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Reviewer: brian_fan_4eva Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/09/09 07:37 pm Title: Chapter 7

ooh more soon!!

Author's Response: Thanks! :)

Reviewer: brian_fan_4eva Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/08/09 11:13 pm Title: Chapter 5

oooh....more soon!

Author's Response: Thanks! Chapter 6 will be posted later! :)

Reviewer: Louise Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/08/09 05:29 am Title: Chapter 5

Now you've got me totally hooked! Superb writing so far, ladies... as expected. Nice introductions for each character, I can feel the tension slowly building. Will be prowling for updates. Kudos!

Author's Response: Yay! We're so thrilled to hear that from you, cause you're also an awesome writer. Thanks for reading :)

Reviewer: Julilly Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/08/09 01:03 am Title: Chapter 4

I liked this chapter. I am, as always, awaiting the next one. Perhaps additional exclamation marks would get that across better?

Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you're still reading and enjoying it! LOL at the exclamation marks(!!!). I'll post the next chapter if Rose doesn't appear soon.

Reviewer: brian_fan_4eva Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/07/09 06:16 am Title: Chapter 4

poor Gretchen!  more soon!

Author's Response: Thanks for your reviews! :) Another chapter will be posted later today!

Reviewer: Julilly Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/07/09 02:29 am Title: Chapter 3

I don't know how I feel about this chapter... I guess I'm not sure where you're taking me at this point. I shall keep reading! Onward!

Author's Response: There's a destination to this, we swear :). We're glad you're sticking with us though! We also love your feedback so thankies

Reviewer: brian_fan_4eva Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/06/09 06:52 pm Title: Chapter 3

ooh poor Gabby!  more soon!

Author's Response: Thanks, we appreciate the feedback hehe

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/06/09 10:25 am Title: Chapter 3

It's a shame she's kind of grown apart from her Mom, but I suppose grief does different things to people.

Looking forward to more :)

Author's Response: I know, their relationship issues make me (Rose lol) sad. We're glad you're enjoying it, thanks for reading and the feedback :)

Reviewer: Julilly Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/05/09 01:44 pm Title: Chapter 2

Well I definitely need to see where this is going. A great picture was painted in this chapter, even though we don't know a lot about Jo we seem to still know what she's like. I'm just wondering how she plays into all of this, so I look forward to the next installment.

Author's Response: Yay, you came back for more! :) Thanks for reading and reviewing - glad you're liking it so far, and we sure appreciate your feedback!

Reviewer: kevmylove Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/05/09 05:51 am Title: Chapter 2

Aw, Jo's story is a sad one, but I'm guessing she's part of the ten mentioned in the summary.

I'm really enjoying this. It's waaaay different from what I usually read, but I'm intrigued ladies.



Author's Response: Yep, she is. Thanks so much for your feedback; we're thrilled you're enjoying it, especially since you said it's not the kind of story you usually read. :)

Reviewer: kevmylove Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/05/09 05:41 am Title: Chapter 1

Very interesting start, sounds like Nick has a bit of issues. I'm on to the next chapter...

Author's Response: Thanks for checking it out! Glad you're liking it so far! :)

Reviewer: brian_fan_4eva Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/05/09 03:26 am Title: Chapter 2

another interesting aspect to the story! can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading! We love your feedback :)

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/04/09 10:28 pm Title: Chapter 2

Really enjoying this story, can't wait for more :)

Author's Response: Thanks! We're glad you like it. No worries, you'll get more very soon :)

Reviewer: brian_fan_4eva Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/04/09 05:24 am Title: Chapter 1

ooh interesting!  I like it and want more!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks so much!!! Glad you're liking it so far! :)

Reviewer: Julilly Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/04/09 02:38 am Title: Chapter 1

My interest, you may have piqued it!

Author's Response: Whoo hoo! That means a lot! Thanks, Julilly! :D