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I am a huge backstreet boy fan (especially nick... ) since the beginning and I love to read and write (in german ;o) ) fanfictions. Iīm from austria, so when my reviews sometimes sounds a little bit strange... you know the reason... reading is much easier than writing.... ;-) |
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Life doesn't always give you what you want. Sometimes it gives you what you need...rather you realize it or not.
YOUR STORY IS AMAZING!!! love it!!! please update soon...
i absolute want to read more about brielle and alex!!!! (and the baby of course!) ;-)
my english is not so good...but iīm from austria...and reading is soooo much easier than writing...als these grammatic...i should have more study at school!! :-))))
Author's Response: Gosh, thank you so much! It really means a lot when the readers let me know what they think and how they are enjoying it. And I love learning when new readers come into the fic. So thank you so much! I'm gonna try to get more out there for you about Brielle and Alex (and the baby!) :) And yeah, sometimes I'm in a mood to just read and not worry about writing. I have to say that I think your grammatics for this review were just fine. I understood it completely. :) Thanks again! Hope you continue to read and review. :)
Oooookay...
this didnīt goes the way lily thought... who would expect that she collaps, when she saw alex...
or maybe it goes the way, because alex is such a great man and take care of brielle and his unborn child! i hope she will say yes and go with him to LA but he has any idea what his engaged one will say if he tells her about brielle...he will tell her about...or not???
and what about his mother? i think she dying to see her!!!!
PLEASE UPDATE!!! canīt wait for more!!!!
greetings =o) iīm glad you understand everthing!!! :o)
Author's Response: Aww yes, Alex is a great man and he's gonna try his best to take care of them. It's gonna be some drama with his fiancee and if Brie goes out to LA. I'm definitely keeping his mom in the mix of it so you'll have the answers to all your questions within the next few chapters. Thank you so much for your awesome feedback. I can't wait to get your thoughts on what's to come. :)
Oh NO....he drank...drowning his problems wouldnīt work...he already knows! =(
i think itīs a good idea, that lily goes with her to california! she needs so one who loves her in the near, when she first met denise and alexī fiancée... that will be an awkward situation, i bet!
canīt wait to read more!!!! iīm dying to know, how it would be in california....
AMAZING CHAPTER!!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE!!! LOVE IT!!!! =)
Author's Response: Aww I know right! He needs some help! And yeah, I think Lily going going with her is good for everyone. Totally awkward for her when she meets the fiancee and his mother. I'm so glad you love it and I'm trying to get it updated as fast as I can! Thank you so much!
oh wow... in some point i understand renee... alex wasnīt faithful and now he invited this girl, to stay with them in their house!!!
BUT...there is an easily way out!!! she doesnīt want to leave alex...but NOT because she loves him sooo much!! she doesnīt want to loose him because itīs seems really comfortable to be with a famous man...
good...i hate such golddiggers... alex is so a nice an wonderful man, wich has huge problems. he really needs support, and not an jealous bitch, that cause him more problems, than he already has!!
wow...she invites HIS friends and bandmates... iīm dying to know, what the guys were saying about the baby!!!!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE!!!!! iīm looking forward to read more!!!! greetings!
Author's Response: Aww yeah, I can understand her being upset but doing what she did was not right. And you're going along the right lines there thinking she's in it for things other than love. More will be revealed as the storyline moves along. I'm glad I got your emotions going; means I'm doing something right with the emotions in the fic. Hehe stay tuned and continue to read and you'll see what his band mates think about the baby. And thanks so much for your awesome review! :)
alex and brielle are getting closer... he is soooo sweet.... god... i think iīm in love... ;-)
how he cares about her, how he trusts her, when she says this baby is his, how he comforts her and donīt think sheīs after money or publicity.... what an adorable man...
he wants to be with her, when she sees the doctor... sure itīs his baby too, but heīs so interested in this whole baby-thing and that makes him only cuter....
there is something between them, that i canīt describe... they donīt know each other very well, but how they act with each other and talk...
i hope reneé needs much more "space"... hopefully while the next few months... ^^ but i donīt think she makes us this easy.... :-)
denise seems pretty cool... and i hope she is more friendly than reneé...
i honestly understand, why she wants alex and brielle to have a paternity test... she donīt know her... and he only wants to protect him... i would do the same, when iīm in her shoes... he always will be her baby...
PLS UUUUPDATE!!!!! iīm craving to read more!!!!
