Reviews For *Cringes*
Reviewer: RokofAges75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/02/08 09:10 pm Title: "I Want It That Way" By Steph (rewrite)
Date: 06/02/08 09:10 pm Title: "I Want It That Way" By Steph (rewrite)
Great job with the rewrite, Steph! I like how you kept the basic dialogue and stuff the same, cause that part was okay, but you added in more of Nick's thoughts and took out the "Like a Child" part, hehe.
Reviewer: cabybakes Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/02/08 07:32 pm Title: "Don't Wanna Lose You Now" by Julie (rewritten)
Date: 06/02/08 07:32 pm Title: "Don't Wanna Lose You Now" by Julie (rewritten)
WOW...amazing rewrite! Very non-cringeworthy! Great job!
Reviewer: cabybakes Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/02/08 07:28 pm Title: "I Want It That Way" By Steph (rewrite)
Date: 06/02/08 07:28 pm Title: "I Want It That Way" By Steph (rewrite)
MUCHO BETTER!!!
