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Reviewer: Cartersbitch Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/20/12 08:50 am Title: Chapter 70

Oh.my.god!!!!! I can't believe she died!!!! So sad :(((

Author's Response: Just goes to show, the zombies are still plenty dangerous even though they seem to be immune to the zombie virus. They can still eat their braaaaainssss!!! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: rebellious_one Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/31/11 04:32 am Title: Chapter 70

So glad that Howard is still with us, but man... I'm feeling more and more bad for Brian as he continues to dwell on the memories of his twin daughters! Even more emotional when he started comparing Gabby to them! :( Loved the interaction between Brian and Kayleigh, and how you described the scene. I completely envisioned lying under the stars in complete darkness... I love doing that. :) And also, the way you described how they could smell the stentch of the rotting corpse that was coming towards them. Damn, it was like I could smell it myself! >__< Lol.

But holy shit, I did NOT see this coming!!! Poor Kayleigh!! Just when they were becoming tighter and stronger as a unit, this happens! :( Just when I, along with the others, were starting to like Kayleigh!! Lol. That poor girl. I seriously cringed and almost GAGGED upon reading the zombies feasting on the side of her brain! Ugh, typing about it makes me want to gag again!! Lol. I seriously thought Brian would have been able to get to her in time, so that was a nice twist to jar us from becoming too comfortable with this story and their circumstances. I'm sad that it took a death of a character that was becoming likable to open their eyes and remind them that they are not invincible, though they seem to be immune to the virus, but it played out really well! :)



Author's Response: Thanks Reb!! Brian's story is the most emotional, which is probably why he's my favorite to write LOL. I just can't imagine trying to go on with life after experiencing that, but somehow he's got to. I'm glad we shocked you with Kayleigh's death. We definitely wanted to hit home the point that none of them are safe; the zombies are still a threat, and their survival isn't guaranteed. Like you said, even though they seem to be immune to the virus, they're not immune to having their braaaaainsss chewed out of their skulls LOL. Glad you liked!

Reviewer: steffilu84 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/21/10 04:38 pm Title: Chapter 70

Wow, congrats on the first main character kill. I was begining to think you weren't gonna do it, what with the last minute Howie save last chapter. I find myself in a hard spot reading this story because any good zombie story has all but a couple survivors if any at all but I don't want everyone in this story to die. I'm sure this has gone through your own heads. Anyway nice death scene, very well done. You guys have done an amazing job with this story, it's probably my favorite at the moment.



Author's Response: Thank you!! Yep, we'd been planning to kill Kayleigh for quite awhile; we just wanted to lead up to it... like, first we killed Spunky (Nick's dog), then we had AJ get bitten, then we had Howie almost die, and then we finally killed a character. She was the first, but she won't be the last. That said, we did a lot of killing early on with the minor characters, their family's and so on, so we wanted to keep our group of ten together for awhile, since they are like the ONLY known survivors at this point. But you're right; it wouldn't be realistic if they all survived the whole thing, zombie attacks and so on, and we wanted to make it clear to them and to the readers that the zombies are still a threat; even if they can't infect them, they can still kill them. I'm glad you're still loving the story; thanks so much for the feedback!!

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/18/10 07:55 pm Title: Chapter 70

Sorry I didn't review last night, I read this at work even though I'm not supposed to use my phone! Just reread the chapter, and OMFG this made me cry so much reading it!!!! Poor Kayleigh....even though she was not one of my favorite characters, I was still sad for her. They should have known that the zombies would eventually find their way out of the water. I liked the birthday party scene and Nick calling Jo J-lo was cute lol. I bawled when I read the part about Kayleigh....they should have known better than to leave their guns behind....amazing chapter can't wait for more! Glad they are giving her a proper funeral and Brian is starting to accept God again.

Author's Response: LOL no problem, Tracy! Aww, did it really make you cry? That is awesome... that's the biggest compliment ever for a chapter like this! Glad it was emotional. Thank you so much!!

