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Reviewer: mary Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/05/09 11:07 am Title: Scene 28

oooh yeah didnt think of the blonde helping her. hopefully she doesnt get caught at teh funeral. that would be so sad.

Reviewer: mary Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/21/09 11:27 am Title: Scene 25

ahh really good job! i cant believe they wnt to arrest her. she looks might suspicious to them now. more than before. cant wait for more!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: mary Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/13/09 01:09 pm Title: Scene 24

ahh who is frikin setting her up! cant wait for more

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/08/09 02:08 pm Title: Scene 20

Wow that was so sad! Poor Naomi! That is weird about the dream she had and then Howie being found dead. I just wnt to hug all of them! Can't wait for more! Great job as usual

Author's Response: Thanks so much!

Reviewer: mary Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/07/09 08:34 pm Title: Scene 19

ahh that was a haunting dream. creeppy. cant wait for more!

Reviewer: mary Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/30/09 09:29 pm Title: Scene 18

creeeepy. the ending lines were really well written though with beautiful imagery.

Author's Response: Aww, thanks! That's what I was going for! :)

Reviewer: mary Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/15/09 09:55 am Title: Scene 16

ahhh woah! thats cute! and crazy! cant wait for more!

Author's Response: Figured I throw a little plot twist in there, lol. :)

Reviewer: nickgene25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/15/09 06:56 pm Title: Scene 3

Wonder what she is hiding. Was it her in that photo? Can't wait for next chapter!

Reviewer: nickgene25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/15/09 06:43 pm Title: Scene 2

Nick is sure blushing alot. This is a new side of Nick.

Reviewer: nickgene25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/15/09 06:36 pm Title: Scene 1

So far I am intrigued! Good start!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/07/09 09:34 pm Title: Scene 13

loving this story...hmmm kevin is jealous!! I sense drama developing...can't wait for more

Author's Response: Good - I'm glad you're liking it!

Reviewer: mary Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/29/09 07:48 pm Title: Scene 13

oooh wow. that was a great setting for her to get everything out.
and the song sounded beautiful.
cant wait for more!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: mary Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/21/09 07:35 am Title: Scene 11

I thought they had been intimate that first time.. Im too lazy to go back and check but I thought they had sex...?

Author's Response: Nah...they just made out the first time, lol...

Reviewer: mary Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/19/09 08:59 pm Title: Scene 10

aw cutee i like her girlfriends

Author's Response: Aww, thanks! :)

Reviewer: mary Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/19/09 08:56 pm Title: Scene 9

she is so going to end up cheating on nick at some point. but i hope im wrong! hot update!

Author's Response: Or maybe its just the author's guilty pleasure...lol!!