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Reviewer: Sakabelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/18/08 10:25 pm Title: Chapter 4: Kismet

And so they meet! LOL at the two of them being so confused about the other person being in the apartment. I'm glad it worked out though, Nick has someone to keep him occupied while the girls are gone to visit their grandparents, and Marie has someone to show her around the city. This should be an interesting development and I'm excited to see what happens next! (Even though I sort of already know :P) Great chapter!

Author's Response:

HEHE thank you! they are funny aren't they?

 

Reviewer: Sakabelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/18/08 10:12 pm Title: Chapter 3: Leaving On A Jet Plane

I feel so bad for Nick and the girls, it sounds like they're having a hard time dealing with the loss of Anna. Nick was super cute explaining about Santa to the girls though! And I'm super jealous of Marie, Angel's condo sounds fabulous! Great work hun!

Author's Response: it does sound fab doesn't it? i know i'd want to live there lol!

Reviewer: Sakabelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/18/08 10:03 pm Title: Chapter 2: Rash Decisions Don't Itch Do They?

Oooh so Marie is headed out to LA, wonder what'll happen there.. ;) And Nick's date sounded like a total bimbo. Yeesh, that sucks for him. But it won't suck for long cause he'll meet Marie and fall super madly deeply passionately in love!...I assume. I guess the only way for me to find out is to go on to the next chapter, right? Great job, Teri! :)

Author's Response: LOL you crack me up! I love it. And yeah some serious chemistry's ahead hehe thanks so much sweets!

Reviewer: scarlett Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/18/08 08:39 am Title: Chapter 1: Some Hearts Just Get All The Right Breaks

well, i'm not expecting for anything except that i think i'm giong to be surprised. ;)

Author's Response: good! i like that in my readers hehe. Hope you enjoy it when i post! thanks hon

Reviewer: scarlett Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/18/08 08:08 am Title: Chapter 9: Falling, Falling Fast

you wanna know what i think? i'm excited on how he will tell Marie. ;)

Author's Response: it's definitely not going to go how anyone expects thats for sure. thanks so much hon!

Reviewer: Jay Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/18/08 02:19 am Title: Chapter 9: Falling, Falling Fast

Oooo...dun dun dun...lol. They're both so cute! I hope Nick tells her the real deal soon. She seems understanding:) Though at 25 I'd be kinda freaked out if the guy I randomly fell in love with on a vacation was like "So, how's the weather today? Do anything exciting? I have 2 kids..." lol. I love their chemistry though. Can't wait to see what happens next!!!

Author's Response: yeah hes scared of course and rightly so, it's a big effing deal. she'll ultimately be okay with it that's for sure but i have to keep it interesting yanno! lol thanks so much!

Reviewer: FrickFrackGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/18/08 01:31 am Title: Chapter 9: Falling, Falling Fast

I can't wait for her response to his "news".  Still loving this story!!  Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: lol yeah it'll be interesting! glad you like it! thanks so much!

Reviewer: Audie Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/17/08 11:26 pm Title: Chapter 9: Falling, Falling Fast

So cute!! Is he finally gonna tell her??? Don't leave us in the dark! Update!!

Author's Response: he might....you never know lol I shall update soon!

Reviewer: Backstreet-Spice Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/17/08 11:08 pm Title: Chapter 9: Falling, Falling Fast

Great update sweets! Can't for more!

Author's Response: thanks nat! glad you like it.

Reviewer: Tantilisinteaser Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/17/08 10:29 pm Title: Chapter 9: Falling, Falling Fast

You are on  a roll girl! I'm loving how close they are already and how complicated it also is already. There is so much he needs to tell her and I can't wait to see her reaction! Good job!

Author's Response: lol! i am...too bad it's not on the last ten chapters of WSIT. Yeah it's very complex and he needs to tell her but he just can't figure out how to do it. Thanks so much sweets!

Reviewer: cabybakes Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/17/08 06:11 pm Title: Chapter 8: The Night Before The Morning After

Wowza...I knew it was going to happen, but still sooner than I expected, which is what I like about it!  I think that sometimes it is better not to think too much and just go for it!

Can't wait for more, great job, hun!



Author's Response: yeah if it were his decision they'd probably be dating for a couple of months. but she's only there for a few weeks hence everything is sped up big time lol. at least they didn't screw 5 seconds after meeting each other. lol

Reviewer: cabybakes Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/17/08 06:04 pm Title: Chapter 7: Bloody Mary, Full of Grace

Ooh la la...can't wait for the next chapter...heading that way...

A few notes about this one...Nick is SO the chick in this relationship, which I love...so much more thought is going into his decisions with her.  I really do think that guys becoming fathers can have that effect - plus the loss of his wife, etc.  He had the PERFECT window to tell Marie about his wife dying and the girls but he passed...he is freaked that it will be too much.  I adore Aaron telling him to think with something else lol...

Onto the next...



Author's Response: thanks so much hon! yeah he's totally the chick ain't he?

Reviewer: Audie Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/17/08 08:23 am Title: Chapter 8: The Night Before The Morning After

Awww I LOVE this story I always look for it first when I just the updates. Great job!! Update soon!

Author's Response: aww thank you so much!

Reviewer: Jay Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/17/08 07:34 am Title: Chapter 8: The Night Before The Morning After

Seriously, SO CUTE! It's about time they got it on, the tension's been building the whole story so far! LOL. I love the way he asked her on a date, too:) Seriously, if my future boyfriend isn't like this I'm gonna smack him in the face and then tell him to seek out your address and get 'Ways to make a girl's heart melt' lessons...lol. Update soon!!!

Author's Response: LMAO jamia! you make me giggle i swear. I heart you! thanks so much for your reviews so far! much much much more to come!

Reviewer: blueleeryan Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/17/08 06:52 am Title: Chapter 8: The Night Before The Morning After

wow so amazingly awsome. I loved it. They are so cute together. Can't wait for more.

Author's Response: thanks so much hon!