Reviewer: Xhex30 Signed
Date: 11/29/10
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
OMG! OMG! OMG!
thatīs the first thing, that ran through my mind!!!! nickīs a dad!!
drugs and alcohol change your personality... nick was so mean and cocky...
and the arm candy thing... was so superficial... like the woman, they talk about! ;) ;)
i felt so sorry for shay! and i still do it! she really really like having sex with him ;) and for him she wasnīt something special... sure it was nice for him... heīs a man... sure he liked it...
i hate his mean and cocky thoughts she donīt deserve this!!
it hurts when the same experiences between two people, didnīt have the same effect at each of them...
itīs a good thing, that shay told the security about the drugs... she has contributed, that nick is now clean!!
do get what i wanted to say?? damn... itīs so difficult for me to say, whatīs on my mind, in english! :S
now is so much time passed and i wonder, what comes next!! iīm pretty sure, that nick is going to search for shay and jake! iīm sure, he wants to be a part of jakobs life!
CAN`T WAIT FOR MORE... you know, that iīm always reading your stories... and every story is amazing... i know, you deserve feedback... but itīs so difficult to write a review and it took me forever...
many greetings from snowy austria!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you for such a great review! Don't worry about your English--I think you did VERY well
Drugs and alcohol DO change a person's personality. Nick's mouth was working independently from a very screwed up brain. :/ Shay DID do Nick a favor, whether he knew it or not.
Nick's mini-me isn't going to get off that man's brain! Doo-nut and all :)