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Reviewer: luna610 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/01/08 06:41 am Title: Chapter 8

Yay! I wasn't expecting an update because of your warning last time! Ok, this chapter was really funny. A couple things really made me lol: the little skulls on the shoes, the contest between AJ and Nick for Kevin's attention/love, and the part about Brian stealing Nick's Frick. Can't wait for another update.

Author's Response: I can see AJ with his little skulls lol

Reviewer: Yara Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/01/08 05:09 am Title: Chapter 8

Great chapter, I'm laughing my ass off already and they're not all together yet. I know I'm going to love it. AJ and Nick are clowns, lol. Please update soon, Take Care!

Author's Response: LOL aww thanks Yara!

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/01/08 04:01 am Title: Chapter 8

Roflmao!!!!! I love these two! Especially since they kept staring at me during sound check - namely, Brian. :D

And if you set up by the main path, there'll be more trash & crap for you to pick up, Alexander! And more noise, when you're trying to sleep! Lol.

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

~Lenni~

P.S. I got no issues with Leighanne - not since I beat the crap outta her in a dream I had back in 1999-lol. Besides, I hugged her man last Tuesday! :D Though, it was forbidden - haha! 



Author's Response: Lenni are you aware that I wrote a repsonse to the challenge you gave me about Howie?

Reviewer: balance Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/01/08 03:34 am Title: Chapter 8

On my way to see the Boys on the Never Gone tour, I told my friend I thought AJ wanted to be Brian. I was wrong. I think AJ wants what Brian has....the wife, the baby, the career and making it all work.  Brian and AJ seem like such an odd couple! Brian, though at times could be goofy, is usually calm and grounded. AJ, on the other hand, appears to be larger than life. (No pun intended.) But what really had me thinking after reading this chapter was AJ's silent comment of "I took your Frick."  I have to disagree with AJ on this one.  I don't think he took Brian away from Nick; I think Brian distanced himself from Nick.

Well, enough of my rambling.  Again, good chapter Mare. Schools been back in session here for two weeks and we have tomorrow off....yeah!

Pammy Whammy



Author's Response: Thanks PAmmy. I think you're right about Brian which is why i'm having a hard time with him and his self righteous attitude. I do think they are hanging out more now though since Nick has his act together.

Reviewer: Rose Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/01/08 02:55 am Title: Chapter 8

"Because he's Kevin" lmfao, yeah that explains it all. Even the fans understand that one.

I love how AJ wears the most improper shoes ever just because they have cool skulls on them lol. That's just lovely.

Brian and AJ are funny together, even if it makes me miss the Brian/Nick combo. Loved the chapter :)

Author's Response: LOL I can see AJ doing that with the skull sandals.

Reviewer: felikia2009 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/27/08 05:02 am Title: Chapter 7

k, maybe its just deja vu, or my memory is that good, but the book thing really happened, right? loved it :)

Author's Response:

Yes it did really happen lol

Reviewer: Yara Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/26/08 07:08 am Title: Chapter 7

Nice chapter. I'm glad you mention Howie here and there. Can't wait for the rest of the guys to get there. Take Care!

Author's Response: Aww thanks. I think it's important to keep Howie in there too :O)

Reviewer: Rose Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/25/08 01:21 pm Title: Chapter 7

Nick is so precious lol. Awww this is the last Kevin/Nick chapter huh. I like how you included the book Nick mentioned in the webcam chat.

Author's Response: Well maybe not. LOL chapter 9 is mostly just Nick and Kevin. I'm still going to try to make it mostly about them. :O)

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/25/08 06:31 am Title: Chapter 7

Roflmao!!!!!!!!! Crazy Carter! I swear it's like Father & Son with these two! Lol.

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!

~Lenni~ 



Author's Response: LOL thanks Lenni.

Reviewer: luna610 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/25/08 05:57 am Title: Chapter 7

hehe...very cute chapter. I was cracking up at the salmon story!! I can just picture Kevin getting all mad about whether Nick liked the salmon or not!

Author's Response: LOL thanks Sel. Yup it looked really humoroua in my head.

Reviewer: nicksgal Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/25/08 04:05 am Title: Chapter 7

lol I love how you can take them from a sentimental moment to a hilarious one. I hope you can continue updating regularly even though you have school. :o)

Keep up the good writing! :D

Author's Response: Aww thanks Dee! I hope I can continue to update too. I'm slowing down it seems. But i do have a page of chapter 10 done so yay! lol I'm still a little ahead of myself.

Reviewer: balance Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/25/08 03:37 am Title: Chapter 7

I'm loving Nick and Kevin's time together.  Now, I'm like Kevin and a little worried about AJ and Brian's arrival.  Another good chapter, Mare.

Pammy Whammy



Author's Response: Aww thanks Pammy. Next chapter is Just Brian and AJ so it's a real departure for me. We'll see how it goes lol

Reviewer: nicksgal Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/23/08 06:23 am Title: Chapter 6

Yay, bonding!

I don't really have a lot to say because I'm a little sick... But it was an enjoyable chapter as always. :o)

Author's Response: Thanks! And feel better! :O)

Reviewer: mers Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/21/08 01:47 am Title: Chapter 6

im halfway done and have to stop cause my colleague is here :( but omg, i hope we dont catch a whale!! lmao!!!!!! oh nick, to be inside your head!

also, kevin, do you have a man crush on me? LMAO!! i love that term, man crush!

THEY'RE FISH DUDE! lmao!!

i shall be back with the rest of the review when im done with the chap :D

Author's Response: YAY to Mersey! I'm just always all giggly when you are actually online nowadays! :O)

Reviewer: Julilly Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/20/08 02:51 pm Title: Chapter 6

Catching up on things today... Nick and Kevin do a lot of fishing in Mare land don't they? lol :P That was cute, I'm glad they get to eat now!

Author's Response: Yes because Mare has never ever gone fishing so in her land Kevin and NIck do it for her. lol