Lucy sounds like me--lol

aw--I hope her and A.J hook up!!--they'd be a cute pair-lol, hmmmm...I getting the feeling that this tour should be interesting...lol

Good chappy hun!!

trina

YAY!!!

FINALLY...Gabrielle decides to be nice!!
I really really really love this story!!!

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!

trina

hhhmmmm...

Okay I have a suggestion-I hope you don't mind me giving you advice?-And please don't take what I say the wrong way-becuase I mean it when I say that I like this story...

I really think that the storyline is good-you do have a really good plot and theres so much you could do with this story-like expanding it more and making it more creative-and you did that-you have the character of Deanna, your showing a side of her that she hasn't told anyone-and its something that so much of an issue with her, and its an issue that I'm positive alot of people can relate to-but I think that you need to flesh it out a little you know?-like instead of having her rush out with it by telling Nick about it-maybe having her have flash backs about it instead?-Take your time with this story-express her feelings...how she feels about it-let us readers get to know/and feel what this character is going through

I hope you don't take what i have said the wrong way--I'm just trying to give you some feed back on this story :)--But I do think that you honestly have a good plot hun :)

trina

Author's Response: Thank you very much for the suggestions. Hmmmm... What to say though... Basically this is a joint fan fiction from four or five years ago, essentially, what\'s there is it, as I\'ve said before. But, aside from that, thank you for your feedback. I\'m happy to know that people do sit back and read what I\'ve written. If I were ever to continue the story on behalf of my friends, yes, that is certainly an issue I would address. But for now, I am preoccupied with my own personal projects. However, thank you once again for the critacism. It is greatly appreciated. ^_^ ~*Dee*

aaawww--okay--not gonna lie--I felt my eyes watering at the part where the girls had to say good-bye...that was soooo sad....and it was Brian who adopted Michelle?--aw...I can't wait to see where your going to go with this story--the chapters are getting better and better--good job hun!!

trina

Author's Response: I nearly made you cry?! *jaw drops* now that\'s what I call FLATTERING!!

aaaaww

I'm so glad that shes finally found a home where she's going to be loved-and its sad to hear a child not being use to that kind of attention you know?--I really am enjoying this story!!--I really do hope you cotinue with it!!

UPDATE ASAP PLEASE!!!!

trina

Author's Response: Wow... I am so happy you like the story, and I will definitely continue, and soon. A new chapter is in the works.

OMG!!!

This story I soooo awesome!!--I loved this chapter-it was a really fun and interesting chapter--aw--she likes A.J???--I can't blame her--I heart him too!!--lol--hmmmm...I wonder why she skipped school??-Is it because of her boyfriend??

Good job!!

trina

GOOD CHAPTER!!

I hope that Ashely does confide to A.J though--its just too much for one person to hold to themself you know?--And I'm glad that A.J's noticing that somethings up--and he bought her an Nsync CD???--LOL--thats a step...

I'm soooo soooo glad to see that you have updated!!--Keep up the good work hun!!-I can't wait to reaD more!!

trina

Paul just HAD to be nosy eh??--lol

aw--I can't help but feel bad for them...

Oh I've been there--theres moments where I hate men too--but in the end...you can't help but love em--lol

Oh yay!!--road trip!!--glad to see the girls keeping their heads up throughout their struggles :)

good chappy!!

trina