Date: 10/18/11 12:00 am Title: The Date
aw what a sweet date
Date: 10/17/11 11:46 pm Title: Best Kept Secret
wow Nick "slips" a lot!!
Date: 10/15/11 08:50 pm Title: Second Chance!
ahh she's giving him a second chance, but judging by the length of the story, it's not all happily ever after yet...
Date: 10/15/11 08:41 pm Title: Double Crosser
Nick is such an idiot.. I'm sorry Ray, it just slipped and feel into her.. HAHA! nothing to eat and nine pills and some booze, yah that's gonna be a problem.
Date: 10/14/11 11:31 pm Title: Fat but Fun!
oooh he admitted he wanted her then he needs to stop fucking around with Mia!!
Date: 10/14/11 11:20 pm Title: So Dumb
well he obviously was trying to find out the information for his FRIEND! I mean why would he get close to you like that and ask you about your sister? He should have said "so my friend wants to know"
Date: 10/14/11 10:53 pm Title: Foolish Games
ooh really he kissed her now! geesh! I mean sure a kiss is nice but Nick c'mon your kiss doesn't cure all the ails!
Date: 10/14/11 10:34 pm Title: Disenchantment
oh geez Nick! and Mia, typical sister though right? Even if you know your sis is into a guy you still want him and do what you can to get him? I'm sorry Mia but I know you KNOW Ray likes him.
Date: 10/10/11 05:50 am Title: Maybe So
oh you prick Nick! And don't think asking her out would be nice anyway. How is supposed to take that after you call her fat? She'd be insulted.. pity dates suck, TRUST ME. ..
Author's Response:
Yes pitty dates suck ass! Nick is dumb! Thank you Lore!
Date: 10/10/11 05:36 am Title: Stumbled Upon
wow jerk Nick!! I loved the introduction, good sense of both of them so far. I like Maria and feel sorry Ray feels that way about herself but I can't say I can't sympathize.
Author's Response:
Yay you are reading. Yes, Nick is a big jerk in this one...well most of the time. hehe I'm glad you like so far. thank you Lore.
Date: 04/19/11 04:47 pm Title: The Kiss
AHHHH!!!! I am so super happy with the ending, although, I would've like it better had it been Ray and Nick getting married. Loved the Twilight reference BTW!
Date: 04/01/11 04:08 am Title: The Kiss
Wonderful, absolutly loved it. Sad to see it's finished. Loved Raydin so much. How about a sequel? lol. Take Care!
Date: 04/01/11 03:49 am Title: So Happy Together
Cliffhanger,,,,,Ahhh, I keep getting lost but I always come back,lol, couldn't wait to read more and here I am again, can't wait 2 see how is going 2 end.
Date: 03/21/11 01:13 pm Title: The Kiss
Congrats on finishing the story Erika! I've loved this from the start and although it's sad it had to end, I'm glad you gave them a happy ending. Liked Mia and AJ's Twilight inspired wedding, it is so them! Poor Adam though, I really wanted Ray to pick him, but I guess she still loved Nick.
Loved it!!
Date: 03/20/11 04:39 pm Title: The Kiss
I loved it will there be a part two
Author's Response:
Woohoo I'm so glad you loved it...thank you. As for a part 2, defiantly can't handle Ray and Nick for another round. lol. =)