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My response to the June Flash Fiction challenge. A Combination of getting lost and someone is angry.
no, forget it, im not done.
GHOUL PATROL?!!!!!
lmfao!!! kripke needs to canon this!!!
OK, now im done!
my god it took me forever to comment because i forgot my own userID and pw, lmao!
that aside, i thoroughly enjoyed this. i love the bantering and ALSO, also, MUSE BABY!!! i love Muse! you win!
wow that was intense!! you should really write more suspense/horror stuff :)
i could totally visualize the scene where Nick's lifeless blue eyes staring back at him...creeepppyyy...
also, that last sentence...I made up a lot of scenarios how it could work out as I was reading but I never guessed that! lol
It's the winter of 1995 and as Nick and the boys are on tour, he finds himself growing anxious for unexplained reasons. As he slowly discovers the truth behind his fears, he is thrown into a world he had forced himself to forget.
OMG you have got to be kidding me! My money was on Nickolas so he better be the good guy here missy! Maybe he's trying not to involve the rest of the guys, maybe it's slowing them down? (is hopeful). but leaving them with Max is not a good move either. Hmmm...can we please have your story be trained to follow your ideas and not go their merry way too often because you're giving us more cliffies lady! (ok so that's a good thing but sometimes, like today, it's NOT, curious mind wants to know!).
crap. I cant help wondering which mom this is. the dead never stay dead, i swear!
and KEVIN!!!! so we lost 3 boys and got 1 back lol...i can only imagine the state of panic the others are in. and what are they gonna do now? They have Max back in the hotel to deal with. Eeep!
woah woah woah. wait. so Nickolas is Jane's son? I read that right, right?
and jane killed Nick/Andrew's real mom?
WHAT THE HECK IS GOING ON YO?
now im worried about the other boys and what Max is gonna do to them :((((
Also, Max killed Martin. LMAO!
holy crap. did you change the ending to this chapter? cause i swear the last time i read it, that last cliffy wasnt there! So...WILL THE REAL NICKOLAS PLEASE JUST STAND UP!!
Probably? Honestly I can't remember lol
i remember reading this chapter before but figured i'd refresh myself since THE BOSS IS NOT AROUND woot woot! that last line, CHILLS! ALSO, Nickolas is Nick's brother from a different mother then? and Nick's name isnt really Nick? and Max best not be using the boys as bargaining chips!!
aww lol I don't remember where you are.
i love snarky Nick! and the eye-rolling and EVERYTHING! im curious to find out more about Nickolas. i think once this is over, both of them should go somewhere and get to know each other. It's always nice to have a sibling that cares. i hope this is true for Nickolas.
I agree. Gotta love the good siblings!
brotherly bonding makes me glee :D *is hopeful* and wow, I'm mentally exhausted just reading all this new info we got in this chap! LOL @ nick saying to give us a moment after finding out the safe house belongs to the Richardson, cause my mind really wanted one!
ooh yes, I thought you'd enjoy that! lol
ok my review got eaten so 2nd try!
wtf i shouldnt even be reviewing cause i needed NEXT like 10 seconds ago!
but i have to say that ever since this chap mentions the similarities btw Nickolas and Nick (andrew i guess...no!!!!), i've been picturing young!Nick and 2001!Nick together and that makes me very happy :DDDD
lmao I still can't really get a vivid picture of what he looks like in my mind.
it pains me but i have a feeling Nickolas will not survive this. and i forgot to mention how i love the fact that Nick referred to both Kevin and Nickolas as his 'two older brothers' last chap.
also, little brother!!!
*hopes Nickolas survives this*
aww having a feeling of forboding are we? :OP lol
i have nothing coherent to say. im clicking NEXT right now! ok, after i click submit.
ps: we have a roger at work and he's a major douchebag. it's not difficult to hate your curtis/roger at all!
I have never met a Roger who isn't a douche bag lol You don't have to leave me a review for every chapter you know. I already know you love me, hopefully you will still love me throughout the rest!
Max, this rubbing chin and licking your lips will get you killed some day. i dont know how, but it has to happen!
LOL
Nick's not going to die, puh-leez!
*is confident!*
i wish the boys are with him...i wonder though if the intend is to kill Nick, why still have the boys with Max? there's no need for bargaining chips if they kill Nick. so this whole cliffy my friend, is not necessary! Yup.
LOL aww
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