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Reviewer: Airok Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/21/09 10:09 pm Title: Chapter 16: Facing the Music

Wohoo an update!! Loved this chapter! I'm so glad that Nick and Marie finally talked things out. She's great with the Kids and makes Nick happy. Hopefully she'll stay around for a long long time.

Update again soon :)



Author's Response: thanks so much!

Reviewer: blueleeryan Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/21/09 09:02 pm Title: Chapter 16: Facing the Music

So amazing. Loved it. So can't wait to see how the girls react to her sleeping over. They are so cute together.

Author's Response: yeah it'll be interesting hehe! thanks so much for reading!

Reviewer: Lynzer4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/21/09 03:40 am Title: Chapter 16: Facing the Music

loved it... I was so exicted when I saw you have updated this story. It is really different then everything I have read before. It is really well written and has such beauitful strong characters. Cannot wait for more

Author's Response: thanks for reading! i love these characters truly some of my best work i think, then again i'm biased cuz i love Marie.

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/20/09 02:24 pm Title: Chapter 1: Some Hearts Just Get All The Right Breaks

Wow, I'm so loving this story so far! 

Author's Response: thanks so much!

Reviewer: FrickFrackGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/20/09 08:17 am Title: Chapter 16: Facing the Music

Oh have I missed this story!!  I'm so glad you're back!  Great chapter and I can't wait for more!

Author's Response: i missed it too! thanks again hon!

Reviewer: scarlett Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/20/09 07:48 am Title: Chapter 16: Facing the Music

I'm touched by the end scene of this chapter. thanks for updating the story. really, it took a long time but it's worth the wait. ;)

let me tell you a story, something happened in my life while this story wasn't updated yet. i met a man through a friend. we were introduced. we became friends and i came to like him.my friend secretly told me that he's a widower and it all exactly fit in Nick's situation in this story. it was hard to go out with a guy, knowing that he was widowed 2years ago and has a 2-year-old daughter but he never tells you.. i don't know but maybe because he hasn't trusted me yet. i know, it doesn't have a problem with me. instead of trying to stay away, i even accepted his invite for a date. i wanted him to tell it himself about his situation, about being a package of 2-in-1. i don't know what to do, i never thought that it was this hard to date this kind of guy. if things happen like in your story, i could very well be a 'Marie'. i know i could be, but it hurts that he's still struggling if he could tell the truth to me or not. wish me luck! ;)

God bless! 



Author's Response: That is AWESOME! Single parents have a rough life trying to balance things. Thanks so much for reading. And good luck with your new friend!

Reviewer: nicksohiogirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/20/09 07:37 am Title: Chapter 16: Facing the Music

Great update,I really like this story.I hope you update soon.

Author's Response: Just updated hehe! Anyways thanks so much for your support and reviews!

Reviewer: mary Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/20/09 07:36 am Title: Chapter 16: Facing the Music

ah that was such a great chapter. so glad for the update. she is amazxing with those girls!

Author's Response: isn't she just the most amazing? it stems from my experience with babysitting really kids are great, especially those two. thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Airok Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/11/09 06:29 pm Title: Chapter 15: Mercy

Absolutely beautiful story!! Love it, it's almost as great as your series so far. Can't wait to read more, so update soon again please *puppy eyes*?

Author's Response: aw thanks!

Reviewer: cabybakes Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/03/08 08:05 pm Title: Chapter 15: Mercy

I'm caught up!  Now I can be a better beta!!!  I think it is good that we got to see both of their inner monolouge, somethings gotta give here soon.  Can't wait for me and to see how it goes with the girls and the talk!  Hugs!

Author's Response: hehe ya! thanks so much your help is so appreciated

Reviewer: Yara Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/01/08 07:00 am Title: Chapter 15: Mercy

Great chapter. I can't wait for the next one. I bet they will have lots of fun. Looking forward for another update. Take Care!

Author's Response: thanks hon! You take care too!

Reviewer: Yara Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/01/08 06:47 am Title: Chapter 14: Decode

Poor girls, apparently Nick isn't to good with the cooking, they want Marie to cook for them,lol. Nice chapter, I love the way Nick is with the girls.

Author's Response: hehe yeah he kinda sucks at cooking huh? lol thanks so much for reading!

Reviewer: Yara Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/01/08 06:26 am Title: Chapter 13: All I Want For Christmas Is You

Well, I'm glad she called him, and well, I was going to say that I'm glad they talked but they didn't really talked at all,lol. They did something much entertaining than talking. Take Care!

Author's Response: thanks so much for your review!! =)

Reviewer: Jay Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/30/08 08:19 am Title: Chapter 15: Mercy

Awww,yay:) This should be a very interesting few hours of babysitting...lol. I hope they totally air his dirty laundry. LOL. Kids do that to their parents all the time! It cracks me up. Can't wait to see what happens next!!

Author's Response: yeah i know right? hehe thanks so much!

Reviewer: Jay Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/30/08 08:03 am Title: Chapter 14: Decode

LOL the girls are so cute...and I love your interpretation of Nick as a Dad so far:) If he's really this cute when he actually has kids, I may have to relocate and put my nannying skills to use:) hehe.

He'd better call Marie, or I'm going to kick him. LOL.

Can't wait for more!!

Author's Response: heh aren't they adorable? love them! thanks so much hon!