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I am a huge backstreet boy fan (especially nick... ) since the beginning and I love to read and write (in german ;o) ) fanfictions. Iīm from austria, so when my reviews sometimes sounds a little bit strange... you know the reason... reading is much easier than writing.... ;-) |
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Life doesn't always give you what you want. Sometimes it gives you what you need...rather you realize it or not.
HE TOLD RENE…!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i canīt believe it!!! YEAH, alex... it was a hard decision for him, but he did it!!!!!
her reaction was sooo clearly for me!!! sheīs a bitch! everything in this world has a reason... a good or a bad...
itīs good that alex found out which kind of person his future wife is, and so he is spared from a divorce!!!!
iīm curious, where alex is going with brie! i hope he donīt drink, when sheīs near!!
i love their conversation...like always... the belong together... :o)
itīs so cool, that he joins her at the lamaze class, like really couples do, she needs and deserves it!!!
i love your story... pls update soon!!!!! greetings from austria!!!!!
iīm glad, you understand my reviews and like my idea for his christmas gift...
itīs not so easy, to write all my thoughts in a foreign language...i know the words and i know WHAT i want to write...but the grammar is killing me!!!!!!
Author's Response: Woot! Go Alex! He did such a good job! And yes, Renee is a major bitch lol and she's so pissed that he's breaking up with her. I like that I'm able to show how at ease and comfortable Alex and Brielle are together. Sometimes it's hard to know if what you write sounds good to the readers, so thank you for all your wonderful feedback. I bet it's hard to write in a foreign language, but I think it's great that you know more than one. I wish I was more fluent in another. No worries on what you write though, because I do understand it. Thanks again! :)
AMAZING CHAPTER!!!!!!
alex didnīt drink!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and itīs all up to brielle!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
itīs kind of magic (love...) how he donīt want, that brie is mad at him...
brie always find the right words, gestures and tone in her voice to calm him down... itīs like you could almost feel, the good vibes between them!
her idea with the kites is really cute, like she is... and the conversation was naughty!!!!!!! :o)
both had their issues and itīs so good, that they could speak openly about it!!!
WHO is this man, they saw? i really want to know... damn cliffhanger!!! ;o)
ohhhh....and alex needs to get wasted, high or laid??? ^^ two of them arenīt a good option!!! but the third...hmm.... :o)
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!
i love it, to read and write in english, but iīm so insecure... so thank you for response to me!
Author's Response: Yay for Brielle and for Alex not drinking! And it's a lot of magic and love that he doesn't want her mad at him. He's finding himself falling hard and fast for her. LOL, glad you liked the kite convo; I thought I might trick some people with it hehe. And oh my at you thinking he should get laid. tee hee. As for your English; I've understood every review you've written and I enjoy them all! Thanks so much!
there are so many things happened since my last review!!!
first of all, i like her ex-boyfriend! itīs so nice, that he told her the truth... a true friend... they are between us...unbelieveable!
800.000 dollars!!! unbelievable!!! thatīs incredible!!! but alex is afraid that she leaves now, because she could stand on her own.
but damn... i know itīs true, that he just left renée...but they really like each other, why canīt they just give it a try?
the christmas presents were very beautiful and her words much more... brielle is such a sweet person!
i really donīt like renée but i never ever wish anybody to lose her baby...
but i still donīt trust her... is it a fake? does she play the broken girl, whoīs left outside alone? she couldnīt "compare" to brielle as a pregnant woman too...maybe she could "win the challenge" when she needs alex MORE than brielle does it...when you know what i mean!!! ;o) i knew, the choice of my words are maybe not the best, but i donīt know, how to explain it in any other way...
still love your story.... pls update soon!!!! greetings
Author's Response:
Aww yes, I was wondering where you'd gone. And Eric just couldn't let her parents do that to her; he had to come forward. He's a good guy, so no worries about trouble being caused. :) We'll have to see if a relationship between Alex and Brielle happens, right now there's just too much going on for it, or so Brie thinks. Glad you liked the gift ideas! As for the baby and the miscarriage being fake ... you'll have to keep reading (and reviewing hehe) to find out. Thanks so much! Glad to see you're back.
i like the idea, that she tours with the guys... and maybe something look like the other story... but everybody got his own ideas and own style of writing and so every story is different... soooo now iīm very courious how your story turn... greetings from austria =)
Sequel to "Beautiful Lie" and 2nd part of the Beautiful Lie series.
