Date: 06/16/09 07:59 pm Title: Her Obsession
OH, i agree..i want more. but, even in that brief account, you could feel all she was feeling...and that was just amazing! Wonderful job!
Author's Response: Thank you sooooo much. That was the point of this short story for me. I wrote it right after the first time I met the Boys, so I was trying to portray those emotions through the first meeting at the end! Thanks again for reading!
Date: 04/12/09 11:52 pm Title: Her Obsession
That's all? I want more. You left it open for so much more.
Author's Response: Yeah, that's all for now. :) Maybe I'll elaborate more later...
Author's Response: Yeah, that's all for now. :) Maybe I'll elaborate more later...
Date: 03/22/09 07:37 am Title: Her Obsession
I like it...nice job. The name fits well.
Author's Response: Thanks! :)
Author's Response: Thanks! :)
Date: 03/02/09 05:14 am Title: Her Obsession
This wa awesome. You could use this as a first chapter. I could really see this going a lot further!!! :)
Author's Response: Aww, thanks. I thought about going further, but as of right now, I think I'm gonna keep it this way :)
Date: 03/02/09 12:55 am Title: Her Obsession
Wow this was good too bad its only one chapter
Author's Response: Thanks for reading. It's supposed to be kind of a cliffhanger :) Maybe I'll elaborate on it later.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading. It's supposed to be kind of a cliffhanger :) Maybe I'll elaborate on it later.
