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Reviewer: mary Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/12/08 08:00 pm Title: Chapter 4: Kismet

wooo! they finally meet! yayy. cant wait for more. they seemed to hit it off well enough.

Author's Response: yep they did. of course they'd hit it off. Angel and Nick are super close so naturally a "normal" friend of hers would get along with him. It'll be interesting to share where it leads hehe

Reviewer: Jay Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/12/08 06:47 am Title: Chapter 3: Leaving On A Jet Plane

Awww, Nick with his daughters is SO cute! And I love that he went frantically looking everywhere for that teddy bear...lol. It's true though, i work at a daycare and half of the things that have to come out of my mouth to the kids sometimes cracks me up...lol. Or like you said, the things you find yourself frantically looking for to prevent a fit..hahaha. Love it! Can't wait for another chapter!!

Author's Response: Aren't they adorable? Yeah stuff like that happens all the time LOL! thanks so much!

Reviewer: Anita Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/12/08 05:55 am Title: Chapter 3: Leaving On A Jet Plane

yay another excellent chapter. and damn thanks for ruining my french pastery that i love with chocolate from the last chapter lol and i feel so sad for nick.

Author's Response: yay i'm glad you like it! thanks so much

Reviewer: mary Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/12/08 04:14 am Title: Chapter 3: Leaving On A Jet Plane

aww. they are such cute kids. yay for vacations! cant wait for more!

Author's Response: vaycays are so worth it some times. AND yeah jo and liv are my most favorite characters in the whole story! thanks so so muhc!

Reviewer: scarlett Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/12/08 12:42 am Title: Chapter 3: Leaving On A Jet Plane

;) thanks for the update.

Author's Response: thanks to you for the review!

Reviewer: blueleeryan Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/11/08 11:19 pm Title: Chapter 3: Leaving On A Jet Plane

ooooo can't wait till nick shows up to take the dogs out LOL awsome job loved it.

Author's Response: lol actually aaron is supposed to take out the dogs but we all know how he unreliable he can be. lol thanks so much!

Reviewer: cabybakes Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/11/08 09:35 pm Title: Chapter 3: Leaving On A Jet Plane

Ohhh...do I sense a little foreshadowing in the beginning?  Can't wait for more, the scene with Nick and the girls was very sweet!  Great work, hun...you are on a roll these days...

Author's Response: yes a lil foreshadowing LOL. thanks so much, i wouldn't be able to do it without your encouragement!

Reviewer: Tscarpulla21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/11/08 08:43 pm Title: Chapter 3: Leaving On A Jet Plane

Great chapter!

Author's Response: thanks hon!

Reviewer: blueleeryan Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/11/08 08:39 pm Title: Chapter 2: Rash Decisions Don't Itch Do They?

amazing chapter and so well done I loved it.

Author's Response: thanks so much!

Reviewer: FrickFrackGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/11/08 08:22 pm Title: Chapter 3: Leaving On A Jet Plane

haha I just read the 2nd chapter and when I went back *poof* the 3rd appeared! I'm really enjoying reading this!  Great chapter!

Author's Response: hehe thank you! i'm working on chapter 4 right now!

Reviewer: FrickFrackGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/11/08 08:07 pm Title: Chapter 2: Rash Decisions Don't Itch Do They?

I'm already loving this story!  Can't wait for more!! 

Author's Response: aww awesome. I actually just posted more! lol

Reviewer: blueleeryan Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/11/08 09:58 am Title: Chapter 1: Some Hearts Just Get All The Right Breaks

amazing start. Super well done.

Author's Response: thanks hon!

Reviewer: Mellz Bellz Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/11/08 06:03 am Title: Chapter 2: Rash Decisions Don't Itch Do They?

Aww... I agree Marie does need a vacation if all she can talk about to Angel is her pastries! Poor Nick... Haha I know I told you this before, but it sounds like he went on a date with another character that we both know and love LOL

Author's Response: yes i know, i thought of that certain character as i was writing it LOL. I'm evil. And I totally need to write on that story too! thanks for reading hon!

Reviewer: Anita Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/11/08 04:54 am Title: Chapter 2: Rash Decisions Don't Itch Do They?

wow i loved this chapter so much. i still have your other story to catch up on but im hooked on this already! you had me really laughing about the whole pie thing. great job!

Author's Response: lol yes all the food stuff is true I swear! Especially the croissant! I can't eat them once I learned how much butter is in ONE croissant, it's better to just chow down on some land o lakes. LOL. Glad you love it and YES you totally have to catch up and QUICK! lol

Reviewer: scarlett Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/11/08 01:43 am Title: Chapter 2: Rash Decisions Don't Itch Do They?

i'm looking forward to more updates. ;) i like Nick's character here, where his 2 girls keep him grounded and more responsible. as you say, they tamed him, hehehe. keep up the good work.

as for Marie, i could relate with her right now. i'm so focused with my career that i don't know if i would be able to meet that guy, who may not be perfect but will be able to make me feel special. i'm on this verge of giving up but still, i am still hoping. i have supportive friends and a family and i'm still young. i'm only in my mid-20s. haha. so... hm... 

looking forward to your updates. ;)



Author's Response: aww thank you! i'm glad you like it! Nick is a much more mature version of himself, he has to be, he's a daddy. When he's with women though he's the same ole nick cuz he has to compartmentalise his life. thanks so much for reading!