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Reviewer: Alexsgirl_ritz Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/26/14 04:50 pm Title: Simple Things

I think I have said this in my review to your other story, that you will be a great Mom someday. Please don't ask me to elaborate because I can't, lol. I just feel it. Your writing shows how much life/experience taught you, the maturity and everything. This is really good, something I might consider doing someday when I feel stressful or down, go to playground and watch the kids. But, I do think having 3 kids is enough, I guess I'll just stay in the house. Sorry for rambling... lol But this is brilliant, you know when you first read the rules of the challenge, you can just easily write a story about Howie and his children, but you did better than that.

Author's Response: Thanks, Ritz. I think back when I wrote this one, Howie didn't have any children but I'm not totally sure. lol I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/05/10 02:40 pm Title: Simple Things

Just happened to come across this one and really enjoyed it.

I can imagine Nick wearing those clothes too, hehehe.

Author's Response: Thanks Steph! I actually had to click on this one to start reading because I didn't remember it. lol

Reviewer: mersey Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/12/09 10:23 am Title: Simple Things

oh mare's fics...how i've missed you so! *hugs*

i love this one, it's so...quiet. and calm. yet at the same time heavy with sadness and despair. this is so you (not you, you, as in the writing is so you...im pretty sure you got that the first time right? lol). I love Lenni for giving this prompt to you! 

it's wonderful what a sunday with absolutely nothing to do and awesome wireless can make you do! hehe

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/15/08 03:34 am Title: Simple Things

Hehe. Suepr cute!!!! I loved Howie & his Dad having a moment! And of course, I LOVED my lil' cameo! And I loved that Bo got to be there too! Lol. Hehe. Chipmunks hat & TMNT shirt - I'd totally dress like that if I'd a Chipmunks hat! Usually it's a TMNT shirt & a BSB hat or sweatshirt - lol.

Yay!!!!!!!! Lovely Howie story!!!!!!!!!!!

~Lenni~ 

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/22/08 01:42 pm Title: Simple Things

Beautiful!

Author's Response: Thanks

Reviewer: AngelgirlD Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/21/08 10:11 pm Title: Simple Things

WOW, speechles!!!!

Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: luna610 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/21/08 02:52 am Title: Simple Things

Aw, that was sweet. And I totally pictured Nick dressed in what that girl was wearing!

Author's Response: LOL me too!

Reviewer: alota_cookin Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/21/08 01:51 am Title: Simple Things

Okay...now that was really sweet! I liked how you centered it around him coping with his dad's death becasue we all know, that is what he is trying to do right now. And little Lenore was so cute! I was half expecting him to say screw it and hop on the merry go round with her. lol. Good job! (as always)

Author's Response: Thanks for saying that. And you know I almost did make him hop on the merry go round or go to a swing, but I couldn't picture the real him doing that. lol

Reviewer: felikia2009 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/21/08 01:27 am Title: Simple Things

such a cute fic :) loved how you gave lenni a cameo in her challenge :)

Author's Response: hehe I had to. And her dog got a cameo too!

Reviewer: Kevmylove Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/21/08 12:38 am Title: Simple Things

Aw this is so sad Mare. I could actually see him just sitting there, poor thing. Great Job.

Author's Response: Thanks! I tried not to make it too sad.