Summary: His brother was nothing more than a fading memory like the sound of distant bell calling to him late at night in dreams...alternate universe kind of lol just read and you'll understand
Categories: Fanfiction > Backstreet Boys
Characters: Nick, Group
Genres: Drama
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes
Word count: 96993
Read Count: 117778
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Well, I'm from New Jersey. I work in fast food and I love pineapple pizza, Harry Potter, traveling, Disney, one direction, sailor moon and star wars. I like going to the beach and writing/reading fanfiction....plus going to lots of concerts. I'm a huge Weird Al fan as well. I've been writing since about 1999. Started off on Fanfiction.net, but made my way to AC after taking a few years off. Joined Absolute Chaos in 2009 and have been here ever since! I like to read just about everything and am open to writing almost every genre. Nick is featured the most in my work but I have something for everyone. I'm also open to co write or toss around ideas and beta read, so hit me up on yahoo messenger or shoot me an email. Hope you enjoy my stories, and happy reading :) feel free to check out my favorites as well. If you're on Facebook check out my FB group, BSB Fanfiction! Awards/Recognition Featured Author for June 2011- Figured You Out Featured Author for November 2013 - Finding Carter     |
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Published: 07/31/03 » Updated: 03/21/04
Published: 07/31/03 » Updated: 03/21/04
Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed
Date: 06/06/13 Title: Chapter 5: 4
Date: 06/06/13 Title: Chapter 5: 4
See this is what I meant in the last chapter....Jane parading Nick around....and I was pleased to see him kind of tell her off about it. There are some grammar/spelling errors but since this is an old story...I don't mind them.
Author's Response:
Yeah, there will probably be more mistakes in this one then some of the others you are used to reading. It took a while for me to get into my writing flow and back into the world of good grammar, punctuation etc... I'm surprised about the spelling though. I'm usually pretty good with that. I hate Jane! I hated the way she treated her son and sometimes I fear I see those same qualites in Leighanne! Random thought lol
Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed
Date: 06/06/13 Title: Chapter 6: 5
Date: 06/06/13 Title: Chapter 6: 5
Poor Mike. I feel bad that he finally realizes who Nick is....only to find his mother literally cut him from their lives. That's so sad.
Author's Response:
The sad part is, if Mike were a real person, I could see her doing that to him. :-/
Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed
Date: 06/06/13 Title: Chapter 7: 6
Date: 06/06/13 Title: Chapter 7: 6
I actually like Melinda, she's a good friend for helping Mike connect with Nick. I had to laugh at the part where Nick was saying he thinks the girls regret asiking for a Nick/Brian sandwich. I know when I met them I did regret ut LOL
Author's Response:
I'm glad you like Melinda! To this day, I think she might be the only female character I've written that hasn't turned out evil or dead! LOL
Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed
Date: 06/06/13 Title: Chapter 8: 7
Date: 06/06/13 Title: Chapter 8: 7
Awww Nick :( Jane is a jerk...and poor Nick thinks she doesn't care. I really like that Kevin takes care of him....I miss reading this kind of stuff cause of their relationship. I missed those two.
Hopefully Mike gets to talk to Nick, I think Nick needs something positive right now..
Author's Response:
You gotta love Nick and Kevin together. I have really missed that relationship too. I wish more people would write Nick and Kevin stories although now I feel like there has been a shift to Nick and Howie but I'd still like to think Kevin is as big brotherly as before. Heck I wouldn't mind reading a Nick, Kevin and Howie fanfic. *sigh* I just babbled lol sorry about that. Jane is a jerk lol
Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed
Date: 06/06/13 Title: Chapter 9: 8
Date: 06/06/13 Title: Chapter 9: 8
It got a little confusing with the amount of POV changes but I managed to follow. I somehow don't think Nick is gonna take to him saying that he is his brother like this...but we'll see.
Author's Response:
Ah, I don't remember this chapter but I do remember at some point having a heck of a time trying to figure out the best way to reveal the brother thing. Maybe this was the chapter? lol I might have to read it. Good lord if I used Nick's POV and then Mike's POV before they spoke I might pokje my own eyes out with a spork though. Maybe I won't read it. LOL
Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed
Date: 06/21/13 Title: Chapter 10: 9
Date: 06/21/13 Title: Chapter 10: 9
Poor Nick, I don't blame him for thinking Mike was after money or to use him....but did Mike really expect to be welcomed by Nick with open arms? I can only imagine what Kevin is gonna say about him letting him up to his room....because it seems to me Nick is too trusting. I have a feeling it will bite him in the butt later.
