Date: 09/05/09 02:36 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh, that was a sad one, poor Kev!
Date: 06/18/09 05:14 am Title: Chapter 1
That was really well written... and amazingly touching for so few words. Great job!!!
Date: 06/17/09 08:18 am Title: Chapter 1
Aw that was cute!! Very nice!
Date: 06/04/09 09:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
Aww. You managed to convey a lot in just a few words. Very sad, but very nicely done.
Date: 06/04/09 07:48 pm Title: Chapter 1
I agree, it was a job well done! It showed the emotions rather well, love that, even more when you get across in a such a short story. Great job!
Date: 06/04/09 06:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
aww that was good, and sweet of the Nick to give Kevin's little boy a book.
Date: 06/04/09 06:02 pm Title: Chapter 1
Aww that was very sad and depressing. Poor Kevin :O( You did a great job showing Nick's emotions, but you always do a great job with that. YAY for you writing this challenge. I want you to do some more please! :O)