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NOTICE OF EXTENDED PERIOD OF HIATUS Okay let's face it, I'm not the most prolific writer on this site at the best of times but university work had my brain reeling and everytime I see words I want to kill things. I'll be giving my creative writing a rest until I'm out of the woods with essays and the like. Thank you! |
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Categories: Fanfiction > Backstreet Boys
Characters: Group, Nick
Genres: Drama, Romance
Warnings: Graphic Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes
Word count: 16214
Read Count: 1047
Published: 06/12/06 » Updated: 06/30/06
Date: 06/28/06 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
That feeling...knowing someone's there but not being able to speak with them, then the threat of having them taken away from you...I understand that. I loved this!
Date: 07/03/06 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Ohh...she didn't know about her baby! That's horrible! I really like how you control the flashback sequences, each flashback leading to a relevant section of dialogue! Very cool!
The end of this chapter was also very cool! It almost reminds me of something...but for the life of me I have no idea what it is! All I know is that it's brilliant! Especially the last paragraph! I love the idea that her abiltiy to walk has been revoked! Class!
Well done!!! (I'm reading along now!)
Date: 07/03/06 Title: Chapter 17: Epilogue
Aw! Happy ending! I can imagine it fading to black on the last line! The image of Aaron and their son curled up together was really cute! (after watching cartoons! how tired they must be!) lol!
Lovely!
Categories: Fanfiction > Music > Aaron Carter
Characters: None
Genres: Drama, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No
Word count: 6299
Read Count: 7718
Published: 08/20/06 » Updated: 11/16/06
Date: 08/26/06 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Ooh..ouch! She's seriously harsh! Then again I'm glad she left Mr Carter cringing in the elevator! I bet that's every celebrity's personal nightmare! Really cool setting,. funny to imagine all the drunken people! Well done! (I am NOT imagining the naked guys! I'm...not. lol!)
Date: 08/26/06 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Erm...hehe sorry he IS a pervert! lol but it was cute. Especially with the heavy basket! I liked the ending though! hehe it's the Sarah/Aaron conspiracy! And I really like the second to last line: You're forgiven but it's not forgotten. Nicely done!
Date: 08/26/06 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
Huh??? Ohhh I get it. lol! I just read the last sentences and got completely spun out! So was she dreaming or something? I DID understand one bit though! NEVER UNDER ANY CIRCUMSTANCES look in a girl's writing book! Unless of course they invite you to. Instant wall gets built up (voice of experience) but I really like Sarah's personality. What can I say? I like hard to reach people! Keep up the hard work!
Date: 08/26/06 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Arghh! OMG what was she thinking?! Rescue the chair?! But seriously I loved the storm! You described it really well! Just complete chaos, especially with all the references to 'battles' and 'tugs of war'! The whole struggling against nature thing! I'm also enjoying your writing style! You switch between first person and third person quite nicely, which lends an idiosyncractic quality to the story and the main character.
Ooh listen to my long words! lol! Very nicely written! (I want a thunderstorm over here now!)