Date: 10/22/08 04:43 pm Title: Hell House
Holy crap..lmao. Revenge at its greatest. Creepy, Ash..just creepy. I thought at first that Nick would have all the guys tied up in the house and knocked unconscious. lmao. You did amazingly with this one! :)
Author's Response: Why tankies Ashie! I was unsure of how it turned out, but I'm liking it now. It's inspired me to hopefully soon write a full length vampire fic. Thanks for the review! [Ashley]
Date: 10/22/08 03:13 am Title: Hell House
I love Vampire stuff, very good, it should be made into a longer story though. I loved it.
Author's Response: I actually considered making it into a full length fic after the month was over, but now I don't really see how it would flow if I were to do so. I'll still consider it though. LoL. Thanks for the review! [Ashley]
Date: 10/21/08 04:59 pm Title: Hell House
Ashley I really love your description made me feel like I was Kevin and I was seeing everything he was. (If that makes sense) That was really creepy, the boys becoming vampires. Awesome job!!
Author's Response: I'm what I like to call a detail nazi, just like a bunch of the authors on the forum are grammar nazis (aka the grammar police). Glad I suceeded at that part. And I've been on a bit of a vampire kick ever since I read Twilight, so I hope the little idea I spun for this worked out ok. Thanks for the review! [Ashley]
Date: 10/21/08 12:03 pm Title: Hell House
And I was the first reviewer! Boo-Ya!!! lol
Author's Response:
*squee* Yay for being the first reviewer! I always love doing that! [Ashley]
Date: 10/21/08 12:03 pm Title: Hell House
Three Words, Fricking Scary Shit! Dear god, that sends chills down my own spine! Nice job Ashley! I think I got your name this time, lol! Great work, very creepy! xoxo
Author's Response:
Thanks for the feedback Leigh-Anna. I wasn't too fond of how the ending flowed, but I'm hoping the story overall worked out ok. Kevin was a butthead to write in 1st POV. He was very stubborn and didn't want to say what I wanted him to say. Hmmm...maybe he got what was coming to him in the end? LMAO. Glad I was able to scare you with this! That makes me feel all bubbly inside! *giggles* Thanks again for the review! [Ashley]
