Summary: Detective Kevin Richardson is working a very hard case. One involving a serial killer who preys upon young children. At least he knows at the end of the day he has his family to fall back on. His three brothers and his best friend will help him through the mystery and be the glue that keeps him together as he gets closer to finding the madman behind it all. AU/suspense/drama (obviously lol) rated R
Categories: Fanfiction > Backstreet Boys
Characters: Kevin, Group
Genres: Alternate Universe, Drama, Suspense
Warnings: Violence, Graphic Violence, Death
Series: None
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes
Word count: 120913
Read Count: 72893
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Well, I'm from New Jersey. I work in fast food and I love pineapple pizza, Harry Potter, traveling, Disney, one direction, sailor moon and star wars. I like going to the beach and writing/reading fanfiction....plus going to lots of concerts. I'm a huge Weird Al fan as well. I've been writing since about 1999. Started off on Fanfiction.net, but made my way to AC after taking a few years off. Joined Absolute Chaos in 2009 and have been here ever since! I like to read just about everything and am open to writing almost every genre. Nick is featured the most in my work but I have something for everyone. I'm also open to co write or toss around ideas and beta read, so hit me up on yahoo messenger or shoot me an email. Hope you enjoy my stories, and happy reading :) feel free to check out my favorites as well. If you're on Facebook check out my FB group, BSB Fanfiction! Awards/Recognition Featured Author for June 2011- Figured You Out Featured Author for November 2013 - Finding Carter     |
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Published: 03/05/05 » Updated: 01/06/06
Published: 03/05/05 » Updated: 01/06/06
Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed
Date: 07/14/13 Title: Chapter 7: 1
Date: 07/14/13 Title: Chapter 7: 1
This chapter had me going Awww all over the place. You really get the family feeling from how everyone talks to one another. Nick is the cutest thing ever, I want to keep him....lol. I loved how Nick wants to keep an eye on his big bro. Lots of cute fuzzy moments :)
Author's Response:
hehe thanks! Yes, there are warm fuzzies all over the place in his story! LOL I picture the My Buddy doll when I think of tiny Nick for some reason but a much cuter less creepy version of it!
Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed
Date: 07/14/13 Title: Chapter 8: 8
Date: 07/14/13 Title: Chapter 8: 8
Aww at Nick having a little girlfriend and them matching clothes, how cute!!! Poor Kevin is so worried about this case, honestly I think it might be messing with his head a bit and he is just paranoid, but something tells me he should keep a closer eye on his brothers.
Author's Response:
Why thank you! Patty is my self insert in this story! LOL And yes poor Kevin, this case does get in his head and makes him overly paranoid!
Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed
Date: 07/14/13 Title: Chapter 9: 9
Date: 07/14/13 Title: Chapter 9: 9
Poor Nick.....I know Kevin is trying to.protect him but that was not the right way to go about it. Bet he will be getting some flack for his little experiment. at least Nick knows better not to follow a stranger now.
Author's Response:
aww yes! Not the smartest thing in the world to do but I can SO see Kevin doing that for some reason lol
Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed
Date: 07/15/13 Title: Chapter 10: 10
Date: 07/15/13 Title: Chapter 10: 10
Awww Nick thinking Kevin wanted to give him away :( Howie was really cute in this chapter too....and I love that AJ was the one who got the idea for the password and that everyone had the conference about what happened. Nice chapter, this is one of my favorites too :)
Author's Response:
Yes :( poor Nick! And thanks! I love Howie in this one as well. I actually really like them all in this one! even Brian doesn't annoy me! Thanks, Tracy!
Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed
Date: 07/15/13 Title: Chapter 11: 11
Date: 07/15/13 Title: Chapter 11: 11
I feel so bad for Kevin, the other agents are just looking out but I think this Tyler guy might be up to something....he doesn't sit right with me. It must be frustrating for Kevin knowing this killer is kind of stalking him and he can't do anything about it.
Author's Response:
Tyler does come across as sketchy doesn't he? It's sad Kevin isn't getting all the help he needs!
Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed
Date: 07/15/13 Title: Chapter 14: 14
Date: 07/15/13 Title: Chapter 14: 14
Yikes, that was worse than the terrible date Nick had in Finding.Carter at the Ihop lol. Nick keeps upping the cuteness in each chapter it seems. ;)
I knew Lisa wasn't gonna be around long but I think she overreacted to be honest, and Kevin was trying to tell the truth. Seems he cant catch a break, can he?
