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I am a Certified Public Accountant from Manila, Philippines. I am married and mother of 2 naughty but cute boys. I've been officially a BSB fan the day I saw I want it that way video and was mesmerized by Brian's smile. I am an AJ's girl though.... (See my penname) :) I've wanted to be a writer for the longest time but I started to write fan fiction in 2009. I stumbled upon the world of fan fiction in 2007, and when I learned that there are sites (like AC) who are hosting stories; I tried to write one, and 'Back to your heart' was born. Please bear with me for the grammar and punctuation mistakes. English is not my native (first) language but rest assured that I am trying my best everytime I write. |
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wait. I thought Seth has to RUN too? what the hell is he still doing in New York like his life is not in danger. He even answer his phone. I dont trust him one bit. Come on, Jared, dont tell Seth anything and run! You're better off on your own.
You know how muxh I miss Jared and I kept checking Most Recent page of AC for an update. 'Now, I have another story to read while waiting for Jared. You were off to a nice start and there's a good chemistry between Nick and Cowbelle. I love them. :)
Author's Response: I'm glad you've got something to tie you over until Jared makes his come back. It shouldn't be too long before I hit my OF writing stride again... :) Enjooooy!
Nick recounts the day he and his wife met as a bed time story for his daughter.
Hey Mare, I was supposed to read Four Santas Too Many for the reading challenge, but this story got my attention. I think, I'll finish this first. :)
Author's Response:
Thanks, Ritz! Welcome back!
For someone who writes excellent suspense stories, this is a good try at romance.:)
Author's Response:
Thanks, I thought I'd give it a go so I could at least say I tried!
Aww, Mare! you just broke my heart... Poor little girl. I should have known this will not end happily. lol
Author's Response:
Eh, lol just like real life. Thanks for reading! :O)
LOL... Honestly, I read this last because it was too long, but I had fun reading this. Kevin the camera, Brian the basketball, AJ the cigarette, and Howie, I had to google that thing. hahaha. And a little bit of final destination, having a dream before it actually happened. Great job, Mare! You really have an awesome imagination. :)
Author's Response: Yeah this one was pretty long. Thanks for taking the time to read it. I've never watched Final Destination lol
One is lost
One is broken
One is a prisoner
Two are trapped
Hello, Mare. *waves*
I am officially starting to read the story again. lol. Where should I start? They say chapter 1 is important because it will tell the reader if they still want to pursue reading the story or not. I clicked the story because it's your story, and I know how awesome it would be. But after reading the first chapter, I am hooked because it has this factor that will make you want to read more, make you want to find out the answers to so many unanswered question: Why did they left the city and ran to the woods, who is visior no. 1 and 2 (as it's obvious that Candice, visitor no. 4 and 5 were just lost in the woods, or were they?), Was the $150,000 was the only reason why they ran, would we and Tim ever find out the real reason? These are the things that would make me hit the 'Next' button.
Poor Timothy, my heart aches for all those children whose childhood were taken away from them. Even though little timmy was already 10 years old, it was still a big change for him especially that his favorite toys and his dog weren't brought with him. I just hope his Mommy made everything so little Timmy was happy and loved.
Author's Response: *waves back* first of all, thank you for taking the time to not only read, but apparently reread. I was really worried about starting a story with a guy who no one knows or cares about so I'm glad that you found him interesting enough to want to know more about him as well as about what was going on within the story. A lot of those questions you posed will be answered as you go along. I agree, Tim has had it rough. Even though he is no doubt the villain in this story, I wanted people to like him and understand that maybe he's that way for a reason. Again as you go along, I think that image gets painted a little clearer. Thanks again, Ritz! :O) Your review rocked! lol
Now, I understand this chapter. I really thought the last parts of the chapter were from the van's scene. lol. I'm glad Howie escaped, but poor Timmy he lost one friend. lol. Go, Howie! Find the other three... :)
Author's Response: okay, good! Glad you got it the second time through! Yes Tim will not be happy. lol Thanks, Ritz!
Oh my! that howling sound is not good. I'm glad everyone seems to be okay... for now. I'm trying to imagine the position of the van but it's no good. Why is Brian below AJ? If the van turned upside down, which explains why AJ was up on his seat. Was Brian not wearing his seat belt or something?
This is just me, Mare. Please don't think that you might not have described the scene perfectly. You know sometimes it's hard for me to understand descriptions in english. *blushes*
Author's Response: No, you have every right to be confused, and yes I'm up at 6 am on a Saturday lol *shakes head* I was just talking to Julilly about my van description woes throughout this story, the other day. I think the problem with choosing a van is because there are SO many different types. The one I'm talking about is where the seats are separated in the middle so AJ would be in one while Brian was in the other behind Kevin. He was wearing a seatbelt but he would have been directly behind the driver's side. I know there are other types of vans that have a long seat without a divider. It's not one of those. I struggled with the van every time I had to describe a different aspect of it so it's not you, Ritz! You were right to ask! I feel like that's my only epic fail in this story, I was just hoping no one would notice! :-/ LOL Thanks for the review!
"He could probably pass himself off as a Carter."
should I take that description seriously? Will Tim be revealed as Nick's long lost half brother or something before the story ends? lol.
I'm glad to tell you that I think I'm getting a hold of this flashback then present scene combination of yours. It's brilliant actually. I just have to read a bit slower or else I need to re-read the whole chapter. :)
Author's Response: Yes! An evil twin, shh! Don't tell anybody though! And yay! I'm glad it's getting easier to follow for you. I don't mind being called brilliant, so feel free to keep that up too! ;O) lmao
I am not sure which is better: Brian thinks Howie and Nick are alive but forgot about them or AJ who thinks they are both dead that's why they never came back.
This chapter made me realize what the hell are the Backstreet wives doing? Did they already call for help when their husbands did not answer any of their phone call and they are freaking late already? Because If I am married to AJ, I would have. lol I love this chapter. I will always be an A-rok girl for life. :)
Author's Response: I'm glad you are enjoying the Brian and AJ pairing. I always kind of picture them together when I cluster them all up in my head. LOL The wives come into play, you'll see!
Oh Howie! I wish Leigh would do that what you thought she would do. I hope you're safe until the next chapter. :)
PS: The divider thing in the van made sense. I was thinking of those vans without a divider and thought AJ and Brian were sitting side by side.
Author's Response: Yeah, I think that's what most people pictured at first too. There will still be some inaccuracies as you read when it comes to the van just whistle and overlook! lmao
Yay! A Tim chapter. I'm glad Tim was loved by his mom, that he never felt alone while growing up in the cabin.
He should have taken Nick with him inside tha target. The teenager would gladly recognize Nick, and they would all be rescued. End of story. lol And there was it again, even Tim thinks that he and Nick looked alike, it starting to freak me out. lol
I love that Tim respected Candice and loved her. I wonder what led Candice to the cabin though.
Author's Response: Having Tim look like Nick/Brian was a necessity for the purpose of moving this story along, again you shall see why a little later on! Oh, Tim so crazy yet just a part of him a little loveable (right now lol) thanks, Ritz!!
Yay Kevin! Now, go free AJ... :)
Author's Response: LOL
Oh, Nick. I bet that teenager tweeted something like she saw a Nick Carter look alike at target parking lot. well, I hope eveything will turn out fine, and no one will die in the next chapter. lol
Author's Response: LOL I don't kill people that easily, Ritz and this story would be very short if I did! :O) Thanks for the reviews!
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