Author's Response: Aww you're so sweet and I just updated for you! It's a long one too hehe, so enjoy. And yeah, AJ and Brielle are definitely getting closer. He's so sweet to her hehe. I'm glad I'm making him cute and that you're enjoying it. LOL, Renee may give them some space, but she's going to be back so don't get too excited lol. And Denise is just trying to look out for her baby; I think any mom would be the same way. Thank you so much for your feedback, it's always so awesome to read. :)
awwwwww....alex is so cute and iīve wiped some tears, like he did, when his mum comforts him... he is really confused...right now everything is a little too much for him...
iīm glad, that he is strong for brielle, but maybe thereīs no need to hide that he is also scared!!! brielle feels the same, and iīm sure she completly understands him and they could help each other...
it makes me so worried, that he already drink again... i wish, he could find a way, to get through this tough time without alcohol...
i enjoyed the time, that the two sweet ones are had together... how interested alex is in the pregnancy and also her... how they act when they are together.... itīs so sweet and nice... she really helped alex, without knowing... and that makes me happy...
"WALKING PENISES" LMFAO... yeah...poor girl...with a dad like alex, she wonīt see much from this world... ;o) but when sheīs as charming like her dad... she wrapped him around her finger... easily!! ;o)
denise is a mother, and i think, i would act like her... she is a good mum and good mums protect her baby... i think she and brielle, when they know each other better, could be really friends!!!!
PLEASE UPDAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! amazing chapter!!!
Author's Response: Aww *hands over tissues* I'm glad you liked that chapter. And yes, Alex is struggling and feeling pretty overwhelmed which is why he turns to the drinking. I'm sure that things will work out along the way, but I don't want to say too much lol. I'm trying to show how they're relationship is slowly developing and I don't want to rush it or force it too soon so all your awesome feedback is really helpful in that aspect. LOL and you're so right; if he has a girl he'd probably lock her in her room until she was 35 lol. Thanks again for your review! :)
f*ck!!! they media knows, whatīs going on... thatīs a new experience for the two girls... nothing they know... but it seems that they girls could handle it... but i donīt think that the media would be so nice to brielle, because of reneé...
iīm really glad that denise, said what she said...i totally agree with her... sure this whole situation must be horrible for a woman, but they two had an open relationship... so something like that, could always happen...
alex always says in interviews, that he KNOWS, that he would be the one, that has a daughter in the future... and not a boy, like the other "boys".... :o)) so i "vote" for a girl.... ;o)
please please update soon.... canīt wait for more!!!! greetings from austria!!!!!
Author's Response: First, thank you so much for always being a faithful reviewer. And yes, it's definitely something new for the girls ...let's hope they can handle it okay. I think you're right there with the media showing Brielle in a not so good way since he is engaged to someone else. And one more girl vote hehe. Seems to be the popular opion. :) Thanks so much! Can't wait for you to read what happens next!
OMG!!! reneč is pregnant too? this must be a joke or something!!! i donīt believe her!!! alex should go with her to the doctor... he shouldnīt trust her! sure she was his fianceč... excuse me, she IS still his fianceé, because he would never break up with her, because sheīs pregnant!! ARGH... i thought reneé would be out of the way, and brielle and alex could come closer and closer... but NO...the bitch has to cause troubles... damn!!!!!
ALEX DON`T DRINK!!!!! it doesnīt help in any way...and makes you, force brielle to climb out the window...althought sheīs pregnant...with your bottles...because you are afraid of your mother...because you know you doing shit!!!! how could such a wonderful man, be so stupid??? ;o)
please update soon as possible!!!!!
amazing story!!! :o)
Author's Response: Ooh that seems to be what most everyone thinks; she's lying...but only time will tell. Yeah, poor Alex is sort of in a bad situation now isn't he? And yeah, he kind of panicked there when his mom came to the door. He sure owes her something lol. Thanks so much for the great feedback and I hope you'll enjoy the rest of the chps. :)
god....such an amazing chapter!!!!!
iīm glad that he apologize!! he owe it brielle!!!
and wow...he sang for her... how wonderful... I could imagine this scene as well... and THIS kiss... WOW... they are falling for each other.. but the circumstances are so bad for the both... and thats so sad...
how sweet and embarrassed they were after this kiss...
i loved it, when he says, that he wanted to kiss her when he saw her in new york!!!! theyīre craving for each other... and sooner or later, no one could get between them, they should be together!! itīs fate... (i hope so) not even fucking bitch reneč could seperate them!!!
sheīs such an incorrect queue... poor denise will get the shock of her life when they told her about the pregnancy!!! and shopping with reneč isnīt the top thing on her list... I am sure, at this point!!!!
and about the qualities of "the nice looking guy"... in my opinion, i think, sheīs got no reasons to complain... :o)
but what about brielle and their baby??? i hope everything would be fine again and she could keep the baby!!!!
hurry alex, she needs you!!!!
god...i hate the point, where you stop the story!!! i need to get sure, that sheīs ok!!!!!
god canīt wait to read what comes next!!!!! please update soon!!!!!! I LOVE YOUR STORY!!!!!!
(btw...nice song...)
