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A Little Taste of Sin by Mellz Bellz Rated: R [ - ]
Summary:

After betraying her trust yet again, Alyssa finally gave up on Nick. She moved on and began a seperate life far away from him. But there are some people that life just won't let you let go of. What happens when they find their lifes entwined once more? Now that the stakes are higher, will they risk losing everything they have for another chance? Sequel to Under my Skin.


Categories: Fanfiction > Backstreet Boys
Characters: Nick
Genres: Angst, Drama, Humor, Romance
Warnings: Death, Graphic Sexual Content, Violence
 Series: Not Like We Predicted
Chapters: 61 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes
Word count: 329529
Read Count: 160210


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Published: 11/13/07 » Updated: 11/12/08
Reviewer: bsbfrk411 Signed
Date: 03/12/08 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 16 - False Alarm

im just guessing the next chapter is going to be.. um.. not PG13 lol.. and if it as, after his myspace video.. i just might die. not sure i can handle to much more R-rated nick lol

Author's Response:

LMAO OMG TOO freaky because my friend JUST showed me that video and then you left that review... VERY weird lol * gets a chill* Actually I only have one more scene of the next chapter to write and so far yea... I think it goes past the PG-13 line. I'm going to try to write some more tonight, but I'm actually a little disturbed by that video LOL

Reviewer: bsbfrk411 Signed
Date: 03/16/08 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 17 - Downpour

:-D

FINALLY!!

ok, so..wow. Nick and alyssa have come along way.. no pun intended lol. (couldn't resist). I think it's interesting that Sean was sort of the one to help Alyssa break down her walls and become comfortable with herself, yet nick is the one really reaping the benefits. As for nick, it's obvious he's a lot less selfish now and alyssa's happiness and satisfaction was obviously very important to him, which only heightened the experience. I also think it was interesting that Alyssa took her ring off and suddenly felt less guilty about what she did. Her comfort with Nick is undeniable, but now they just complicated things. This could be fun!

So...Did uh.. Nick's little video inspire you at all? LMAO!

Awesome chapter!!



Author's Response:

*give you a big giant cookie* Yay! I'm SOO glad that you said everything you did because you are dead on with pretty much everything. I'm glad that you can already see that by Sean opening her up, he actually gave her the guts to send her running straight into Nick's arms. Furthermore now that she's got that confidence it makes their relationship even stronger. That is a point that I think definitely may come up again later in the story. At first I actually wasn't thinking about how Nick being so considerate actually showed growth in his character, but one of my beta pointed it out early on in the scene and I was like Wow... You're totally right! So I'm glad I went with it. And the ring? Yay even more! That'll come up again soon. But yes it was kind of symbolic the whole taking off the ring thing. Lot's of fun drama up ahead!

LMAO Nick's My Space video was interesting lol. My friend and I weren't sure in the beginning what to think. It was actually surprisingly awakward LOL I think someone needs to remove the webcam from his laptop :)

Reviewer: bsbfrk411 Signed
Date: 03/17/08 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 18 - Reality Sets In

eeew... fun night. make her call nick. she'll appreciate it more lol.

Yea I think alyssa definately just built some really thick walls around sean, obivously influenced by his own actions. Now he has to break them down, only, they're walls made of Nick Carter, and those are unbreakable. :p



Author's Response: Yepp her relationship with Sean is pretty much screwed, but remember Sean is supposed to be deployed to Iraq pretty soon...

Reviewer: bsbfrk411 Signed
Date: 03/17/08 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 18 - Reality Sets In

yea so they'll be some extra lovin going on between her and nick lol. she cant resist him. no one can.

im so proud of my pun on unbreakable im telling my friend the whole freakin story lol



Author's Response: LOL! I didn't even catch that one! Hmm and about that extra lovin maybe... But it WILL be awhile. There's a lot more drama that can unfold before they can be together again

Reviewer: bsbfrk411 Signed
Date: 03/25/08 Title: A Little Taste of Sin

you have horrible luck lol

Reviewer: bsbfrk411 Signed
Date: 04/02/08 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 19 - The Power of Goodbye

lol i was like yea that isnt real lmao. entertaining though!

Author's Response: I knew you'd see through it *glares* lol j/k. Glad you appreciated it at least.

Reviewer: bsbfrk411 Signed
Date: 04/02/08 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 19- The Power of Goodbye (Real Version)

interesting.. and i have no jokes for this one lol, sorryyy. but yea im curious to see what nick does and how shayla reacts, etc. i wasnt expecting that at all...

