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Reviewer: Anita Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/14/11 04:13 am Title: Chapter 2

What a sweet filled chapter Mare. It was very refreshing. I love how they had a heart to heart.

Reviewer: Carlah Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/05/10 07:30 am Title: Chapter 2

Maaaaaan I can't belive I'm reading this al overe again! 3th time! and it¡s SO great! I never left you reviews before cause I didn't had an account lol dumb me, but now I do so u'd have to stand with me lol. God Bless you.

Author's Response: Aww thank you Carlah! I'm glad you have enjoyed this story enough to read it three times. :O)

Reviewer: Sakabelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/21/09 01:26 am Title: Chapter 2

I love their affection for each other. The way you write their relationship is so believable, you can definitely tell that they have a special bond.

Author's Response: thanks!

Reviewer: Anita Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/15/08 03:37 am Title: Chapter 2

yay another great chapter. very heartbreaking but in such a good way.

Author's Response: THanks Anita!

Reviewer: Guitargurl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/13/08 09:55 pm Title: Chapter 2

Awe... Kev and Nicky making up. Cute, cute! Gotta keep reading!

Author's Response: LOL yes, I love me Nick and Kevin cute moments. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: ck Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/04/08 11:12 am Title: Chapter 2

I don´t know you but I love you, Mare !
You rock - this story is superb. Thanks

Author's Response: Aww thanks so much CK!

Reviewer: nicksgal Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/21/08 06:31 am Title: Chapter 2

Awe, love the Kevin/Nick vibe you have going. It's so sweet. And poor Nick being the odd man out now, and Kev being it before. I always used to feel for Kev about that.

I'm glad it's just them now and not the other guys. lol

Also, I didn't mention this last chapter, but it was so uncool for the fans to hate on Kev. I mean, I'm still a little upset about it, but I never hated on him. *sigh*

I think that was all I wanted to say... Oh yeah, the story does seem like it would flow better in first... It already kind of seems that way, just without the thoughts from the guys, you know? Maybe that's just your writing style. lol



Author's Response: Yup, that's what I was thinking too. I just went for third at first because that's how I wrote Fly Fishing but for some reason it wasn't working on this one. I like just having Nick and Kevin too right now. I keep putting off Brian and AJ lmao maybe i'll let them get lost on the way or something.

Reviewer: luna610 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/15/08 05:23 pm Title: Chapter 2

Aw this was sad. I'm glad that they were able to open up and be honest with each other. Poor guys for feeling left out =(. I love the part about Nick not understanding the difference between band time and family time. Considering, his family time...Can't wait for an update!

Author's Response: I really think he has trouble with that in real life. lol

Reviewer: Yara Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/15/08 06:24 am Title: Chapter 2

Great chapter, is good to know that they are already clearing some issues up, and the part where Kev told Nick he was proud of him, it was really nice, how Nick still looks up to Kev and take to heart everything he says to him, like a little brother does in real life, you know, look up to his older brother. I didn't catch a lot of episodes of HOC, was it really that bad? I mean did he seriously had to go to therapy? I know sometimes writers use real life situations and put it on the stories, so I was just wondering about that part.  Hope to read another chapter soon; Take Care!



Author's Response: HOC was pretty bad not as in bad to watch because it was stupid but hard to watch because Nick was having such a hard time. You really got to see how bad his life has been so a lot of it broke my heart. He did say he went into therapy after HOC which helped him, so I went with that. Thanks for the review Yara!

Reviewer: balance Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/14/08 04:58 am Title: Chapter 2

Mare,

One of the things that I find so fascinating when reading Kevin/Nick focus stories is how polar opposite the two seem to be.  Yet, when you look a little deeper, you see a lot of similarities.  You always do a fantastic job of illustrating Kevin and Nick's similarites, in a subtle way.  Bravo!

It's weird....when the rumor of Kevin leaving the group began to surface along with the "buzz" on the "HOC," I jokingly told a friend that Kevin was quitting BSB so he wouldn't be associated with the show.  Afterall, he's lived through it once....why would he want to watch the train wreck.  Kevin's comment in the chapter about watching some parts with one eye is how I would visualize him doing it.....actually, it's how I did it during some parts of that show.

Once again Mare, you have done a wonderful job of bringing these "characters" into the tangible people we believe we know.



Author's Response: Thanks Pammy! I am sure Kevin watched that show. I can't picture him not watching it lol and yes, when i picture him watching HOC i see him cringing with only one eye opened. I watched like that as well many times. Poor Nick.

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/14/08 03:17 am Title: Chapter 2

Growing up does royally suck - especially since it happens so damned fast! Lol.

I love how these two always crack me up endlessly! :D

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

~Lenni~ 



Author's Response: Thanks Lenni!!!!! lol and I will!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Rose Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/14/08 02:36 am Title: Chapter 2

awwwww Kevin's proud of Nick. I love those two. I can so see Nick understanding younger Kevin now that's he's dealt with Aaron's issues, especially during HOC. Good chapter :)

Author's Response: Thanks Rose :O) See, those are words I have wanted to hear come out of Kevin's mouth, so I made sure to make him say it! lmao I have issues.