Summary: Donatello finds someone in Central Park, who needs him very badly to look after her. What will he do?
Categories: Fanfiction > Animated > Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles
Characters: April O'Neil, Donatello, Leonardo, Master Splinter, Michaelangelo, Raphael, Shredder
Genres: Action, Alternate Universe, Drama
Warnings: Child Abuse, Graphic Violence, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 64 Table of Contents
Completed: No
Word count: 42090
Read Count: 84223
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Published: 11/04/06 » Updated: 11/17/08
Published: 11/04/06 » Updated: 11/17/08
Reviewer: BackstreetFan Signed 
Date: 01/29/07 Title: Chapter 39: 39. N'SYNC's in Michigan
Date: 01/29/07 Title: Chapter 39: 39. N'SYNC's in Michigan
Interesting chapter, I hope Lana is okay and the turtles find her soon.
Author's Response: We shall see, won\'t we?
Reviewer: BackstreetFan Signed
Date: 11/12/06 Title: Chapter 3: 3. Screaming Banshee
Date: 11/12/06 Title: Chapter 3: 3. Screaming Banshee
I liked the part w/Mikey and the pizza talk and Raphael needs to calm down.
Author's Response: Raphael\'s a hot-head. Get used to him yelling lots. Lol.
Reviewer: BackstreetFan Signed
Date: 11/12/06 Title: Chapter 5: 5. Raphael's Sais....
Date: 11/12/06 Title: Chapter 5: 5. Raphael's Sais....
Aww, Raphael was cute with Lana.
Author's Response: He has his moments.
Reviewer: BackstreetFan Signed
Date: 11/12/06 Title: Chapter 6: 6. Baby-Sitting
Date: 11/12/06 Title: Chapter 6: 6. Baby-Sitting
Uh oh!!
Author's Response: Uh-oh what? All he\'s doing is baby-sitting -- after mouthing off. Lol.
Reviewer: BackstreetFan Signed
Date: 11/12/06 Title: Chapter 7: 7. Angry Phone Call
Date: 11/12/06 Title: Chapter 7: 7. Angry Phone Call
Good chapter, and I love the last line
Author's Response: Haha. It\'d help if I could remember the last line. I just know Donnie\'s angry. Which is VERY rare. Lol.
Reviewer: BackstreetFan Signed
Date: 11/12/06 Title: Chapter 8: 8. Troubled
Date: 11/12/06 Title: Chapter 8: 8. Troubled
Aww, poor Donnie.
Author's Response: Yes, poor Donatello.
Reviewer: BackstreetFan Signed
Date: 11/14/06 Title: Chapter 12: 12. Donnie!
Date: 11/14/06 Title: Chapter 12: 12. Donnie!
Aww, it sucks that you're sick(get better soon), and that was nice of Shredder to return Lana to Donatello.
Author's Response: Yes, Shredder can be nice. Least, I like to believe so. As for getting better....want a sore throat? Lol.
Reviewer: BackstreetFan Signed
Date: 11/14/06 Title: Chapter 13: 13. Name-Calling
Date: 11/14/06 Title: Chapter 13: 13. Name-Calling
Interesting chapter, but I still loved it. Update A.S.A.P.
Author's Response: We shall see. Lol.
Reviewer: BackstreetFan Signed
Date: 11/17/06 Title: Chapter 14: 14. First Day Of School
Date: 11/17/06 Title: Chapter 14: 14. First Day Of School
Aww, Lana grew up and she's still cute.
Author's Response: She had to grow up some time.
Reviewer: BackstreetFan Signed
Date: 11/17/06 Title: Chapter 15: 15. Language Trouble
Date: 11/17/06 Title: Chapter 15: 15. Language Trouble
I know this story is fanfic, but why would a kindergartener being learning the state capitals.
PS. Lana's answers were funny.
Author's Response: Because kids in Kindergarten here are apparently learning how to make math graphs & shit like that.
Reviewer: BackstreetFan Signed
Date: 11/17/06 Title: Chapter 16: 16. Raphael's Fault
Date: 11/17/06 Title: Chapter 16: 16. Raphael's Fault
Dang, Raph needs to learn to not curse(or not curse around Lana, at least).
Author's Response: It\'s Raph, he\'s allowed to forget and curse whe, & where he wants.
Reviewer: BackstreetFan Signed
Date: 11/20/06 Title: Chapter 17: 17. Shredder Lectures
Date: 11/20/06 Title: Chapter 17: 17. Shredder Lectures
I feel bad for Lana(even tho she wasn't listening).
Author's Response: Well, she should learn to listen to her elders. She\'s five!
Reviewer: BackstreetFan Signed
Date: 11/20/06 Title: Chapter 18: 18. Shredder Calls Donatello
Date: 11/20/06 Title: Chapter 18: 18. Shredder Calls Donatello
I liked the little convo between Donatello and Shredder.
Author's Response: Well, they had to communicate to get Lana back with Donnie - safely.
Reviewer: BackstreetFan Signed
Date: 11/20/06 Title: Chapter 19: 19. Technodrome
Date: 11/20/06 Title: Chapter 19: 19. Technodrome
I'm happy that Donatello went to get her, but I still feel bad for her.
Author's Response: She\'s five and off wandering alone. Tsk, tsk.
Reviewer: BackstreetFan Signed
Date: 11/25/06 Title: Chapter 20: 20. I'm Late! I'm Late! For A Very Important Date!
Date: 11/25/06 Title: Chapter 20: 20. I'm Late! I'm Late! For A Very Important Date!
Interesting chapter, Raph being nice to Lana was a change.
Author's Response: Raph\'s always been nice - he just doesn\'t let his brothers know it.
