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A Little Taste of Sin by Mellz Bellz Rated: R [ - ]
Summary:

After betraying her trust yet again, Alyssa finally gave up on Nick. She moved on and began a seperate life far away from him. But there are some people that life just won't let you let go of. What happens when they find their lifes entwined once more? Now that the stakes are higher, will they risk losing everything they have for another chance? Sequel to Under my Skin.


Categories: Fanfiction > Backstreet Boys
Characters: Nick
Genres: Angst, Drama, Humor, Romance
Warnings: Death, Graphic Sexual Content, Violence
 Series: Not Like We Predicted
Chapters: 61 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes
Word count: 329529
Read Count: 160195


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Published: 11/13/07 » Updated: 11/12/08
Reviewer: bsbfrk411 Signed
Date: 05/12/08 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 27 - Girls Behaving Badly

ooooo!! drama drama drama!! hopefully no one blabs alyssa's secret but im more interested to read about this wedding lol good chapter!



Author's Response: The wedding will definitely be interesting. Look for it soon. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: bsbfrk411 Signed
Date: 05/19/08 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 28 - Going to the Chapel

wow..alyssa's a whore lmao. nice!

There's so many elements to this story, it must be hard to keep track of everything but its cool how each chapter intertwines yet its almost like there's 2 or 3 different stories being told just to get to one final ending. you keep things interesting thats for sure lol nice update!



Author's Response:

Oh God... Sometimes I'm pulling my hair out for deciding on a story this complex. It sure is a bitch, but I'm trying to see it through. I've contemplated writing a prequel to UMS which would be everything in like their previous relationship from like 2000 -2002, but I'm not sure because it would almost feel like going backwards. I like both of them a lot better now lol. Anyway I do try to intertwine stuff as much as possible so I'm glad that you appreciate the complexity.

And oh ya lol Alyssa is SO going to hell. Not only is she thinking about sex in a church, but hello? She's having her ex b/f's baby while her husband is over in Iraq? I'd say that pretty much condems her LOl

Reviewer: bsbfrk411 Signed
Date: 05/26/08 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 29 - You May Now Kiss the Bridesmaid

poor nick. he just can't win can he? lol

you know what i think is interesting about signs in life and searhing or not searching for them? To me, no one ever necessarily searches for signs until they find a reason to need one. Then, once they have that reason, everything that happens is somehow turned into a "sign". In a sense, I think seeing or noticing signs is almost a jinx. Life is weird sometimes.

awesome chapter!



Author's Response: That is a very interesting point there about "signs." You're right Nick can definitely use one right now which is prolly why he's reading into the symbolic meaning of catching a garter on his beer bottle lol Question is, IS it a sign or not? Guess we'll have to wait and see.

Reviewer: bsbfrk411 Signed
Date: 05/26/08 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 30 - Damage Control

yea alyssa definitely needs to change her mind about all this. sean is no nick and never will be, and lets face it, nick is perfect lol

cant wait for more! good update!



Author's Response: Haha No one can compare to Nick! Well we'll just have to see if or when Alyssa comes around.

Reviewer: bsbfrk411 Signed
Date: 05/29/08 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 31 - Hormonal Overdrive

ugh.. dont let him be optomoistic. I was optomistic for the last 2 months. big mistake. you wanna see over emotional?!?! if alyssa hurts nick im gonna put myself in this story and kill her.

lmao. i need help. and i hate guys.

good chapter by the way. thanks for updating so soon.



Author's Response: Ooh I hate guys too! In fact, I was writing that great make out scene and this guy I was talking to had to get all pissy on me n I totally lost my flow! Damn them LOl Nick's hurt Alyssa too though in the past. You'll just have to wait and see how this plays out I guess.

Reviewer: bsbfrk411 Signed
Date: 06/08/08 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 32 - Flirting With Temptation

nice place to stop lol!

This was a good chapter so no worries. I know you want this story to come across as believable, but at the same time, it is fiction so you can stretch "reality" a little. But honestly I don't think this chapter was so out there that it's not even plausable. In fact, I think it could happen pretty easily if the right people were involved. Don't doubt yourself. You're a good writer.



Author's Response:

Yea I know right? Lol Sorry about that, but I needed to stop somewhere. Next chapter will not disapoint i hope.

