Date: 10/04/08 10:12 am Title: Chapter 5 - Hot Date
omg I loved it LOL so funny hehe can't wait for more so good amazing
Date: 10/04/08 03:48 am Title: Chapter 5 - Hot Date
haha. yay. thanks. that did brighten everything up. hopefully there is more to her than meets his eye. but agh she is such a mess.. cant wait for more.
Author's Response: You're welcome lol Don't you feel special now? Chastity is quite the mess, isn't she? But appearances can be deceiving. Deep down she is human and who knows? She and Nick may find that they have a lot more in common than they realized.
Date: 10/03/08 07:01 am Title: Chapter 5 - Hot Date
This story just gets funnier and funnier with every chapter.I litterly laugh out loud constantly at Nicks thoughts.
I knew as soon as she said "you could choked on a pretzel" that it was referring to President Bush. My hubby is a huge Bush fan ( I like him too, but my hubby is a crazy Bush fan) and he won't allow my son to eat pretzels because Bush choked on one.... I know crazy!!!!
Cow tipping and playing H&S in the corn fields is so much fun!!! Backwoods, redneck shit or not, it is a blast!!!!
We actually have a huge corn maze down here right now for Halloween....so scary and creepy and awesome!!
Anyways, I love when you post a chappie here after you pis ALTOS....it is a bit of a pick me up!
Great job you guys!
Author's Response:
Haha! Yea the pretzel joke is a big one in my house, but for quite the opposite. We're not very big Bush fans (neither is Teri)... But I won't go on and on about my reasons lol
And yea w/ the cowtipping and cornfields of course we tried to put the most stereotypical "hick" things to describe what Chastity loves to do for fun. It is a nice relief after ALTOS although this one will have a lil drama too towards the end. We only have three more chapters to post though until we have all that we have written so far.
Date: 10/01/08 04:29 am Title: Chapter 4 - Three's Company
hehe i so loved it. cant wait for more. amazing job.
Date: 10/01/08 04:07 am Title: Chapter 3 - Ante Up
awsome job.
Date: 09/30/08 05:48 am Title: Chapter 4 - Three's Company
First I have to start off by saying I totally cracked up at Nicks conversation with himself...and the line about Clay....touche!!!!
For some reason I have a feeling that Chastity is going to be a lot more of a handful than Nick is expecting. I am imagining like a Kate Hudson type in "how to lose a guy in 10 days" onlt ten times worse. I am also thinking that once she finally gives up the muffy, she is going to turn into some psycho Nick stalker, that ruins every aspect of his life.
I didn't expect Kat to be a lesbian, although I can show imagine the look on Nicks face when he seen the two of them "making-up". Great Chapter you guys.... I can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
And just think, the Clay line was written long before he even officially came out! (Although are you really surprised?) Hmm... You might be right about Chastity being a handful, but unlike Kate Hudson's character in "How to Lose a Guy..." Chastity isn't TRYING to turn off Nick. This is actually her lol. We're not sure if she'll go as far as to be a stalker or ruin anyone's life cuz she really is pretty harmless, but it will sure get interesting.
Ha! Yea the Kat being a lesbian was a little bit of a zinger we threw out there to make things a lil more interesting. Thanks for the review Brandy!
Date: 09/30/08 04:42 am Title: Chapter 4 - Three's Company
LOL...I love her fiesty roommate, Nick should be afraid, very afraid.
You two are the funniness...xoxox
Author's Response:
We love Kat too... She's very fun to write about! Thanks Darbs!
Date: 09/30/08 01:31 am Title: Chapter 4 - Three's Company
hahaha of course she is lesbian. haha okay glad I read this after a taste of sin it cheered me up some.
Author's Response: Aww yea I am working on it now as we speak to cheer ME up lol Yes Kat likes girls which could lead to some interesting conversations LOL
Date: 09/28/08 04:19 am Title: Chapter 3 - Ante Up
I would love to say that there is no way that those words would have worked on me, but who am I kidding??? Nick Carter doesn't even have to speak, he can just give me that little half grin he does, and I would be on him like white on rice!!!
Dammit!! I was hoping Jessica's boobs would have been real, and huge and drew attention to her belly button!!!
I have got a feeling that Chastity is going to be a lot more to handle than Nick thinks.....
Can't wait for more!
Date: 09/28/08 02:34 am Title: Chapter 3 - Ante Up
hahahhahaha. the speedo scene. hahahaha. i seriously find myself laughing out loud when I read this story. she was doing so well and then she gave in. but I guess most girls would. at least she held out a bit. cant wait for more!
Date: 09/25/08 10:29 am Title: Chapter 2 - Gentlemen, Place Your Bets
hehe so loved it. Can't wait for more. Awsome job.
Date: 09/24/08 07:29 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Gentlemen, Place Your Bets
Nick really cracks me up. It really seems like you guys have found a way to get into his head. Are you sure this isn't really NICK writing this? Come on you can tellme if you are letting him use your pinname! LOL!!!
Poor Chastity...although, she is a bit annoying, she still feels! She just needs to learn how to tone it down a little, and Jessica...sounds like a hoe bag.... at least Nick wouldn't have to worry about catching something from Chastity...
Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Haha Yea he tells us the story telepathically and we write it j.k The way we talk about him you think he really was writing this though. Chastity does get crapped on a lot and you do feel bad because she can't help who she is. Annoying? Perhaps, but you still haven't seen all he destriction she can do yet! Jessica is definitely a lil promiscious to put it nicely. She won't be playing a very big part in this though. Kat is actually going to play the bigger role. But you are right... Chastity is disease free lol Funny you should say that cuz we just wrote a line about that last chapter..
Date: 09/24/08 06:31 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Gentlemen, Place Your Bets
Can't wait to read more.... This story is hilarious !
Author's Response: Thanks Iz!
Date: 09/24/08 05:05 pm Title: Prologue
Wow is that different from anything you've ever written Mel....
Can't wait to read more .... This is the Nick I've known and loved (lol) ... a self aware ass !
Date: 09/24/08 04:56 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Gentlemen, Place Your Bets
OMG...lol, rereading this reminded me how much I love this story...thanks for the laugh, can't wait to see what you girls do! Hugs!
Author's Response: Thanks Darbs! We know its been a while so most people prolly need to reread. We hope we do it justice!
