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A Little Taste of Sin by Mellz Bellz Rated: R [ - ]
Summary:

After betraying her trust yet again, Alyssa finally gave up on Nick. She moved on and began a seperate life far away from him. But there are some people that life just won't let you let go of. What happens when they find their lifes entwined once more? Now that the stakes are higher, will they risk losing everything they have for another chance? Sequel to Under my Skin.


Categories: Fanfiction > Backstreet Boys
Characters: Nick
Genres: Angst, Drama, Humor, Romance
Warnings: Death, Graphic Sexual Content, Violence
 Series: Not Like We Predicted
Chapters: 61 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes
Word count: 329529
Read Count: 160222


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Published: 11/13/07 » Updated: 11/12/08
Reviewer: Heidi Signed
Date: 09/30/08 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 49 - The Hardest Thing

Although I kinda knew this was coming (every story needs some drama) I really hated it! hehehehe funny though and maybe strange as well 'cause on the other side I loved it! It makes the storyline so strong! Guess hate and love are really close to each other, hehehe.

I believe you are up too some pretty hard chapters to write but for now I think you managed the first ones pretty good!

Since I always believe in happy endings i'm looking forward to read how this will make Nick's and Alyssa's relationship stronger. Perhaps maybe so strong that they will know what to do with their marriages. I do hope one thing though....... That Nick will be officialy the father at Zoey's papers..... will see!

Author's Response:

Well I say if a story makes you feel so many emotions I must be doing something right! The next few chapters ARE going to be hard to write. I hope to update again soon. As for a happy ending there is still time. You'll have to see how losing Zoey affects their relationship. As for Nick being the father on paper I wasn't really going to focus in on that or really what their plans or for Zoey now cuz I think thats a lil morbid and not what I want to focus on. Thanks Heidi!

 

Reviewer: Heidi Signed
Date: 10/25/08 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 53 - One Step at a Time

I'm glad you are okay! Pretty nasty for your car but I hope you're happy with your new one wich I believe is the case. Hehe.

Anyways, great update! I love the way you are getting a therapist in this! I know it's cliché but I think it makes the story a reality. So many people see a therapist and they can all relate to the feelings that Alyssa has. So that's that.

I love Nick the way Nick is acting in this chapter! He's acting reliable and supportive, he's anything but selfish. I love that in men. He is trying his best to get Alyssa through this and I think he is doing a great job. Make me wish a man like him! Hahaha

Good luck on the next chapther but I know you'll handle it! Can't wait to read it!

Author's Response:

Thanks Heidi! I am very happy with the new car! It looks brand new and is in VERY good condition. And it has a sun rood :D. Don't love the payments, but what are you going to do *sighs*

I'm glad you like the therapist stuff. I was hesitant because it has almost come a fan fic cliche, but unlike a lot of stories I do think Alyssa needs it. I know some fics that throw therapy in just for drama and look to create problems that aren't really there, but I think Alyssa has plenty of real problems she has to deal with right now. Hopefully therapy does wonders for her.

Nick is being very sweet. I mean he's kind of hanging out in the background for now, but that's what Alyssa needs right now. When she is ready she will come to him. But yes I wish all guys could be like that too lol.