Date: 08/12/08 02:25 am Title: Chapter One: The Aftermath
I really like the description in this one, I can like, see what's happening, and I like the plot of HIM getting beat up by his girlfriend, not the other way around like usual, very interresting
Date: 04/19/08 09:14 pm Title: Chapter One: The Aftermath
ok wow..our beautiful nicky is lettin some 19 year old bitch hurt him..shit..that girl should be shot..lol ..who would ever wann hurt his beautiful face? update soon!!!
Author's Response: thanks for the review! the more people review the more i update. it keeps me motivated (i'm pretty sure i spelled that wrong. haha.) i'm going to try to update as soon as possible however, i'm having i bit of writer's block.rnthanks agian,rnRyann
Author's Response: thanks for the review! the more people review the more i update. it keeps me motivated (i'm pretty sure i spelled that wrong. haha.) i'm going to try to update as soon as possible however, i'm having i bit of writer's block.rnthanks agian,rnRyann
Date: 04/19/08 07:49 pm Title: Chapter One: The Aftermath
great start
hope you'll update soon
Date: 04/19/08 06:39 pm Title: Chapter One: The Aftermath
Interesting start. Poor Nicky :(
Date: 04/19/08 05:46 pm Title: Chapter One: The Aftermath
Great opening! Can't wait so see where you go with this...
