Date: 06/17/09 12:48 am Title: "Don't Wanna Lose You Now" by Julie (rewritten)
Oh my god, I'm gonna cry! That was wonderful!
Date: 06/24/08 07:23 pm Title: "Don't Wanna Lose You Now" by Julie (rewritten)
I would have to call that an amazing recovery. Your rewrite gave me chills and a lump in my throat. Well done.
Date: 06/05/08 03:46 am Title: Always (The hopfully better version!)
ok, i get it now....i guess I missed in the first one that the POV changed from the girl (Willow?) to Nick. This one was much easier to understand. Sounds like a very interesting fanfic.
Date: 06/05/08 03:29 am Title: Always (Cringe!)
ok, so I have no idea what is going on here.....maybe the rewritten will make it more clear.
Date: 06/05/08 01:46 am Title: Always (The hopfully better version!)
Great rewrite! I like how you added the intro to it and some more at the end, and more detail and whatnot throughout. The first version seemed mostly like dialogue and lyrics, but this one had some more narration along with it. Great job!
Date: 06/04/08 03:40 am Title: Don't Want To Lose You Now (Part Deux - Rewritten version)
see, now this makes me wanna read the story....good rewrite.
Date: 06/04/08 03:35 am Title: Don't Want to Lose You Now (Yes there's another one! Original Version) by Mel
wow mel. I would have never guessed this was your writing. Every once in a while I go back and read my first fan fic, and it is terrible, but I can't get myself to mess with it. It is perfect in all of it's cheesiness!
Date: 06/04/08 03:29 am Title: Divisions Of Reality 1st chapter (rewritten)
this is good too....I don't knwo which version I like better.
Date: 06/04/08 03:20 am Title: Divisions Of Reality 1st chapter (cringe worthy)
honestly, this isn't bad to begin with. I wouldn't call it cringe worthy.
Date: 06/04/08 03:07 am Title: "Don't Wanna Lose You Now" by Julie (rewritten)
i would have to say I like the original better...j/j... great rewrite!!!
Date: 06/04/08 02:59 am Title: Don't Want To Lose You Now (Part Deux - Rewritten version)
Great job on the rewrite, Mel! Gotta love our teenybopper days, eh? I like how you added a lot more description to Melissa's condition. It helped us get a little more feeling for the character rather than just "she's having surgery. yup." Hehe. I liked it a lot!
Date: 06/03/08 04:23 am Title: "Don't Wanna Lose You Now" by Julie (rewritten)
Oh wow you have come a long way in your writing. the first one left me with something missing, but this one explained how well his life had turned out. very good!
Date: 06/03/08 03:58 am Title: "I Want It That Way" By Steph (rewrite)
Ha your original is still better than what i was writing in 99 Steph LOL. It's defintely better though with the added details and good idea taking out Like a Child. The lyrics were a cliche. It's so interesting seeing everyone's work.
Date: 06/03/08 03:55 am Title: "Don't Wanna Lose You Now" by Julie (rewritten)
I loved how you totally changed the ending and made a very boring Epilogue less boring and added a lot more detail to it. And Brianne and Nick? Now that's cringe worthy LOL Please don't tell me Brian and Leighanne called them Frick and Frack? lol
Date: 06/02/08 10:56 pm Title: "Don't Wanna Lose You Now" by Julie (rewritten)
Aww, that was hella sad, but yeah, it almost goes without saying that it was a definite improvement. lol I'm not a big fan of stories where one of the boys actually dies, but Great job.
