Date: 06/25/14 09:37 am Title: Chapter 4
I love how Chance just assumed the Korean boy was the soldier's son, and nobody batted an eye about it. Family structures sure are weird these days. I really hope Gretchen can cheer up a bit thought; miscarriages are never (or almost never) the woman's fault. It's a stupid, but yet understandable, thing to blame yourself for something like that.
Author's Response: I did too when Julie wrote this chapter :). Family structures are random but in a good way. You're right about miscarriages but her grief and self blame are understandable at least. Thanks!
Date: 07/19/11 08:35 am Title: Chapter 4
Oh this was so sad. I have been through a miscarriage and it kills a small part of you that you never get back. I hope these two make it but have a feeling only one of them does. Like I said before fanfic gold.
Author's Response: Aww, I'm so sorry. :( I can only imagine how painful that must be... Thank you for the review!
Date: 07/27/09 05:18 am Title: Chapter 4
I love how you're introducing the characters like this :) Very creative and cleaver if i do say so myself.
Author's Response: Thank you! Hopefully you'll be able to keep them all straight... There are ten in all, which probably is a lot to keep track of at first, but we hope by the second or third part around for each of them, they'll be easier to remember. It was fun to write them this way. :)
Date: 02/08/09 12:03 am Title: Chapter 4
I liked this chapter. I am, as always, awaiting the next one. Perhaps additional exclamation marks would get that across better?
Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you're still reading and enjoying it! LOL at the exclamation marks(!!!). I'll post the next chapter if Rose doesn't appear soon.