Reviewer: brian_fan_4eva Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/18/10 12:27 pm Title: Chapter 70

OMG!!! You made me cry with this chapter!!

Author's Response: Aww, really? Thank you!! That's the biggest compliment you could give for a chapter like this. =D

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/18/10 07:33 am Title: Chapter 70

Oh no!!! Poor Kayleigh. That chapter was so good, I was on the edge of my seat reading it and didn't actually think the zombies would get her. I'm glad Brian took her back to the base though and that they are giving her a proper funeral.

Author's Response: Thanks Steph!! We wanted to make it clear that no one is safe; we're not afraid to kill characters. Kayleigh is the first of the ten, but won't be the last... mwahaha! LOL Thanks so much for the review; glad you liked the chapter!

Reviewer: Sam_noelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/18/10 06:52 am Title: Chapter 70

Damn...that was intense. I couldn't even get through reading the whole description of her death because that was so intense. How sad. Wow, if ya'll kill one of the guys off I will lose it though, so let's not let that happen, kay? Thanks. lol

Author's Response: Thank you! LOL We make no promises... ;) But thanks for the review!

Reviewer: luna610 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/18/10 06:39 am Title: Chapter 70

Wow. What a great chap. Love the scripture at the beginning. I'm surprised that she was killed off but I felt like one of them would probably die at some point...actually, I thought it might be Howie last chap. lol. It was really sad the way it happened and I wonder if Brian is feeling guilty. Not that it's his fault. I love how everyone's feelings were described. And I love how throughout the entire story, ya'll kept the guys in character while it being an AU.

What a scary scene to picture the zombies in the water. That's some scary shit! I'm glad that Brian finally told them about being a minister and I hope that he can be more in tune with those feelings. Poor thing...I feel for all of them but ya'll are killing me with poor Brian :(

Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Thanks Sel! LOL we wanted to go for the shock... Howie would have been too easy. ;) Thanks for your compliment on the characters! That's the fun challenge of an AU, I think, trying to keep the boys themselves even though they're not "The Backstreet Boys." I thought zombies in the water were scary too... I was picturing that scene from the first Pirates of the Caribbean, where the cursed pirates are walking underwater. Creepy. Thanks so much; I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: Kentuckychickrk Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/18/10 02:55 am Title: Chapter 70

:( Okay... not ashamed to admit that I shed many tears over this chapter! I wasn't a huge Kayleigh fan but dang... didn't want to see her die! Didn't want to see any of them die. Good twist though, definitely did not see it coming!

Author's Response: Aww, did you really? Love it! I take that as a huge compliment, so thank you!! We wanted to kill somebody off at some point to show that the zombies are still a threat, even if they can't infect them with a bite. Didn't want them feeling too safe or anything. ;) Glad you liked the twist, and we appreciate your review! Thanks, Rachel! :)

Reviewer: AJBrianFan Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/18/10 02:04 am Title: Chapter 70

Kayleigh... :( Great twist and chapter. How sad. Interesting about Brian's faith waxing and waning, I think all Christians have their doubts at some point in their walk with God, I know I do. Can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Thanks! I do think even the most devout Christians might question their faith if they were put through what he has been. But when it came down to it, praying was the only thing he could do for Kayleigh, so he did what he knew to do. Glad you liked the chapter - thanks for the review!

Reviewer: starbeamz2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/18/10 12:37 am Title: Chapter 70

WOW. I didn't think you guys would kill one of the characters off! As annoying as she might have been, I feel bad that Kayleigh died and in the way that she died. *sniff* But Brian's faith is returning to solid ground, so that's good. Seriously, that was an INTENSE chapter. Goooooo, Double Rainbow!

Author's Response: Thanks, Sarah!! We've had this planned for quite awhile, but we were hoping it would be shocking to the readers. We just didn't want our characters getting too comfortable, now that they think they're all immune to the zombie virus. The zombies may not be able to infect them with their bite, but they can still eat their braaaains! They're still a threat. But yes, Brian's crisis of faith is starting to resolve, so good news for him. Glad you enjoyed the chapter! It was fun to write!