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Categories: Fanfiction > Backstreet Boys
Characters: Nick
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Violence
Series: Swollen Issues Series
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes
Word count: 55322
Read Count: 79828
Published: 10/22/05 » Updated: 10/22/05
Date: 11/23/05 Title: Chapter 1: 1
I know I read this before, somewhere. I think quite possibly on FanFiction.net, but I can't remember. But It's good, and I'm looking forward to reading it again. [Ashley]
Categories: Fanfiction > Backstreet Boys
Characters: AJ, Group
Genres: Drama, Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No
Word count: 9344
Read Count: 6499
Published: 10/22/05 » Updated: 01/03/06
Date: 10/23/05 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
A very interesting start, I have to say. The summary is what caught my attention and I am curious to see where you plan to take this. Keep up the good work and update soon! [Ashley]
He has a problem, one that no one is aware of because no
one gives him the time of day anymore. Could she be the
reason that he could change? Can he get away from his
past in time to save her and his own life as well? It
seemed that way...
Categories: Fanfiction > Backstreet Boys
Characters: Group, Kevin, Other
Genres: Angst, Drama, Romance
Warnings: Sexual Content, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No
Word count: 23857
Read Count: 15613
Published: 10/29/05 » Updated: 03/25/07
Date: 10/29/05 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
A new one from y'all. Awesome! Biggest I gotta say is that y'all definitely have my attention hooked with this one. The humor you used in the chap was absolutely priceless and had me laughing. Keep up the good work! [Ashley]
Author's Response: Sara decided that some humor would be a good idea for this one...chapter 6 is written...just trying to piece it all together...really sad chapter...with its share of humor too...thanks for stickin with us!!
Date: 10/29/05 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
I do have to say I agree that Jenn and Kevin have a bit of a twisted relationship. I'm curious to know what's going on with Jenn, although I'm pretty sure I already know. Keep up the good work! [Ashley]
Author's Response: Oh...and this one is all Sara. She gets a few of the ideas from me...but its all her...and she wont tell me what her plans are!! boooooo...anyways....it is a bit twisted...but...its good at the same time...hehe...ill let Sara know what you think once she gets home from work...
Jenn
Date: 10/29/05 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
Well holy heck. I was right about Jenn being pregnant. The clues were all there, so no surprise. But this is a definite change for Kevin's character, being addicted to drugs that is. And that attitude he's playin'...keep up the good work! [Ashley]
Date: 10/30/05 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Go jenn, rip Kevin a new freakin' butthole while you're at. Someone needs to send the guy back into reality. Very intense chap I have to say. Keep up the good work! [Ashley]
Date: 10/30/05 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
Haha, Jenn. Nice little Author's Note at the end there. Again, another intense chap. Lots of emotions and the works all intertwined. I think I need a cigarette now after reading that chap and I am going to go have one after I finish this review. Seems like this story keeps getting more intense with each chap. Keep up the good work and update soon because I want to know what's gonna happen next! [Ashley]
Author's Response: I just got off the phone with Sara...and shes gonna try to send me chapter 6...and ill post it as soon as i get it...*hands you lighter* its only gonna get worse...i think...
Date: 10/31/05 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
It would be tough coping with the fact that your unborn child may have heart defects. And nerve racking not knowing how bad it is until the baby is born. I'm glad to see that kevin and Jenn are finally working the relationship thing out and I have a feeling there could be a ring landing on her finger sometime in the near future. Keep up the good work and update soon! [Ashley]
Categories: Fanfiction > Backstreet Boys
Characters: Group, Howie, Other
Genres: Drama, Suspense
Warnings: Death, Sexual Content, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes
Word count: 4607
Read Count: 469
Published: 10/30/05 » Updated: 10/30/05
Date: 10/30/05 Title: Chapter 1: Whisper
Damn...very intriguing and intense for a short fic. You guys had a lot of emotions pack in that one. It really was intense and has left me with my jaw dropped open. Keep up the good work with everything! I'm a fan of your writing, you know. [Ashley]
Categories: Fanfiction > Backstreet Boys
Characters: Group
Genres: Humor, Suspense
Warnings: Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes
Word count: 78286
Read Count: 54585
Published: 11/02/05 » Updated: 05/10/06
Date: 11/02/05 Title: Chapter 1: 1
Good start to the new one, Mare. I love reading this kinda stuff from you. And the humor was fantastic. Took me a while to realize how old everyone was, but that's ok. The confusion was cleared up. But Nick's antics were priceless. Keep up the good work and update soon! [Ashley]
Author's Response: Thanks Ashley :O)
Categories: Fanfiction > Backstreet Boys
Characters: Group
Genres: Action, Alternate Universe, Drama, Adventure
Warnings: Graphic Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No
Word count: 60158
Read Count: 22153
Published: 12/09/05 » Updated: 11/27/06
Date: 12/10/05 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
This is definitely a start to quite the different type of fic. But ya know what? I really like it. I enjoy your use of old west dialogue and the way you are able to make it all flow together. Sweet and simple with just enough detail to make the chapter interesting. Didn't think I would be interested in this, but you have my attention hooked. Keep up the good work! [Ashley!]
Date: 12/10/05 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Brian is quite the talker with his fancy language, but I find it rather hilarious, especially when noone else can understand a word he says. You seem to hit Nick's apparent personality right on target which is a very good thing. Keeping the characters' personalities true to nature is very important. I like where this is going so far, although nothing spectacular has yet to happen. Keep up the good work and update soon! [Ashley]
Categories: Orphan
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: Archived Author: BSB Attorneys (Jill/Sabrina), The Winchester Saga, Jr. BSB Series
Chapters: 0 Table of Contents
Completed: No
Word count: 0
Read Count: 0
Published: 01/01/70 » Updated: 01/01/70
Date: 12/14/05 Title: None
There are several things I want to point out as suggestions. First of all, developing a background for a story makes it a whole lot more interesting and is really what draws the reader in. If you automatically jump right into a story without developing somewhat of a background to explain to the reader what it's all about, the reader is going to lose interest quite quickly. Second, having dailogue is ok and an essential part to writing a story, but try not to focus just on writing dialogue. Create some depth in your chaps by expanding on details. Don't just speak the story, paint the story for the reader so they get a real sense of everything. Another little thing is try developing your characters a little more. I'm not saying you have to write out a whole biography for each one in the first chap or anything, but a few snippets here and there of what the characters are all about is really helpful and allows the reader to get in touch with each character. Other then that, I sure you could have a decent fic going. Just those few things might do well to be worked on. Keep up the work. [Ashley]
Date: 12/14/05 Title: None
Personally as a reader (and fellow author [be sure to check out my story "Lean On Me"]), I would like to see more depth to the chances, by meaning more details, more character development and more plot development. Keep up the work. [Ashley]
Categories: Fanfiction > Backstreet Boys
Characters: Nick
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No
Word count: 43097
Read Count: 49995
Published: 12/14/05 » Updated: 09/09/06
Date: 12/15/05 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1
Well, you definitely have my attention hooked on this so far. I have to be honest, after reading the summary I was a bit hesitant aboout checking this out, but the chick's witty sarcasm is great and really puts a fresh splash of humor into this fic. I can see this turning into quite a good fic. I'll be looking for an update. Keep up the good work and update soon! [Ashley]
Author's Response: well im glad u popped on in and read it! :) hope u like as it continues. thank you for the good review!!