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Reviewer: blueleeryan Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/25/08 06:19 pm Title: Chapter 13: All I Want For Christmas Is You

oh that was so hot I loved it and so can't wait for more. Update soon of both of your stories.

Author's Response: hehe thanks hon!

Reviewer: Southern_Sweetheart Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/25/08 04:51 pm Title: Chapter 13: All I Want For Christmas Is You

good update, but I wish she would've of told him!!

I can't wait to see how and what she says to him. I really hope that she goes with her heart. It will be cute to see how she interacts with the girls. Can't wait for the next update.

Author's Response: yeah it happens that way sometimes, hormones can be pretty persuasive lol. thanks so much hon!

Reviewer: cabybakes Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/25/08 04:49 pm Title: Chapter 13: All I Want For Christmas Is You

What a difficult position for Marie to be in...the step-mom position is a big one, and it definitely takes a special person to be on board for that.  All of her concerns are valid.

As you well know, I love the sexin' at the end...hot stuff, miss!  As I was reading it, a thought popped into my head...they have been contaminating his sister's home...lol...

I like seeing our stories together on the most recent listing on the main page!  I love this chapter...keep up the good work!  Hugs!!!



Author's Response: i know isn't it awesome? hehe i like seeing both our stories up there too! i'm glad you like this chapter so much! it does take a special person to be on board for the stepmom thing. I think Marie is the right girl though, she already likes them which is more than most could say. Thanks so much!

Reviewer: scarlett Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/25/08 08:20 am Title: Chapter 13: All I Want For Christmas Is You

hi. ;) i can't comment on anything right now.. i'm in between work and reading this, hahaha. i just want you to know that i read ths chapter and looking forward to the next one. have a nice week! ;)

Author's Response: aww cool thanks so much!!

Reviewer: Jay Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/25/08 07:37 am Title: Chapter 13: All I Want For Christmas Is You

Wow, some talk that was...lol. Already more of your amazing scenes:) haha. I'm glad she's decided to give it a chance, even though she hasn't really expressed that to him yet. It kinda reminds me of one of my best friends who just got married in May. She's been with her husband for almost 4 years, and he has a daughter. That was definitely an adjustment for them at first. It took her husband a long time to let her meet his daughter, because he didn't want to introduce them if it wasn't going to be serious, but their situation was weird. Their families had already known each other for years, and his daughter used to be up at the store he owns all the time, so she already knew my friend, but not well, and not that way. lol. So it was still pretty much like starting from scratch, and it freaked my friend out for awhile at first, but she's totally grown into it and is now the most amazing step-mom ever! And they have their own son on the way in February:) LOL. So those situations can definitely work out if it's wanted badly enough!

Can't wait for another chapter!!!

Author's Response: yes wasn't it? that's AWESOME for your friend! much happiness and luck to them! yeah i figured not alot of people write stories about a single dad and it's a story i've heard so many times with the many blended families i know so this is why i wanted to write this. to paint nick in a different light than we've ever seen him before. thanks so much hon!

Reviewer: Jay Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/25/08 07:08 am Title: Chapter 12: Revelations

Wow! LOL. Well I'm glad he finally told her everything...even though at this point he didn't really have a choice, it was kinda right in front of her face...lol. Sounds like she's got some thinking to do! I like that she didn't leave or act super awkward...she handled it pretty well for someone who was probably way shocked on the inside:)

Author's Response: lol i know right? she had to handle it that way, the girls are just too cute not to win you over!

Reviewer: mary Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/25/08 06:55 am Title: Chapter 13: All I Want For Christmas Is You

ahhhhhhhhh. totally didnt have teh needed conversation. bummer. but that was hot! cant wait for more.

Author's Response: i know right? they totally didn't have it. but they will eventually...i hope lol. Thanks so much hon!

Reviewer: Yara Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/23/08 11:05 am Title: Chapter 12: Revelations

Awww, the girls were great with her, and she was great with them. Ihope she decides to give it a shot. I know it must be a very confusing situation but hopefully she'll give thme a chance. Pleaseee update soon, I love the story. Take Care!

Author's Response: yeah it's got so many complications. I think it's undeniable that she wants to be with him. Just it's a lot to take in you know? Thanks hon!

Reviewer: Yara Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/23/08 10:50 am Title: Chapter 11: Evergreen

I can''t wait to read what her reaction to the shocking news will be. Great chapter; Take Care!

Author's Response: yay thanks hon!

Reviewer: Yara Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/23/08 10:33 am Title: Chapter 10: Flashbulb Glare

Well that didn't go the way they tought it would. Poor Nick. Man just blurt it out to her,lol. Hope he gets the chance to tell her before somebody else does.

Author's Response:

yeah nothing in life ever works out just the way someone pictures it. thanks so much hon

Reviewer: Yara Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/23/08 10:07 am Title: Chapter 9: Falling, Falling Fast

It's nice to know they're so excited about what's going on, specially him. Hope she reacts the way he wants to, to the news of her daughters. Great story..



Author's Response: yep they gotta be, they're falling in love! hehe he deserves this after what he went through losing Anna and all. thanks hon

Reviewer: Yara Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/23/08 09:50 am Title: Chapter 8: The Night Before The Morning After

I'm glad the had a wonderfu; time together. They should spend all the time they can together, but once again he should tell her about the girls, is already something kind of serious and for him not to tell her something so important is kind of bad, I would be mad with him if I was her for not telling me something like that.

Author's Response: yes he definitely needs to tell her but he's scared and yeah...you know how that works lol. Thanks so much hon

Reviewer: Yara Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/23/08 09:35 am Title: Chapter 7: Bloody Mary, Full of Grace

Well, glad Jo was ok. I'm so happy for both of them, but I just tought he should come clean with her a tell her the truth before she gets in depeer.

Author's Response: yeah jo's accident was a sort of wakeup call that he needs to tell her, but question is how? thanks so so much!

Reviewer: Yara Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/23/08 09:07 am Title: Chapter 6: The Blue Note

I'm so glad she decided to go to the club. Hope the night goes wonderful.

Author's Response: yeah i think it's great that she went, definitely a way to come out of her shell.

Reviewer: Yara Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/23/08 08:50 am Title: Chapter 5: In the City, City of Angels, Lonely as I am....

Awww, wonderful chapter. The kiss was so sweet, I hope she decides to go to the Jazz club. And if he really likes her, he should be honest with her and tell her about her daughters. Great chapter; Take Care!

Author's Response: the kiss was great wasn't it? thanks so much!