Reviewer: rebellious_one Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/11/08 11:35 pm Title: Chapter One

Okay... so, I'm slowly trying to start giving romance a chance (cause it's not my cup of tea) and I know if you're reading this review you must think "but I hardly had romance in this!" and that's perfect! I normally don't read stories where AJ or Nick have girlfriends or whatever, but I'm trying to get myself in to it. Okay... now why the hell would Mady just leave cause she's pregnant? I mean, I would understand having the fear of the guy leaving you, especially a guy like Nick Carter, who's a celebrity and isn't looking forward to settling down anytime soon, but that was wrong of her to just up and leave without saying anything. Second, what did Nick do to make him feel that her leaving was all his fault? These two need couple slaps across the head! Lol. I really enjoyed the interaction you had between Nick, AJ and Brian, and it was such a cute moment for AJ to step out and play the role as the big brother. I could actually see AJ finding Nick, hearing the story out, then pointing and laughing at him like "You dumb fuck, what the hell did you do?" and for a moment you portrayed his sarcastic/blunt side, but all that resolved when he saw the condition Nick was in and decided that he needed to help his younger brother out, and that's his compassionate, caring, loving side that a lot of writers really don't touch up on when it comes to Mr. Alex McLean. I really enjoyed reading this, is was well written and descriptive without going overboard. To tell you the truth, if you were to continue this story, you would be seeing reviews from me, you have me as a reader! :) Thanks for breaking my mode and continue writing hun, you've got a talent!

Author's Response: First off, thanks for your review. I was worried no one would! 1. Mady left because she felt conflicted about the situation and wasn't sure how Nick would react, so she thought if she left and went back home, he wouldn't have to feel responsible to be a father. 2. Nick is a tormented soul, lol, and therefore takes things personally regardless if they actually are. Does that make sense? He means well, but often lets his own emotions take over his brain and that just throws things out of whack. 3. I totally want to keep writing this story, and with much thanks to you, I just may do that!

Reviewer: luna610 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/11/08 07:40 am Title: Chapter One

Is that it?? It's very well written and I like the storyline...would like to see more =)

Author's Response: Thank you! I wasn't planning on writing more on this, but because of the wonderful reviews I've gotten, I just may do that!