Date: 08/21/08 12:51 pm Title: Foolish Games
Ahhhh! Love this story!!!!! Awesome update, hope to see more soon.
Author's Response: Thanks so much, I'm glad your loving it. Much more to come.
Date: 08/21/08 09:00 am Title: Foolish Games
omg what assholes... i so cant wait for more. awsome story.
Author's Response:
Yeah definately I would have panicked too. I would have been punching people. hahaha! Thanks so much *Smile* I'm glad you think that. more soon. =)
Date: 08/21/08 06:14 am Title: Foolish Games
Awwww, he kissed her. How cute. But I bet it won't be cute once he's done. And who's Nora, a sister? Please update soon. Take Care!
Author's Response: Yeah they smooched...who knows maybe he is a good guy...? Nora? Humm we will just have to find out wont we? Thanks so much girlie. I love your name by the way Yaritza...very nice!
Date: 08/21/08 04:04 am Title: Foolish Games
*le GASP!* How dare you leave it there?!? are you mad crazy?!? AJ really is a dick and Nick is...I don't know what his issue is...PMS? Anyways...I really want an update...is Nick gonna have a better attitude? Does the kiss deepen? What does Mia do?!? Good heaven...update soon please!
Author's Response: *Rubbing hands together with eviil smile* hehehe!! I dare...I am mad crazy...ish! Ha after I reread this chapter I told myself the same thing, Nick has PMS! Hahaha! You can really make someone want to keep writing...you have no idea crystal. thanks!
Date: 08/21/08 03:57 am Title: Foolish Games
oh wow this is a great story can't wait for the next update
Author's Response:
Yay I'm so glad that you like it. Thanks so much, I will update very soon.
Date: 08/21/08 03:16 am Title: Foolish Games
Great update! AJ is an ass and Mia is well I won't say what she is. Cant' wait for more.
Author's Response: thanks, yeah someone has to be the ass in this story. Mia is a...humm attention seeker...we'll put it that way. LOL! More soon.
Date: 08/21/08 12:00 am Title: Disenchantment
Okay, confused! Is Nick going after Mia or Ray? Good chapter. Update soon!
Author's Response:
He's a guy...he could go for both right! Men they have no control. Thanks so much!! Updating soon.
Date: 08/20/08 10:24 pm Title: Disenchantment
Her dad is a bastard I can't believe he said that, niceeee dad. You jerk, you send poor Ray your own daugther in deeper depression... you idiot.
Hey I though mia and and ray were sisters blood sisters I mean cause apparently they are, in some level.
Great update!!!
And who the heck bump into her ???she is totally snob don't tell me is one of his sisters
Author's Response: Yeah her dad is a big ASS! I'm basing him on a friends dad, who used to put her down so bad. You still crack me up. No, she's not one of his sisters...I don't think. Thanks for all your reviews.
Date: 08/20/08 10:04 pm Title: Maybe So
Darn, I hope I would've got more Howie, you know my howie fix sighs*
Author's Response: I know...don't clobber me but I'm leaning towards Howie as my fave now... *Hides* it's just AJ is to weird now, Nick is getting skinnier by the day, Kevin's gone and he's a daddy and well Brian is just out of the question. *Waving white flag* Peace!
Date: 08/20/08 10:00 pm Title: Stumbled Upon
I know its like starndard lol! but if they trutly redeem themselves, I might forgive them and not trash them alot which they do at the end where is not much of use... blah blah lol!
Author's Response: LMAO!!
Date: 08/20/08 06:39 pm Title: Disenchantment
Sweet, this is a really nice story and I really like it so far! Would love to see an update soon :)
Author's Response: Wow! Thanks I'm so gad that you are liking this story. I am definately updating soon. Thanks again!
Date: 08/20/08 06:37 pm Title: Disenchantment
Ok, that was not nice Nicky. lol. Making out with a girl while cheking out another,lol. Is that messed up or what? He definetly like Rai but is afraid of what they'll say. Hope he doesn't cause her to much hurt in the long haul. Please update soon, love the story. Take Care!
Author's Response: Hey I like how you put that, making out with one and checking out the other...LOL! Yeah pain IS on the WAY! Yay thanks for loving the story!
Date: 08/20/08 05:29 pm Title: Disenchantment
OMG! That was sad! I hope raidyn and nick start somthing and not hiim and mia! anyway! awesome story!
Author's Response: I know it's happened to me before, maybe all of us huh! Mia is a little too friendly...Thanks for reading very appreciated.
Date: 08/20/08 04:47 pm Title: Disenchantment
*sigh* That's all I've got to say. LOL. No, seriously, there better be another update tonight! I am dying to know who ends up falling for her...everyone is expecting it to be Nick...that's what makes me think that AJ ends up popping up and falling helplessly in love. Then Nick will be all like "I thought you said you didn't go there" and AJ would be like "Things change when you fall in love" Aaaaaah, I can picture it now! LMAO, now that I said that watch it end up being Nick and he ends up pulling that "Yeah we're dating when no one is around but noone likes a fat girl so we're just friends when people are around". Good lord, just update already!
Author's Response:
You are too funny!! Is it AJ, Nick...you know I have to admit that you put some good ideas out there and well I just might take them. haha! I'm so glad your liking this. thanks so much
Date: 08/20/08 04:43 pm Title: Disenchantment
I really like it and i can't wait for another chapter.
Author's Response: I'm so glad that you like it, another chapter already up and more to come. Thanks!
