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I'm 19 years old from Europe. I love good food, music, laughing and singing. I'm currently working at an administration office. Been writing fanfic since 2007 however I've been writing BSB fanfic since 2009 so I'm still quite new to it. Been a BSB fan since August 2009, so that's why LOL. My first BSB concert was at November 15th in Rotterdam. Simply the best concert ever! (: Wanna know more? Just ask!

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Fallen Angel by evergreenwriter83 Rated: NC-17 [ - ]
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My name's Kayleigh Littrell and I'm sixteen years old. There's two important things you should know about me...

Number One: My father and brother are famous Christian artists. Needless to say, I've lived a pretty sheltered life.

Number Two: I break free whenever I can.

I love to walk on the wild side. I don't mind getting hurt. Been there, done that. But the biggest danger is getting caught...
Categories: Fanfiction > Backstreet Boys
Characters: Brian, Other
Genres: Drama, Dramedy, Romance
Warnings: Sexual Assault/Rape, Sexual Content
 Series: The Coaster Girls
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes
Word count: 80887
Read Count: 43617


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Published: 09/22/10 » Updated: 11/13/10
Reviewer: TheDistantHeart Signed
Date: 10/06/10 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Aww Kay.. :( I feel so sorry for her, she really needs to open up. Noah is the best person to tell everything to first. Throughout this whole chapter I kept forgetting Noah is actually Brooke's bro.. but for some reason it doesn't seem weird or anything. Kay and NoNo are meant to be, me thinks. (:

Author's Response: haha it was weird for me. He's technically my imaginary story child ::lmao:: Kay does need to open up...but we'll see exactly when or if

Reviewer: TheDistantHeart Signed
Date: 10/13/10 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

It's good her room is clean otherwise it will remind her of all those bad things even more while she should learn to live with her past. I'm glad she starts to open up to Bri and Leigh. Kay will be alright. :)

Author's Response: I think Bri and Leigh MEANT well...but Kay's still fragile. I think it upset her more than they realized. But she's heading towards alright, and that's a start!

Reviewer: TheDistantHeart Signed
Date: 10/14/10 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

lmao! The last two sentences were mean... but genious. I have a feeling something will happen between Baylee and Claudia. Marcie is so much nicer. *hints to Baylee* I hope she'll have fun at school.. I hated sitting in a classroom all day as well.

Author's Response: Kay's got a mean streak...I doubt she's ever going to lose it. :) I hope she has fun at school too! we'll see!

Reviewer: TheDistantHeart Signed
Date: 10/14/10 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Kay might not notice it now, but she's already starting to fall for Noah! (: I wonder how the one-on-one sessions with Baylee will turn out.. I have a good feeling about it. *wiggles eyebrows*

Author's Response: Of course she is..it's that Carter curse (but a very good curse, at that). :) lol I have no idea how those one-on-one sessions will turn out...

Reviewer: TheDistantHeart Signed
Date: 10/15/10 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Tempie? How do you come up with all those weird names? Brooke had Taurus and Apple... They both get friends with weird names.. except their own names aren't weird.

Laughter is a good sign indeed! I wonder what they are talking about that causes the laughter. :) I hope it's going well between them.. hell to Claudia! *grabs a torch and a pitchfork* KILL HER AFRICA!

Author's Response: Actually one of my best friends is going to name her baby Tempeste if it's a girl. And it was Shelby, not Brooke that had Taurus and Apple. I tend to think that people with weird names make awesome friends. Haha. I don't think Africa wants anything to do with Claudia's demise. Just saying!

Reviewer: TheDistantHeart Signed
Date: 10/15/10 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Ugh seriously, Claw-dia can just go to hell! (And marry Satan, like Kay said) Oh my goood.. she can't spend more time with Kay! I already felt cranky and moody only when I read all the stupid comments Claw-dia made! Seriously.. someone should throw that woman back to the deep jungles of Africa while Baylee and Marcie can talk some more! I wonder what Marcie's impression will be of the Claw-diator (major thumbs up for that name btw!).

Author's Response: I was quite proud of my creation of Claw-diator. I tend to think of things at the weirdest, most random times. I know, I was cranky the moment I wrote the Kay stopped smiling. Things were going so well until that point. ::sigh::

Reviewer: TheDistantHeart Signed
Date: 10/16/10 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

The part where Kay swore in the presence of her parents was HILARIOUS! Those were two simple lines, yet they made me laugh so much.
But whoa this chapter reveals so many things! Claw-dia's a bitch! (not that we didn't know that but still!)Don't touch Marcie's pretty hair! And whoaaa... BAY AND MAR KISSED!! And Claw-dia walked in on them! Dang! Bay, cut the crap and dump her!
Btw, I didn't know dyslexia also counted for numbers. I've got discalculia (it's like dyslexia but only with numbers and calculating, like the name says) and I mix up 6 and 9 or 8 and 6 or if I have to write down the number 379 from, for example, a pc screen, I can write down 739 or in some other order. It took me really long before I could say what time it was, I still have a hard time counting money, though it's getting better, I still count with my fingers a lot though counting in my head gets better as well. It's too bad discalculia isn't common enough (at least not in Holland) for tests. My math teachers all knew I had discalculia but since there weren't tests for that, they couldn't prove it. Anyway, knowing was good enough for them so I got extra help outside of school anyway.

