Date: 11/14/08 12:58 am Title: Chapter 5: In the City, City of Angels, Lonely as I am....
the kiss was just the great finale to end their day. too bad, his daughter called. hahaha.
nyweis, you have beautifully written the kissing episode. i am loving it. ;)
Author's Response: aww thanks so much hon i was very happy with it all. thanks so much for the reviews!
Date: 11/14/08 12:12 am Title: Chapter 5: In the City, City of Angels, Lonely as I am....
Gotta love kids' timing! GAAAAA!! lol...why didn't he just say it's my daughter!??! Nickoloas! lmao...
I hope you keep up with the frequent updates. I'm really getting into this story! Another great chapter!!
Author's Response: thanks hon! and yeah he would have but then again he wants to protect that sifde of himself from public scrutiny or even letting her know lets her into a whole side of him that i'm not sure he's even ready to let anyone into just yet.
Date: 11/13/08 11:30 pm Title: Chapter 5: In the City, City of Angels, Lonely as I am....
Oooo, Nick is already getting his mack on...lol. He does not waste any time! haha. I have a feeling things are about to get interesting:) Can't wait for more of this! You're on a roll here with all the updates!
Author's Response: LOL yeah he doesn't does he? i love it! i hope i keep up too!
Date: 11/13/08 10:10 pm Title: Chapter 5: In the City, City of Angels, Lonely as I am....
Oooohh...good story so far. Now, if I was her, I'd hop on the internet and start reading my ass off about Nick! ;o)
Author's Response: you know i thought about that, but i think she wants to be surprised!
Date: 11/13/08 09:37 pm Title: Chapter 5: In the City, City of Angels, Lonely as I am....
I love this story!! Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: awesome thank you so much!
Date: 11/13/08 08:03 pm Title: Chapter 5: In the City, City of Angels, Lonely as I am....
of course she thought livie was a girlfriend. he needs to let her know but I guess I wouldnt want to either on the first meeting. cant wait for more. i freakin love this. : )
Author's Response:
lol of course not! gotta keep up the suspense some how!
Date: 11/13/08 07:23 pm Title: Chapter 1: Some Hearts Just Get All The Right Breaks
I've just started to read this story and I'm loving it already. Keep up with the great work!
Author's Response:
yay! good! i'm glad you like!
Date: 11/13/08 06:37 pm Title: Chapter 5: In the City, City of Angels, Lonely as I am....
Aww poor Marie how she misunderstood the situation! I've so been there. Actually sounds VERY familair to me. You meet a nice guy and you think there might actually be a chance there and then nothing... Although I have a feeling that Marie may have better luck than me in the dating game with Nick lol. And you were right... The kisses did fit in better than I expected them to.
Author's Response: yeah to say that your sitch didn't help with inspiration would be a lie. I think we've all been there. And yes context is always better lol. I'm happy with it, and I was getting all flustered editing it cuz I was like wow they're just kissing and it's hot...damn lol. thanks so much hon!!!
Date: 11/13/08 04:01 pm Title: Chapter 4: Kismet
hehe amazing job I loved it can't wait for more.
Author's Response: the wait is over! hehe more is up and thank you so much for your review!
Date: 11/13/08 03:52 pm Title: Chapter 4: Kismet
YAY, new story! I love the seperate introductions to Marie and Nick so now I get to love Nick and Marie together. Wait..yeah you know what I mean. Can't wait for the update.
Author's Response: see i told you that you'd like it! hehe enjoy!
Date: 11/13/08 01:21 pm Title: Chapter 4: Kismet
I am really liking this story. There is soooooooooooo much potential here!! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: yay! i'm glad you like it! thanks so much!
Date: 11/13/08 09:46 am Title: Chapter 4: Kismet
...And the plot thickens:) hehe. I'm excited to see what's in store for these two! Awesome as usual:) Can't wait for an update!
Author's Response: yes it's like dun dun DUN. just wait till you see what's up next! thanks so much hon!
Date: 11/13/08 04:41 am Title: Chapter 4: Kismet
i'm looking forward to see the Nick's LA, hehehe. i appreciate the quick update. ;)
Author's Response: hehe thank you! i hope to update again soon!
Date: 11/13/08 04:29 am Title: Chapter 1: Some Hearts Just Get All The Right Breaks
Yeahy! Another chapter! Keep em comin! I'm lovin this story! I love how they meet..peppe spray his butt! lmao!! Great chap!
Author's Response: thanks hon!
Date: 11/13/08 02:50 am Title: Chapter 4: Kismet
LOVE LOVE LOVE IT...
Author's Response: wowza! awesome. now you're gonna have to tell me in detail what you "love love love" about it later you know! lovesya!