Thanks for the reassurance. What mostly bothered me was whether or not I was stretching Alyssa in a way that was believable for her. I mean yes, I have the pregnancy hormones to fall back on and pin the blame on, but I'm also a little afraid of making her do or say something that is just not in her personality. Little secret, but I've actually scaled back on a few events that were supposed to happen in my outline because I felt that it was almost TOO much for her at this point with Nick. For instance last chapter was originally supposed to end in a blowjob and ths chapter was supposed to have a little action going on underneath the table *winks*

Reviewer: bsbfrk411 Signed
Date: 06/08/08 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 32 - Flirting With Temptation

lmaooo.. you cheated us!! haha

No actually that was probably a good move. Not that it wouldn't have made things REALLY interesting, but I think that at some point it goes beyond pregnancy hormones, which is fine if that's the direction you want to take the story. But obviously you're still keep some morality involved.. at least for now lol, so you don't want her to just transform into a completely different and sex obsessed person. If you're worried about alyssa's actions in this chapter, you can always put some of the blame on her being pissed at sean right now. Let's face it, pissed off pregnant women are vengeful lol



Author's Response: Oh yea lol Sean has a lot to do with her actions, but yea I think it was a smart move. Way too much too soon and not in Alyssa's personality at all even with raging hormones. Maybe there will be a point where she gets there, but of course not right away. Haha Sorry if you feel cheated though. Next chapter may offer you SOME consolation.

Reviewer: bsbfrk411 Signed
Date: 06/22/08 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 33 - Too Close for Comfort

so i guess until you experience something it's hard to judge it accurately, and this whole time I've been all for Nick and Alyssa hooking up just cause that's what I want to happen, and who cares about sean, right? Not so much. I kinda feel his pain these days, or at least the pain he would feel if he finds out, so I'm kind of sitting in the "they probably shouldn't be hooking up while they're both married" boat lol But that was an awesome chapter. I'm glad you finally updated. Keep it coming!

Author's Response: I'm happy to hear that you're not exactly in agreement with the subject at hand either. Cheating is wrong and really can't be justified. As for the story though I purposely try to have Nick and Alyssa not always doing the right thing because I feel that is realistic. I defnitely see where you are coming from though. I think that they'll just have to learn their lesson the hard way. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: bsbfrk411 Signed
Date: 07/04/08 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 34 - Sweetest Sin

It's interesting how when something is right, no matter how wrong everything else is, it just doesn't matter. If I was a lawyer I would totally start drawing up the divorce papers for you :) haha nice chapter!

Author's Response: LOL It is true... What they are doing is completely wrong, yet they really and truly belong to each other. I wouldn't draw up divorce papers just yet though... Alyssa needs to tell Sean first.

Reviewer: bsbfrk411 Signed
Date: 07/04/08 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 35 - Still My Addiction

that was a little tense lol and im just guessing kim has a big mouth so next chapter should be realllly interesting. hehe good update.

Author's Response:

I'm not sure if Kim is going to say anything right away because that would be really bitchy. I think she just wanted Alyssa to know she knows so that hopefully it'll scare Alyssa into ending things w/ Nick. Will it ork? Prolly not, but Kim prolly won't say snything right away.

Reviewer: bsbfrk411 Signed
Date: 07/09/08 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 36 - Family Matters

Personally, I think Nick is worth it. Period. Whatever "it" is, he's worth it. But honestly, I guess i was being naive too bcause I considered the reactions from her family, but I completely forgot about this whole thing finding its way into magazines and fun stuff like that. interesting to think about. her and nick need to talk lol. awesome chapter.

Author's Response: Nick is definitely worth it, but I as a writer haven't gotten into the whole scandal aspect of this all yet. I thought it would be a good idea to bring it up in Alyssa's mind, so its there. It'll definitey impact her willingness to jump right back into things w/Nick. Her and Nick DO need to talk though. You're right about that.

Reviewer: bsbfrk411 Signed
Date: 07/14/08 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 38 - What's In a Name?

well finally!! so now im just wondering what kinda drama is gonna come up bewteen while alyssa's still waiting on sean to come up. plus, im kinda curious if she's gonna get cold feet when the moment finally arrives. awesome chatper! can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Well Sean comes back in 6 chapters actually, so its upcoming and the holidays are approaching too... You'll have to see whether or not she gets cold feet. Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: bsbfrk411 Signed
Date: 07/16/08 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 39 - I Won't be Home for Christmas

the whole time I was reading this chapter I was wondering if a PI was ever gonna be involved.. how ironic. And that was pretty hot how nick was like in control! yum! hahah awesome chapter!

Author's Response: LOL You must know Shayla well! I just totally figure her to be the type of wife who would hire a PI to dig up the dirt on whether or not her husband is having an affair. And it's totally hot when Nick gets all angry and stands up for what he wants. Who wouldn't give him his way? lol

Reviewer: bsbfrk411 Signed
Date: 07/30/08 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 40 - Naughty or Nice

yay i finally read this chapter lol I just turned 21 so i was a little busy lol ;-)

ha, I love it! Shayla's such a whore, she deserves to have this happen to her. But obviously nick wasn't as cautious as he meant to be lol. I have a feeling this is gonna get a little bit dramatic lol. awesome chapter. can't wait for more!

Reviewer: bsbfrk411 Signed
Date: 08/05/08 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 41 - Giving is Half the Fun

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww that was so sweet. these two are so meant to be lol awesome update. have fun on your next trip!

Author's Response: Thanks I'm glad you enjoyed it!