Date: 01/05/09 05:26 am Title: Chapter 1
Wow Erika told me about this story and I thought I would check it ou, very nicely written. Update soon!!!
Date: 01/05/09 12:25 am Title: Chapter 7
Holy cow!!! This is very good so far. I hope she's going to be okay. Update soon :)
Author's Response: I'll post more chapters soon. Didn't want to overload the site with new chapters though, lol. I'm so glad you like it. I'm having such a good time writing this!!
Date: 01/04/09 11:38 pm Title: Chapter 7
awesome job. Cant wait for more. :)
Date: 01/04/09 10:25 pm Title: Chapter 5
Ha...I like AJ's character in this. Nick sure was out of it...Wow.
Date: 01/04/09 09:59 pm Title: Chapter 4
Oh wow, Nick sure was out cold, you had me laughing with the "Did someone let a giant fart rip or something?” what a damn fool. Off to the next chapter...
Date: 01/04/09 09:48 pm Title: Chapter 3
OH god...poor Jill, I loved how you described the accident. Great job. Poor Nick, I'm wondering what his issue is, commitment phobia...I can actually see him crying. Poor baby!! Love it!!!
Date: 01/04/09 09:39 pm Title: Chapter 2
Oh wow! Intense chapter, so he's a playa I'm guessing and poor Jill got tired of taking his shit. NIce! I really like the way you describe things, you don't go overboard. Great chapter.
Date: 01/04/09 09:24 pm Title: Chapter 1
This sounds interesting. I'm off to read the next chapter.
Date: 01/04/09 01:43 pm Title: Chapter 5
I love your story already its great
hope you'll update more soon
Date: 01/04/09 06:46 am Title: Chapter 5
Whats next?? Definatly a good story and very well told. :)Great Job!!
Date: 01/04/09 06:30 am Title: Chapter 5
I like this story so far.Keep up the good work.I hope you update soon.
Date: 01/04/09 05:57 am Title: Chapter 4
good chapter it was a little short but really good. cant wait to see what happens next. :)
Date: 01/04/09 04:34 am Title: Chapter 4
Oh man... what's up with the police?? waiting for more!! :)
Date: 01/04/09 04:20 am Title: Chapter 4
sweet update real soon can't wait to see why cops are there
