Date: 08/07/08 10:38 am Title: Chapter 2
i love it :)
its really great chapter
will you update soon?
Date: 11/24/07 12:35 pm Title: Chapter 2
Oh this chapter lol I thought it was done already! lmao thanks for the visual images if the boex and lmao at the snake one. I can't believe that dodge ball one is real. I thought you made that up.
Too cute and i'm glad to see this turning into a multi chaptered fic! *whispers* needs the last chapter of Fear Factor please! lol ;o) great job!
Date: 11/24/07 10:59 am Title: Brothers In Arms
Yay Spain, that's where I'm from :D
Date: 11/22/07 11:31 am Title: Brothers In Arms
I loved this one, but I already told you that. You are one of the best when it comes to writing interactions with the boys. You don't always lay things out for us because you're talented enough to not have to do that. The subtlety of the dialogue and descriptions are what sets you way above the top. Excellent job and see, now you have to write more on this one een though I know it was meant as a one shot! :OP