Nick Carter. 31, and in love with two woman, and a father of one. Now he's engaged to one woman, can he resist the urge to be with his first true love? Or does he live happily ever after with his other love?
What a perfect beginning !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I love how they take care of Casey ... so sweet how much linds loves him too ... but ... what is it with the eyes of casey? hello? I thought only nick is in love with 2 persons in an unusually way!!!!
and ... phew ... why is it suddenly so hot in here?? *sigh*
God ... linds questions about his desire was very good ... ;) And Nick's idea was even better ... God ... At some point it is killing me ... I think I need a cold shower!!! ;)
I can hardly wait to read more of it! Please update soon !!!!!!!!!
canīt wait for another update...
sorry that I'm so impatient ... I do not want to be annoying, but I can not wait... =)
IīM SO ADDICTED TO YOUR STORY!!!!
THANK YOU!!!!! amazing chapter....
I really laugh when she teases nick... lol and i love nickīs reaction and his excuse... =))
ohh...wow... paige meets with another man... hm... i donīt even know what to make of it... I am so curious about what is nick say!!! will he be jealous, or happy? or is it something in between!!!
I can hardly wait to read nick's part, he is the next right?
PLEASE UPDATE SOON... LOVE IT!!!!!
poor paige... this asshole jake isnīt worth it, that she is sad!!! i was happy for her! and now sheīs so sad! first i thought itīs a little weird that nick wants to meet jake and talk to him, but in the end iīm happy that he founds out whatīs going on!
and,...now...WOW... i mean, whatīs going on? lindsay wants paige... and nick let them alone... to do whatever they want? yeah well... iīm very curios how far the both girls will go... and is this only a thing between lindsay and paige... or will at some point nick join them??
thank you so much for your amazing chapters... and my opinion is the same... I LOVE IT!!!! love your charas, your style of writing and the whole story!!!!!
only one thing is left to say for me.... PLEASE UPDATE!!! canīt wait... =)
OMG!!!! now iīm confused...
what happened with the REAL lindsay and who is this girl?? I thought nick is the only one she wants!!!! i donīt understand her!! is it because she think nick wants this... and sheīs afraid, that sometime he will leave her, for paige?
could it be, that lindsay thinks, when the three share bed again, nick has, everything he wants, and then he will stay by her side... donīt leave her... and marry her...?
or is this whole thing bothering her? that paige, is living with them, that paige has nickīs baby and that foreseeable future she is married... maybe itīs to fast for her!?
hmmmm...do you understand what i mean???
Iīm stunned.... PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE as soon as possible!!!!!!! god... i love the way your story goes... everytime, when i think everything is "safe"... you turn it upside down... and I LOOOOOVE IT!!!! =) take care....
i really understand paige and her feelings... iīm sorry for her, she loves him so deeply and wants to be with him again. and to know that he will marry lindsay, had to be very hard. she wants to be "good" and stay away from nick and linds, but the two of them donīt want it.
there are one thing, in the conversation between her and nick, that i donīt like. this thing with her school... is she really going to leave, LA, nick and paige? iīm afraid, that when she leaves, nick and paige will come closer than she imagines? i know itīs sooo good for her future, but is this more important than her true love? i know...she had to trust him...but paige isnīt some random girl... he loves her too and sheīs the mother of his child..
iīm soooo curious, what will happens next!!!!!! but i think when she goes away, the love goes with her... =(
and at the end...when nick cuddle between "his girls", in some weird way itīs soooo cute... i love it, when the three are together... but i think itīs time for a new and final decision, that nick has to make.... LINDSAY or PAIGE!?!?!?!?!
