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Reviewer: TheOne Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/07/12 10:39 pm Title: Chapter 4- America's Sweethearts

Hi Mellz! I have been following this serie for quiet a week already and it is amazing!! 

I liked a lot the way you manage to describe all these years of the relationship between Alyssa and Nick, it was so clear. The way they went thru all the ups and downs its simply incredible and it surprises me to find that there is a big story ahead of them...

Hope you can find a way soon to balance your moving, job and writting!

Reviewer: magsie19 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/22/10 07:52 am Title: Chapter 1 - Back to Reality

are you ever going to write this story??? :( makes me sad that you stopped! you are an awesome writer!!! please come back!!!

Reviewer: angelhunalex Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/28/09 10:50 pm Title: Chapter 4- America's Sweethearts

Finally I get to read the chapter now. And I love it!!! I could imagine the whole scene. I think it is going to be a hard and long way but maybe it really was a good idea going to the awards. Can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: angelhunalex Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/21/09 04:41 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Money Talks

daaaaamn... i was not on here since ages... but now i finally read this chapter. yes,it was a lot of business but i think it was a good one. i really missed reading something from you cause i love your style!
well shayla is a bitch and diana kinda is too. i like the idea of taking izzy for the job cause she is a close friend of them.
gonna read the next chapter later ;)
hope that they'll find a good way out of all that!

Reviewer: ally Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/21/09 05:34 am Title: Chapter 4- America's Sweethearts

wow so i finally came back after i read the twilight books 50 times to check on whats been going on and i LOVE it...dont stop with this story cant wait for morrrre

Reviewer: PaulaKTBPA Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/18/09 11:52 am Title: Chapter 4- America's Sweethearts

Wow an update! Loved it, really!
Please don't stop with this story, it's still one of my favorites...

Thanks!

Reviewer: dolphingirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/18/09 12:44 am Title: Chapter 4- America's Sweethearts

holy cow  I can't wait for the next update hurry please

Reviewer: Tantilisinteaser Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/17/09 10:19 pm Title: Chapter 4- America's Sweethearts

YAY!!! MEL your back!!!!!!!!!!! YAY!!!!!!!! It's like an early birthday present for me!!!! So thanks!

I have to say it was well worth the wait. I love how realistically you haver written this chapter, because a scandal like this is sure to effect Alyssa's career in some way but like Nick said you can't have everything. I think it is going to cause a lot of issues between the pair though!

I do think they are playing a slightly dangerous game with the press. It could end up back firing big time but then again they have their secret weapon to use against Shayla don't they?

Good luck on the moving front hun. Can't wait for more of your work!

Reviewer: Southern_Sweetheart Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/17/09 07:37 pm Title: Chapter 4- America's Sweethearts

I am so glad that you updated!

This was a good chapter and I am so glad that Nick & Alyssa are being classy about the whole situation. I just hope everything works out for them and I'm really interested to see how this all turns out. This whole 'America's Sweethearts' thing is only going to fuel Shayla more.

I hope that you don't give up on this story; but I know how it is to have writers block per say. Just keep us updated with whatever you decide to do to this story. I look forward to reading some new stories by you, that is if you do decide to use those new ideas. Just please don't give up on this one ;) Good luck with whatever you decide on.

Reviewer: blueleeryan Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/17/09 05:45 pm Title: Chapter 4- America's Sweethearts

Oooo amazing job so can't wait for more. I hope it goes in there way. Keep it up

Reviewer: brandy_d Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/17/09 04:54 pm Title: Chapter 4- America's Sweethearts

Mel!!! I miss you! I was shocked as shit when I woke up this morning and noticed that you updated. I still LOVE Nick and Lyss, and will continue to read.....as long as it takes!!!

Good luck with your move. I am moving too. Just sold our house here in Baton Rouge, and as of June 1st, I will be Canadian!!!!



Author's Response: I miss you too Brandy! I guess that explains why you've been MIA huh? Canada? That IS a BIG move. Best of luck and I hope that once things calm down you'll be back in action.

Reviewer: WishingOnAStar Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/17/09 02:50 pm Title: Chapter 4- America's Sweethearts

Yay for an update, it totally just made my morning!!!! Great chapter, I can't wait to see how the rest of the stunt unfolds (even if we have to wait a couple of weeks for an updated! haha).

Author's Response: Aww I am glad that I made your morning. LOL I myself am wondering how exxactly it s going to unfold. It seems with this story I can only focus chapter by chapter.

Reviewer: Nicksz-wiifey Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/29/09 03:40 am Title: Chapter 3 - Money Talks

I can't wait for the next chapter !!
Seriously I just read Under my skin, A little taste of sin and this one in LESS than a week. I was ADDICTED.
Nick and Alyssa have been tru enough. Poor kiddies should have a GOOD life now without allt he drama. Anyway can't wait for the update !:D

Reviewer: dolphingirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/04/09 04:55 am Title: Chapter 3 - Money Talks

yeah this is so awesome can't wait for the next update so please do so as fast as you can you rok

Author's Response: I'm working on the next chapter now, but it is slow going. I'd like to have it out soon though. Thanks for being paitient.

Reviewer: blueleeryan Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/28/09 08:37 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Money Talks

Awsome job. Loved it and can't wait for more.