Reviewer: Sakabelle Signed
Date: 09/17/08
Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 47 - Your Love is a Lie
AWESOME! (Yup, so awesome that it needed to be in caps.) It was incredibly long, which rocked. I can see where you would have almost forgotten about some things, there sure was a lot going on in this chapter.
When Alyssa spotted Sean my breath caught in my throat. I'm glad she was able to keep her cool around him though. Nick on the other hand... lol I loved his orgasm comment. Of course that's something Nickers would say, ha!
Shayla is a supreme bitch to the extreme.. but you know what? She just got solid proof that her husband was having an affair and having a child with not only another woman, his ex-fiancee at that! Of course she's going to be upset, but that doesn't justify her pushing Alyssa down the stairs. (Though, the way I read it, it didn't really seem like she tried to make Alyssa fall on purpose..) Still everyone's going to have it out for her now. And with all the media there? Shiiit.
I adored this chapter, Mel. Needless to say I'm on the edge of my seat waiting for the next update. You definitely did the job. You're an excellent writer and you've definitely come a long way since UMS. =) Great work!!
Author's Response:
There was a lot going on! In fact, I almost forgot to include the scene where Shayla finds the sonogram which was just a tiny bit important lol. Yes... Nick's orgasm comment was great! One of my favorite lines. Sean pretty much walked right into that one.
I'm really glad that you made that comment about Shayla. I mean I know after this chapter everyone wants to kill her and I can't say that I blame them, but there's a lot more to her than just Nick's bitchy wife. She's arguably one of my more interesting characters. Finding out everything she has in the manner she has definitely has chipped away at her sanity a little bit. And yes she definitely did not purposely push Alyssa thinking Oh I'll fix you and your baby... It was just heat of the moment, she got angry and pushed her to scare her not realizing that Alyssa actually could fall. Still, you are right that she's in a bad position now and you'll have to keep reading to see how she handles the situation.
Aww and thank you SOOOO much for the major compliment. I was rereading UMS the other day and I can't believe how far I've come either!