THANK you for your fast update and this amazing chapter!!!! still love it... =)
youīve done it again... you leave me speechless!!!!
i knew that lindsay would have troubles with the course.
but what does she do? stay...or go...
what will nick say? iīm sure he will support her, no matter what...
but i agree with linds, when she lives in another city, and the two are on their own, they canīt resist...maybe first...but not forever...
it seems like the girls get closer every day... and nick is very tolerant, to borrow paige his lovely fiancee... no jealousy?
canīt wait for the next update... please hurry... iīm so addicted... ^^ =)
wow... i NEVER know, where us this story leads... everytime, when i thought, i knew, whatīs coming next.. everything is turn up side down!!!!
i donīt really know what i should say...
paige is again this very lovely and nice person... and i like her more and more each chapter... she grown up and it seems to me, that she is a better person now...
lindsay changed... the way she behave with paige, it makes me wonder, if nick wouldnīt be sufficient... i thought itīs only him for her... and that nobody else is in her heart... or is it only the youth... maybe she gets a little bit scared about the marriage, and she wants to have "fun" before she says "yes"??????
It seems to me so that it pushes nick paige's direction in some way ... whether that is unconsciously or consciously do not know ...
i can not wait to read, what she feels about, what she saw and heard in the bathroom!!!! is she jelous or sad or angry? i have NO suggestions!!!! maybe a mix of this feelings!!!
and what about nick? it seems he is a bit discontinuous... he doesnīt know what to do right now...RIGHT???
damn.... iīm really confused.... SO PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE.... I STILL WANT MORE!!!!
what a "nice" beginnig for a day... 7 a.m. really?? god... where are their manners?? but iīm very impresses that aaron and angel are already up from bed at this early time... =)))
iīm expected, a rude behave against paige, from jane... but nick is a grown man, who knows, who to trust and who not (i hope so!!! ;-) )
is nick serious? he would go out for dinner, with both ladies and baby-casey???
wow... iīm very courious, how that will work... what about paparazzo and the other bloodhounds?
canīt wait for the next chapter.... linds pov... what does she feel, about nick and paige, because of ...what happend in the shower...
UUUPPPPDDDAAAATTTTEEE!!!!! pls =))))
what a sad chapter... i truly understand linds feelings!!! she felt, that she was superfluous... and maybe she is right... nick was always in the in between, not knowing what to do, who to choose....
i believed him, when he said, lindsay is the one, he would share his whole life with... it always seemed to me, that this relationship, he has with her, was something magic... and special... but since paige is back, they lost it... they had again this unusually threesome relationship... and lindsay is again the "loser" in this game... maybe nick rushed to early after paige in a new relationship... maybe he had should wait...
o god... i feel like, iīm hopping from one leg on the other...not knowing, what i should feel.... iīm so so so so sad for lindsay but in the same time iīm happy that paige, casey and he would be a proper family....
iīm again truly confused... and i canīt wait for more!!!!!
PLEASE UPDATE SOON AS POSSIBLE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I canīt believe nick let her go!!! and the fact, that he said, lindsay is right, is so bitter!!!
itīs paige... it was always paige... how could he, only lie to itself so!
iīm sure, he has not done on purpose!!
i know, it was time, that he made a final decision and i also know, that no matter who he chose, someone would be hurt!!! but... iīm so sorry for lindsay!!!
it seems to me that paige, is more sorry for all this what happend, than nick!!!
i wonder, if the two sexy ladies BOTH leave nick and get into a relationship!!! wow...thatīs it!!! nick would not know, whatīs hit him!!!! man...iīm really common... because we all knew, that one of them would be really hurt.... and no matter who is the "loser" in this "game"... i love them all and i wished, there was a easily way out, without hurting somebody!!!!! but that's not the way it goes... =(
iīm very happy, that iīm not in nickīs shoes!!!!!
amazing chapter!!!!! UPDATE SOON!!!!! iīm soooo curious.... canīt wait for more!!!!
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