Author's Response:
I know, I'm not very nice to Kevin in this one! Consider it payback for how he acted through a lot of Separate Ways! LOL and sometimes I went a little over the top with the cuteness level for Nick but seriously when writing him this young, I had to because when else would I get the chance? Thanks, Tracy!
Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed
Date: 07/15/13 Title: Chapter 12: 12
Date: 07/15/13 Title: Chapter 12: 12
I think that Kevin not being on the case is gonna blow.up.in their faces....i also feel that Kevin is right to worry about his brother. Not sure how I feel about Lisa....I have a weird feeling she won't be around long knowing your track record lmao.
Author's Response:
What, ME? lmao ;)
Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed
Date: 07/15/13 Title: Chapter 15: 15
Date: 07/15/13 Title: Chapter 15: 15
"why does everyone give this child candy?"
"because I'm cute" - LMAO.
I knew it! I knew Kevin being taken off the case would have repercussions, and that line at the end of the chapter made me VERY nervous. Nice build up to the drama that I am gathering is about to happen. Loving this story.
Author's Response:
At least he knows he's cute, right? Warning this story is LOADED with mean cliffies that haven't started yet but will relatively soon. The sequel is even worse but the good thing is it's all done? LOL
Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed
Date: 07/15/13 Title: Chapter 16: 16
Date: 07/15/13 Title: Chapter 16: 16
This only makes me question Tyler more, it seems very fishy he isn't following up on anything. I think maybe he is hiding something, maybe has something to do with it. curiouser and curiouser....
Author's Response:
Hrmm.... could be! Thanks for all these review, Tracy! I'm so glad you're enjoying this one! I consider this one and its sequel my babies and have been working on rewriting them for OF purposes.
Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed
Date: 07/15/13 Title: Chapter 17: 17
Date: 07/15/13 Title: Chapter 17: 17
This is driving me just as crazy as it is for Kevin!!! Holy crap lol this guy is frustrating. I got a feeling he'll make another appearance soon. Tyler is on my shit list now....he's up to no good.
Author's Response:
LOL I named Tyler after a kid I did NOT like at all in high school! Random tidbit for you! Thanks for reading this, Tracy! I can't believe you're already this far along! :O)
Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed
Date: 07/16/13 Title: Chapter 18: 18
Date: 07/16/13 Title: Chapter 18: 18
I kind of expected Lisa to turn up again just not dead lmao. I know I have to be right about Tyler. I also think Howie has a good point about Kevin getting too into the case and getting attached....hopefully he doesn't regret that later. Really loving the storyline Mare. It really is like watching a TV show.
Author's Response:
Yes, Lisa was a very short lived idea lol I am happy to hear it is playng out like a TV show! That was my intent! Thanks, Tracy! :O)
Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed
Date: 07/16/13 Title: Chapter 19: 19
Date: 07/16/13 Title: Chapter 19: 19
boy like I said, Kevin can't catch a break.and now Nick is upset at him again :(
This is frustrating me so bad. You really meant it about the mean cliffies and I should have expected this from you LOL can't wait to read and find out what happens to make him miss Nick again...
Author's Response:
Aww Nick is often annoyed with Kevin! And starting next chapter when the action really picks up, mean cliffys will abound!
Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed
Date: 07/16/13 Title: Chapter 20: 20
Date: 07/16/13 Title: Chapter 20: 20
I really love the buildup again in this chapter, but now I think the killer has confirmed Kevin's suspicions about Nick being taken. Like I said he had a right to be paranoid and the killer is playing a game. Ugh!!!!
Author's Response:
Ugh indeed! LOL
Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed
Date: 07/16/13 Title: Chapter 21: 21
Date: 07/16/13 Title: Chapter 21: 21
Poor Nicky :( I bet that is the worst for a family of a missing person, not knowing if they are afraid or hurt. Kevin doesn't need this right now and I'm glad AJ is all right *whew* this is intense! I hope more clues come to light soon.
Author's Response:
Aww, yes! I can't even imagine what that would feel like. Poor AJ, I had to shoot him lol but I didn't kill him! :O)
Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed
Date: 07/16/13 Title: Chapter 22: 22
Date: 07/16/13 Title: Chapter 22: 22
Ugh I feel so bad for their family :( Poor boys and Jackie....
I somehow really believe Nick went willingly with the guy and he is fine, probably thinking nobody wants him :(
Author's Response:
That just breaks my heart to think he might be thinking that! :O(
