not so obvious manner. They seem like total opposites which when thought about allows them to click. Good job and please update soon! [Ashley]
Date: 09/03/07 05:20 pm Title: Chapter 1: Mixed Signals
I liked it! I loved how it's being told from Nick's first person point of view. I think it's always more interesting to hear what he's thinking all the time.
Haha, maybe if I start reading from the BEGINNING of one of your stories, I'll be able to keep track, hmm?
I can't wait to see where it goes from here... :D
Date: 09/03/07 04:06 pm Title: Chapter 1: Mixed Signals
I like the way the story is starting, Sounds like "Just Friends" the movie with Ryan Reynolds. One of my favorite movies, and to read a story with one of my favorite groups.. Great start!!
Date: 09/03/07 12:40 pm Title: Chapter 1: Mixed Signals
UH HUH, you shouldn't be doing another story.... but I'll forgive ya!!!!
I'm loving this so far, I always love how it goes from narrative thoughts to the actual story, covers all bases and sucks you right in LOL
I love it so I want some more... but don't forget about your other one too ;D
