My idea was that instead of comming up with a completely new story involving Aaron and Kellie do one using the elements of the relationship that you already established.

Start the story with Aaron picking her up at the Concord Club. Also make this story as much of explicit NC-17 story as your Nick stories were.

Since it is only fair Alyssa should be the 3rd person (2nd girl) in a 3-some involving her and Aaron and Kellie I mean really why should Nick get all the fun.

Author's Response: LOL Yeah I\'ve been thinking about that. I\'d definitely start with the first date and stuff like that. It\'d be hilarious with the whole threesome thing because Alyssa sees Aaron as her little brother lol. I totally get what you\'re saying it would make for some good comedy too!

Good beginning.

I would have had Aaron getting freaky on the dance floor with some chick and Kellie going over their and interupt them thinking she was busting Nick for cheating on her best friend only to see this really hot younger guy that looks like Nick.

Then I would have had Kellie say something to Aaron like I am sorry for inturupting but you looked like my bestfriends boyfriend Nick. While she is saying she is sorry she is checking Aaron out.

Then have Aaron say please don't say Nick Carter and then Kellie says yeah why not into boy band music? Aaron laughs then says no its not that I am his brother and people are always compairing us and I really, really hated being compared to him.Then have Aaron introduce the girl he was dancing with as one of his friends he is out with tonight.

Then have Kellie say something like it was nice meeting you Aaron and whoever and turn to leave then Aaron could grab her arm and say wait would you like to join us in the VIP area. Kellie says sure I am done with my shift anyway let me just clock out and I will meet you in the VIP area. While Kellie is walking away Aaron checks her out.

Then later while they are talking up in the VIP area is when they ask each other how old they are and then have Kellie make the joke about prom.

I would have made Kellie play harder to get.

I know I am sounding really critical of your story and I guess I am but I do truely like it so far.

Author's Response: hehe that\'s okay constructive criticism is totally welcome! The reason why I didn\'t have Kellie do the whole \'you look like my best friend\'s boyfriend\' is because she knows Aaron from hanging out with Alyssa and Nick. And Kellie is so going to play hard to get, especially on the first date when he\'s expecting to get an invitation into her apartment. If they\'d never met before he asked her out I would have totally done what you suggested. But anywhoo thank you so much for your suggestions! And of course I\'m glad you like it!

She is 16 and that was her first kiss.  That should be more like her first fuck.  Are you going to add Justin to the story?  I think his reaction would be just as interesting as Nick's

Pot isn't addictive.

The last 4 chapters now I can't enlarge the text like I can for the rest of chapters in the story.