Author's Response: Aww thank you so much! I really appreciate your feedback; it really gives me the motivation I need to keep the chapters coming. And I'm glad the kiss went over well; I was hoping that it sounded okay as I was writing out. They say you're your own worst critic and that is very true. LOL Yeah, they weren't sure how to act after the kiss and it's gonna be interesting to see where it goes with them both now. Glad you liked the song. Did you check it out on Youtube? Can't wait to see what you think about the next chps!
first off, THANK LORD the board is back!! iīve really missed your story!!! :(
the next thing... brielle is okay!!! iīm so glad, that this pains werenīt some serious!!!
itīs "good" to hear how scared alex was, he really likes and cares for brielle. he doesnīt want to lose this little baby. heīs such a kind man, loving and caring... *.*
awwww...and denise... i love how she reacted!!! she never leave brielleīs side, calm and comfort her! such a loving behave... like a real mum does...
itīs kind of sad, that brielle has no family, that stand at her side... but thereīs lily, a fantastic friend, and now alex and denise.
reneé... in some point i really understand her jealous behave, but what kind of woman is she, to react like she did? NOTHING will be change in bitching at brie!!!
I wonder, if all the things that reneé accuse to brielle, not apply to herself.
fucking paparazzi.... i know everybody wants the latest news about their favourite celebrity, but enough is enough... some privacy everybody needs!!!!
iīm so sad, that alex is caught in old and bad habits again!!!
thank you, for another amazing chapter!!!!! PLEASE update soon!!!!
iīm glad you like my review! that itīs motivating you you, sounds fantastic! i love your story and i enjoy every chapter! i really loved this kiss... youīre so talented...
and yeah i checked that song on YT, itīs so beautiful, iīve never heard it before!!
greetings dani
Author's Response: Amen, amen! lol So glad to have the board back! I've missed updating it for you guys! :( And yes, she's gonna be just fine; she was just worried, next baby she'll know what's up and won't go running to the doctor every time lol. Aww, I think Denise and Brielle are going to be just fine with each other...Denise seems to have come around and I can see her taking the younger girl under her wing. And Renee is just miserable and miserable people do things to make other people miserable; they have to drag everyone down. Let's hope they're able to shake her and she either wisens up or moves on her way ...I think most vote for the latter. I'm working on updating as often as I can hehe I'm so glad you're enjoying the fic and continuing with your updates! They really do motivate me and give me that urge to get the chps done as quickly as possible. :) I found that song by chance as I was working on the fic and thought it'd be perfect for that chp ...I love it too! Sometimes I have to keep repeating it. LOL, thanks again! Can't wait to read your thoughts on this next chp! :)
damn... I HATE reneé!! i hate her, because, she makes this anyway very difficult situation much worse!!!! sheīs so selfish and mean!!! did she ever think about her "fiancé" and his feelings? did she really thinks itīs that easy for him? he wouldnīt want to have a child without being there for. he wants to do the right, and she should know and apreciate it. reneé knows everything ( i think so) about his past and his dad ;o) she should have known, heīs such a kind man
i know sheīs hurt, but he didnīt want to. they had an open relationship (how could she ever agree with that???) and she also do what she wanted to!
and how she said that she will bring no bastard on the world ... there I had goosebumps! it is her baby ... and not a bastard ... watch your language missy!!! ;(
poor denise... I hope this revelation does not leave permanent damage!!! ;o)
denise isnīt stupid, she will find out, that heīs been drinking again... and now she had a suspicion...
awwww....alex!!! DONīT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! please.... itīs not good for you... anyway!!!
iīm glad, that nick is there for him!!! *.*
please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! greetings
Author's Response: How do you get that accent above the E in Renee? I'd love to know. And yes, she is messing everything up lol. Let's hope AJ realizes and gets out of it before it's too late. Eeep. And Denise is definitely catching on to something going on with AJ ... let's hope she's able to help him before it gets worse. Thank you so much for the review! Glad you're enjoying it!
awww... this sweet behave between alex and brie! itīs so cool!! both canīt deny, they care so much for each other!
and how near they came... god... that was so HOT
iīm sure she really forget everything... even that lily leave ;)
lily is soooo right!!! thereīs more between them... and again is brielle so mature for her age. she wonīt cause more troubles for alex. she really like him and isnīt as selfish as reneé.
the one thing reneé is thinking abiout is herself. sie couldnīt care less, about alex and his feelings!!
wow...her parents found her... i thought they arenīt interested in her? they seemed so cold... but now they are here, but why? hmmm... i donīt trust them...
i need more.... please update soon!!!!!!
and the é (in reneé)... i push "shift" and then the accent button, before i push the E button...
LOL... well itīs hard to explain, when the language isnīt your mother tongue ;) :)
i follow you on twitter now! :) greetings...
