It's been such a long time since I posted anything. I was reading this story the other day and decided that I could write it much better now. So that's what I'm going to do, and I'm renaming a few characters too. This story is going to be much better than it was when I first posted it. If you would like to read the original to compare, just leave me a comment telling me how to email it to you and you shall get it.


I hope you like the new version as much as I'm liking it.