Author's Response: Yea unfortunately this was a pretty serious chapter. Had to throw a monkey wrench in there somewhere...

Reviewer: bsbfrk411 Signed
Date: 04/06/08 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 20 - Table For One

i think shes pregnant!!!!

that was a good chapter even if it was annoying to write. But I'm kinda wondering about what's going on with Nick and Shayla since he was so casual about hooking up with alyssa. Can't wait for things to heat up!



Author's Response: Possibly... Next chapter that one will be answered I promise. As for Nick and Shayla I apologize. I have kind of been neglecting what is going on with them. They were kinf of put on the backburner for a bit because the next few chapters more focuses on Alyssa and then Alyssa's relationship with Nick, but I will keep that in mind and try to work some more of what is going on between Nick and Shayla when I can.

Reviewer: bsbfrk411 Signed
Date: 04/22/08 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 21 - The Greatest Gift of All

i think it's interesting that alyssa seems to have completely forgotten about sleeping with nick. When she was talking to kim, right around "Sean and I have had so much trouble conceiving that I seriously doubt that something magical happened right before he left," would have been the moment, for me at least, that I went, "...ooooo fuck." lol So shes obviously blatently ignoring it or right now she's so excited that she's forgetting to consider it, and since she isn't realizing that little complication, I'm curious to see what will tip her off.

good luck updating again lol



Author's Response: I see it more as Alyssa is trying to act as if it never happened to herself, so she's kind of repressing it and forcing herself to block it out of her mind. Is it the most healthiest approach? Definitely not and it will come to bite her in the ass. I think it's also like you said she's excited and knows how much this means to Sean, so she's kind of assuming that it HAS to be his. Right now she doesn't want to consider the alternative. wait to next chapter though...

Reviewer: bsbfrk411 Signed
Date: 04/23/08 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 22 - A Sterile Revelation

hahahhahahahahahahahahahah

 

thats all i have to say.



Author's Response: I hope that's a good laugh LOL All I can say is things are going to get VERY interesting.

Reviewer: bsbfrk411 Signed
Date: 04/26/08 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 23 - Denial Is Not Just a River

that's gotta suck. I'm curious as to how she will handle it. Obviously no matter what she does, it's gonna be a nightmare. can't wait for more!!



Author's Response: Yea its really a lose lose situation. The question being is what does she want to give up? Her marriage? Or Nick?

Reviewer: bsbfrk411 Signed
Date: 04/27/08 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 24 - Just Hit Static

it almost seems like nick knows.. he just doesnt realize he knows. Does that make sense? Subconscience I guess. I feel some serious drama brewing.. cant wait!

Author's Response: Really? I was definitely debating him kind of considering the idea for a moment, but decided not to because I want to catch him off guard when he does find out. Interesting way of looking at it but I can definitely see that. And yes... Major drama is a coming!

Reviewer: bsbfrk411 Signed
Date: 04/28/08 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 24 - Just Hit Static

I think what made me percieve it that way is how he was so confused by alyssa not telling him she was pregnant then completely avoiding him. Maybe he doesn't necessarily know that the baby is his, but he knows SOMETHING isn't right about the situation. So maybe when he finds out, the actual news will be a surprise, but not the fact that there was something more going on the whole time? Does that make sense lol

Author's Response: Oh yea absolutely. I mean he IS beginning to suspect that she's hiding SOMETHING from him. The fact that he's the father of her baby? Now that'll be a shocker for him.

Reviewer: bsbfrk411 Signed
Date: 04/28/08 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 25 - You Can Run But You Can't Hide

oh snap. she's pregnant with his kid and totally in love with him and he bails? oh nickolas.. what are we going to do with you? I think he'll come around though. He wants this, but only with her. Looks like the battle to get her back has begun.

Author's Response:

LOl That's Nick for you! Don't worry though, he'll be back. He just needs to wait for the initial shock to wear off.

Reviewer: bsbfrk411 Signed
Date: 05/05/08 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 26 - Emotion Sickness

wow, i really didn't think alyssa would do that, but at the same time i knew she wasn't going to leave sean for nick just like that. and the whole thing with nick running back to shayla cause he feels sorry for himself is a very interesting twists. you make me curious. :) good update, can't wait for more!!

Author's Response: Curious is good lol. You know I never like to make things dull. I'm happy to hear that you're intrigued and not wanting to like smite me LOL