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Yes, there's definitely something happening between the two hehe. Lily is a smart person lol and Brie knows something is going on, but she doesn't wanna cause any trouble. And you're totally right; Renee is only thinking of herself; she doesn't seem to care how AJ feels. And yes, her parents weren't interested in her life for the last three years and now they showed up so we'll have to see what happens. Let's hope Alex helps Brie cuz it might be some drama there. And I'm still trying to get that accent lol I couldn't seem to get those keys to work right; but I'm determined and I"ll get it......I hope. LOL thanks again!
not only alex, really likes brielleīs nice behave and her charm, even denise she seems to like more and more!!!
itīs like he said, itīs the feeling, he had to protect her. he couldnīt be weak, when she needs him... but then in the other side she is so strong and smart... itīs a give and take...
i donīt trust her parents... is it really because of money, why they showed up????
awww...poor denise... she knows, whatīs going on, with alex, and couldnīt help him... no one could help him, unless he wanted to. :o(
itīs so sad that she had to stand beside him and only could watch and hope he wake up and ask her for help...
but i think, this time brielle is a very good help...
alex already knows, that reneé isnīt the right one for him, but why couldnīt he be honest to his mother?
plesa update.... LOVE your story!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your wonderful review! Denise is definitely starting to really like Brielle so that's a good thing. And the way they are with each other is definitely give and take for both of them; they help one another and that helps themselves. Keep reading because the reason for Brielle's parents showing up is coming ... I promise. And Alex has issues he needs to be able to work through before he can admit how he feels about certain things, so let's hope he can do that. Glad you enjoyed the chp and hope you'll like this next one. :)
i love how the two cuties act together,... itīs so wonderful to "see", how much brielle gives alex... hmmm... how could i explain? she seems so innocent and "normal" (in a GOOD way), and sheīs so naiv and sweet... she shows him simple joys of the normal life... she has no bitchy attitudes... sheīs not trying to be someone else... you see... i really like her... :o))
wow...reneéīs father is really a dork!!! (is this correct?? IDK) how dare he, threaten alex in his OWN house!!!! we arenīt living in the Middle-Ages!!! itīs already 2010... a not married woman with a baby isnīt something unusual... (Especially in europe ;o) ) who does he think he is? a damn mafia guy?
such a pity itīs ending, like so often... alex is drinking... and the worst is, that denise knows it, but is afraid to talk to her son, because, she knows how he would react...
alex is aware, that he shouldnīt... but like the thing with reneé... he couldnīt admit!!!!
brielle is damn right!!!! denise is such a nice and caring person, and she donīt deserve, that they lie!!!!!
LOOOOVE your story...more please!!! greetings...
Author's Response: Aww thank you, I'm glad you love it. And yes, she does seem very "normal". I think you really described how she is spot on. And I'm glad that you like her so much! :) And yes, Renee's father is horrible, though I wouldn't say dork ...a dork is kind of similar to nerd. He's just an ass and a jerk (maybe you meant that). He sure stepped over the line, but Alex held his own which is really good. LOL, love the mafia comment! He seems to think he is because he acts like he owns everyone. As for Alex's drinking, such a sad, sad thing but let's hope his mom and Brielle can help him out. Because he needs to get some serious help before it gets worse. And thank you so much for being such a faithful reader and reviewer, I really appreciate it! :)
itīs kind of funny, how alex donīt want brielle to be angry at him... he really likes her...and maybe more!!
reneé is so annoying!! her bitchy attitude!!!! i hope sheīs lies about the whole baby thing!! iīm sure she is will have alex under pressure with the baby... when he doesnīt do what she wants, he will not see the baby often... :o(
iīm glad, that brielleīs parents left and i hope the fly home!!! they arenīt good for her!!
awww...denise is such a sweetheart!!! she cares a lot about brielle and i loved it how she comfort her!!!
and awww... they made up!! and when she asks him to stay... awww.... sooo sweet!!!!
i was really stunned... that he promised her, not to drink so much.... thatīs more than he would say to anyone else!
i hope they two sweeties can admit that they fall for each other!!! thatīs so cool...
it seems like, i should work, on my curses ;o) LOL yeah heīs an ass... like his daughter :o)
and for the gift for alex...hmm.. maybe she could make some photos... from denise and him...and people he likes and him... or the landscape around them...and make a book... or so...
sooo...pls update!!!! love it!!!
Author's Response: Aww, yeah he's finding himself slowly falling into something with her. And if Renee is pregnant, then yes, he'll have a fight with her over seeing the baby, that's for sure. As for his promise to Brielle, I don't know if that's something he'll be able to control ...but we'll have to see. LOL, you're doing just fine with your explanations, I haven't had any problems understanding you. Your gift idea is a great one and it gave me an idea. So thank you. :) Glad you're still enjoying this!
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