Author's Response:
I think Mike has a little bit of that naitivity that Nick does and I d think Nick is to trusting, I think he is in real life as well. Thanks, Tracy!
Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed
Date: 06/21/13 Title: Chapter 11: 10
Date: 06/21/13 Title: Chapter 11: 10
Honestly I do not blame the guys for reacting the way they did. It is nice that they look out for him and I think Nick was a bit hasty in telling them off, although I expect this since he's a teenager lol. Reading on....
Author's Response:
I can also see Nick being like that in real life, just based on what I have seen in interviews when he was that age lol he could be kind of jerkish.
Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed
Date: 06/21/13 Title: Chapter 12: 11
Date: 06/21/13 Title: Chapter 12: 11
The two of them reminiscing was very cute, I loved the but about Nick wearing a dump truck on his head and running through the house naked. I can totally picture him doing that as a child.
Author's Response:
I used to do that when I was litle. I had a dump truck for whatever reason and used to run around the house with it on my head. Not naked though. LOL
Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed
Date: 06/21/13 Title: Chapter 13: 12
Date: 06/21/13 Title: Chapter 13: 12
Kevin would have intimidated the hell out of me if I was Mike. I just seehim that way in real life too for some reason....like the dad.
Author's Response:
He intimidates the crap out of me too. He just has that way about him I think. Thanks again, Tracy!
Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed
Date: 06/21/13 Title: Chapter 14: 13
Date: 06/21/13 Title: Chapter 14: 13
Oh Nickolas. See I think it is kind of shady that they were telling him to be careful and all that, then all of a sudden it turned into "don't read into it". I get they were trying to be supportive but poor Nick lol. No wonder the kid was mad.
I also love the little description of NYC streets and where Mike lives, it was pretty visual to me.
Author's Response:
Visual is always good! Thanks, Tracy! I agree they were kind of shady and annoying, like the kid isn't confused enough? lol
Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed
Date: 06/22/13 Title: Chapter 15: 14
Date: 06/22/13 Title: Chapter 15: 14
I kinda really loved seeing Nick go all pissy on Kevin and punching him in this chapter. I cracked up at the visual of Kevin pinning him actually. I think Kevin is being hard on him to prove a point, I love him in this story.
Author's Response:
LOL We all knew that was coming. Nick had to lose his temper and of course Kevin would bear the brunt of it. I have a feeling Mr. Richardson did his fair amount of pinning Nick against walls.
Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed
Date: 06/22/13 Title: Chapter 16: 15
Date: 06/22/13 Title: Chapter 16: 15
I feel bad for Mike now in this chapter. He wants to get to.know Nick but Nick's life seems so hectic its hard to spend time together. I feel that's how things are in real life too.
Author's Response:
I agree! I bet it's hard for them to ever meet new people, let alone bond with them! Thanks, Tracy!
Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed
Date: 06/24/13 Title: Chapter 17: 16
Date: 06/24/13 Title: Chapter 17: 16
I already do not like John. he seems like the type who will use Nick when he finds out about him, or use his fame. I think Kevin is being kind of an ass as well, he's not helping Nick much by being so douchey. Hopefully things will look up soon.
Author's Response:
Yeah, John is very much like a male Jane only even sketchier if that's possible lol
Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed
Date: 06/24/13 Title: Chapter 18: 17
Date: 06/24/13 Title: Chapter 18: 17
John is definitely up to something....and now Nick thinks Mike was lying, poor kid. As if he isn't confused enough already now he is hearing Mike doesn't have a brother. The part at the end where he went to Kevin made me smile, hopefully things will be looking up.
Author's Response:
I know, I really felt bad for Nick while writing this. I kept thinking about how he used to be back then and how confused and hurt he would be when all this was going on. Yay to Kevin and Nick moments! Thanks, Tracy!
Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed
Date: 06/24/13 Title: Chapter 19: 18
Date: 06/24/13 Title: Chapter 19: 18
I am glad Nick told Kevin everything and they aren't fighting anymore, but I know Nick will regret talking to his dad. It makes me sick you cannot trust your own family, I identified with Mike and the money jar because I had one to save cruise money in. I was do worried it would get stolen I'd move it to a new place every night. Reading on...
Author's Response:
Aww, I never have enough money to put it in a jar but I've always loved the idea of one! I'd be too afriad I'd forget where I put it though lol
