Date: 09/22/08 10:31 pm Title: Chapter 29: Touring Package
awsome and amazingly done. i so cant wait for more and the wedding hehe. is this the last story in this series?
Author's Response:
no this isn't the last story in the series, but it's the final "future/present" story everything AFTER this will be the prequels which i have 2 planned thanks so much for reading!
Date: 09/22/08 04:00 am Title: Chapter 29: Touring Package
Awww, good chapter:) I love that they're continuing to figure each other out. It cracks me up that they read each other so well!
Can't wait for more!!
Author's Response: hehe thankees! more to come soon!
Date: 09/22/08 03:56 am Title: Chapter 29: Touring Package
GRRR....for some reason my original feedback wouldn't post. I think it is super sweet how moving Mary was a family affair, I love how they all come together so often in this story. I also love the simplicity of the birthday celebration, that it wasn't about getting it on...or even gifts, just about them wanting to be with each other...guys do actually think like this sometimes, and it is refreshing to see it, especially in a FF. I still get a little kick out of the fact that Dr. Drew is their therapist - I chuckle a little at the mental image - but throughout this story, some of my most favorite scenes have been of Nick and Alyssa in therapy. I love the way they get so honest there...I loved Dr. Drew's summation of his theory on what is going on! Super job hun, keep up the great work and update soon!!!
Author's Response: ee! Yes i lurve Dr. Drew myself. He's just so perfect for them. I saw him do therapy with a couple that hadn't had sex in 2 years on loveline once and from then on I was sold that he's a relationship GENIUS. Thanks for reading sweets!
Date: 09/22/08 02:43 am Title: Chapter 29: Touring Package
wow. they have such intense emotions with each other. le sigh. to be so lucky. cant wait for more.
Author's Response: aww yay! i'm glad you like their intensity. they've worked so hard to get to this point! i'm very proud of them hehe. thanks for reading!
Date: 09/22/08 02:27 am Title: Chapter 29: Touring Package
good chapter. keep it coming
Author's Response: thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Date: 09/01/08 05:39 am Title: Chapter 28: The Calm Before The Storm
Nick and Alyssa are so silly. Lol. I loved the little cat and mouse game between them. They crack me up:) haha.
I also loved the steamy scene toward the end. You were definitely not jokin about that. lol.
I can't get over how great of a writer you are! I love the way you word things. The way you can portray how strongly they feel for each other just in a hand on the thigh, or them holding hands...it's seriously what I think love should really be:) There you go making me want a boyfriend again...lol.
I'm writing a fic of my own right now, and I always get inspired to write after reading one of your updates:)
Author's Response: aww you get inspired when you read my stuff? How awesome is that! Thank you for the compliments! Keep em coming!! hehe. If only real boyfriends could be as good eh?
Date: 08/28/08 11:21 pm Title: Chapter 28: The Calm Before The Storm
I love this story, the way they are together is awesome. update soon, when is the wedding.
Author's Response: The wedding is comming up soon, in the next few chapters! I hope you'll stay tuned!
Date: 08/28/08 09:34 pm Title: Chapter 28: The Calm Before The Storm
i so loved it. they are so cute together. i cant wait for the wedding. update soon. amazing chapter...
Author's Response: aren't they? even when they're playing around they're kinda cute. it's why i adore them lol! thanks again for another review!
Date: 08/28/08 02:44 pm Title: Chapter 28: The Calm Before The Storm
You got it finished! YAY! I love the interaction between the two of them, they have a fun banter going on!!! Keep up the good work sweets!
Author's Response: it's hard to write good banter like that sometimes, as you know. but other times it just flows who knows eh? thanks for reading sweets and for all your help!!
Date: 08/28/08 02:27 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Turn Of The Tide
Great chapter!
Date: 08/25/08 05:46 am Title: Chapter 27: Gone Country
Awww, cute and laid back chapter:) I liked it! Can't wait for more!
By the way, just so you know, reading yours stories make me want a boyfriend SO bad...lol. I'm always like "Awww...I wanna cuddle like Nick and Alyssa!" lol. Yes, pathetic I know. HA!
Author's Response: aw you're not pathetic! yah this chapter is cute and laidback, the next one is gonna get super steamy though hehe!
Date: 08/23/08 07:51 pm Title: Chapter 27: Gone Country
Like I said it before Nick is so whipped, but in a cute way. I'm anxious to see what the new tour is going to bring. I'm also curious as to what Aaron needed Alyssa's advice on. Nice job!
Author's Response: yeah i wasn't sure what he was gonna need her advice on either, but i'll figure that out too LOL.
Date: 08/23/08 07:41 pm Title: Chapter 26: What Happens In Vegas Doesn't Always Stay In Vegas
Hott!!! Very nice chapter. Ha I love Nick calling her a cocktease of course, but you know how much that amuses me and I already told you my shoe fetish observation lol. On a more serious note I love how Alyssa handled the paparazzi. She said all the right things and even when she started to get pissed off she still maintained a certain level of class. Her Paris comment was great! LOl I also am really proud at how comfortable she is seeing Nick w/ other girls. Like when that girl at the party was hitting on him, she laughed it off and just sat back and watched. It really shows just how far she's come. Great job!
Author's Response: yep i knew you'd enjoy the tease comment, and her handling the paps. As far as other girls, she knows he's going home with her so it doesn't bother her that another girl tries futilly to get with her man! lol thanks hon!
Date: 08/23/08 09:06 am Title: Chapter 27: Gone Country
awsome job. i loved cant wait for more.
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it! Took me foreer to get it all out lol Thanks hon!
Date: 08/23/08 05:43 am Title: Chapter 27: Gone Country
Another fantabulous chapter! I love the little Brandon reference and that Alyssa gave Nick a little smoocharoo at the end to reassure him. As always, I love the small things you do to portray Nick's feelings for her, and I adore all of the interaction! Great stuff, keep it coming! Hugs!
Author's Response: yeah the interaction is definitely a big deal for them. And I had to use a brandon ref. Can't make em so happy and not remind em of how they got there. Thanks for reading!!