Anyway, if it's dyslexia what Kay has, and she'll get help, I'm sure things will go a lot easier and she might appreciate school a lot more. :)
Oh whoa.. long review lol!

Author's Response: Kay swearing reminded me of when Baylee said fuck when he was really little in WTB. Yeah we all knew that Claud was a bitch right? Right. My friend has dyslexia and mixes up numbers AND words. She's been able to get help for both but it's frustrating for her. Love the long review btw!

Reviewer: TheDistantHeart Signed
Date: 10/18/10 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

First things first: YAY FOR KAY! Finallyyyy! I love Just The Way You Are and I love Bruno Mars. :) I like the fact the name of Noah's new song is also the name of this story. I can't wait to read about a Kay-Noah gettogether!

Author's Response: LoL yeah, I had a hard time writing the blurb knowing that Noah's song was also linked to the title. :) Yay for someone else loving that song! I've listened to it like a million times :)

Reviewer: TheDistantHeart Signed
Date: 10/21/10 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

I almost forgot how sweet Noah is. Just almost but not entirely. (: I've been waiting for chapters like these!  *squeals*



Author's Response: Noah is sweet...in a hot sort of way. :) LoL Noah's monopolizing Kay's chapters. I hope I can get under my 50 chapter limit I gave myself. haha

Reviewer: TheDistantHeart Signed
Date: 10/26/10 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

The schedule will do her good. :) On the other hand, I understand where Kay's coming from. I had to have extra classes outside of school for Maths and one year later, when I dropped Math, I had to have extra classes for Economics. Even though I only had those once a week, it wasn't much fun, because it's exactly the thing you think it's the hardest. But it worked, eventually. And so it will also work for Kay. I can't wait for another Kay and Noah gettogether!



Author's Response: Yeah extra classes suck especially considering how frustrated she gets. I think everyone's jonesing for more Kay and Noah! I've spoiled you guys with my extended L.A. coverage :)

Reviewer: TheDistantHeart Signed
Date: 11/01/10 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

I forgot to reply to this when I read this in Heartbreaker: OMFG. but also... YES!! I wanna vote! Can I vote? Yes? I vote for Baylee and Marcie instead of Baylee and Claw-diator!! 

I will read the next chapter right now. :)

Reviewer: TheDistantHeart Signed
Date: 11/01/10 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

Ohhh I totally melted at their cute brother-sister moment. I will vote again. One vote for Marcie as a sister-in-law!

Hmm.. I have a feeling the blood test will prove different from the urine test..

Alright.. up to the next chap!

Reviewer: TheDistantHeart Signed
Date: 11/01/10 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Oh snap.. they're all in troubleee!!

And I think Marcie was about to say that the blood test proved Kay's preggos. This is like a really good tv show! I like Baylee's nickname "Mar". It's Spanish for "sea". :) (No, I don't speak fluently Spanish but I'm teaching myself some because I love the language, and I just happen to know that word lol) Imma go to the next chapter quickly!! *runs*



Author's Response: It is Spanish for sea! It's been a long time since my last Spanish classes but I remember that one for some reason :)

Reviewer: TheDistantHeart Signed
Date: 11/01/10 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

I wouldn't fish in the toilet water either..
But at least she kind of "told" Leighanne in an easier way.. even though she must've scared the shit out of Kay to suddenly come in and yell like that.
You know, I feel sorry for everyone in this story right now but daaayuumm.. I love drama! *gets some hot choco* I'm ready to read the next chapter! *runs, trying to not spill any hot choco on herself*



Author's Response: I don't want any of my readers to get third degree burns! not cool, not cool :)

Reviewer: TheDistantHeart Signed
Date: 11/01/10 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

Simple? *snorts* You'll change your mind once the baby's born. But OMG I didn't even think about that!! Frick & Frack related! Ha! And Kay and Brooke will be related as well! Awww.. so so so friggin sweet.

I am so eager to know the DNA test results! If there'd be more drama possible, the baby would be Baylee's but really.. I hope it's not his! It'd be so sad for Baylee to know he lost a child, even though the mom would be Claudia. :( But at least there will be a divorce! HURAH.